Beng Tie: I Am in Yao Qing, and I Will Give Advice at the Beginning of the Game.

Good reading, good author, I'll be honest, as a Fei Xiao cook, there are very few Fei Xiao single heroine novels that I can read. , Only those few books have been read. The author's writing is really good, and the descriptions are top-notch, and they are more daily, but I think it is normal, because from a normal point of view, immortals cannot live for such a long life, so it is normal to say they are more daily, and I like to read daily, and there are no bad descriptions at the moment. They are all very good. I hope the author can persevere. Now that the college entrance examination is approaching, it is normal for the data to be poor. After the college entrance examination, the data will definitely be much better. The author must persevere.

This book perfectly inherits the advantages of the previous version. The love plot is well written, not abrupt and slow at all, and the protagonist is not brainless. It can be said that he is much smarter than the previous protagonist. The character design is not too broken, and the system is not so cold, or there is any fixed main line. It is very relaxed. Alas, the contrast is quite big anyway. The protagonist of this book has a full IQ value, but his strength is still a little behind. I recommend it to those who like to read daily novels or light novels. I recommend it.

Not bad, the real moving part of this comic is not the gaudy scenes, but the irreversible love. The end of the tragedy of troubled times. From their meeting in the temple to their farewell at the execution ground, Lu Bu and Dong Zhuo were supposed to be masters and servants, father and son, but instead they were portrayed as a series of events. Lu Bu was originally devoted to Dong Zhuo, but due to Diao Chan's intervention and power tilt, he became jealous and resentful. When his adoptive father left, he burst into tears, mixed with love and hate. In the silence after the execution, Lu Bu rode away alone, his back lonely, as if he had left the world behind him. That "General" became an abyss of guilt and longing for him. In the end, this work interprets cold historical events into troubled times. The most miserable mandarin duck legend

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It's also very brutal. [Please update] [Please update] [Please update] I like this soothing narrative style so much that I have diligently read three books by the author. I can only say that each one is very graphic! ! Recommended, super invincible explosion recommended! !

The content of "Getting Together with Feixiao" is more vivid and concrete, and the strategy and form are meaningful. That is to say, the content of the story is not bad. The plot design lacks an exquisite structure, and it feels like it is moving with the waves, resulting in insufficient dramatic tension. Overall can be seen. But if you follow up on the update... After all, the expectations are not high enough.

To be honest, besides being disappointed, I am more angry. I can't say anything. After all, authors have to live, but I have always felt that abandoning a book is really irresponsible to the readers who have been following it. Just like me, I got the news of the suspension of the book when I was looking forward to it. But what I want to say is that if you abandon a book because the profit is too poor, what should you do if the next book encounters the same situation? Should you abandon another book? We will probably The rate will never be seen again, because with this precedent, I have enough reasons to worry about whether the next book will survive. I don't want to encounter such a situation where I have invested my emotions in the work but was let down. Not only the old readers, but also the new readers will definitely have concerns. Alas, there is no way, it is really realistic and helpless, but I still thank the author for presenting us with a good work. I hope you will write better and better in the future. Goodbye Military Advisor

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In fact, the previous ones were pretty good, but unfortunately I ended up reading them. I originally thought I wouldn't write to this level... I read a few books and made a few. I found them interesting at first, but then they became boring... I guess I won't be able to read them anymore. Can anyone recommend me some interesting but unfinished books? I feel like there are very few books like this. Stack a armor: (The above are all personal opinions and are for reference only. There is no intention to insult others. If there are any differences with your opinions, your own opinions shall prevail. Thank you very much for your tolerance) Why is it still 4? I'd better give it 5 stars. I think it's just for the previous plot. But to be honest, the emotional development is too fast. The emotional development speed was normal, but suddenly it accelerated, and it didn't take long for it to go up... It felt a bit too hasty. I guess some readers may just leave like me.

It's good to watch, but some of the content is a little weird. (I don't mean to criticize the author or the novel, I just want to express my feelings Wang Haihan) For example: in the fantasy part, the protagonist already felt a little weird, but fell down because of a distraction. Normally, we have already known that it consumes the past time, which means that when he becomes younger and feels a little weird, he should directly activate his ability instead of thinking about it for a while and fall down directly. Even if he still can't beat him, he can at least resist; Then there are many plots, which can be covered in one sentence or a few sentences. For example, the three-month war was covered in only seven paragraphs, not even counting the follow-up evaluations. It was only four paragraphs, which is really too short. Normally, the three-month war would not be written in 20 chapters, but at least 5 to 10 chapters would be enough. If not, 2 to 3 chapters would be enough. In the end, it was covered in seven paragraphs. There is also the previous protagonist who encountered an assassination. I thought I would use skills to explode. Show it. In terms of strength, the protagonist was mentally prepared. As a result, Fei Xiao suddenly rushed over to kill the assassin, and the protagonist used his skills for the first time. It can be seen that the author did not like or was not good at describing the battle scenes, so he just talked about it in a few sentences. And the love scene was too fast. I felt that I could write about 3 to 6 chapters with Feixiao chasing the protagonist, but it was gone after a few chapters. It was too fast, and most of the daily life was for the protagonist to exercise. In the end, I felt quite sad (´;;`) I can only say that I am looking forward to the author's next book. Come on, author! ^ω^ Also, there are too many scenes in the system. I feel that there is no problem if the heroine is replaced by the system. It even feels like the system is more like the heroine not only giving plug-ins to the protagonist, protecting the protagonist, but also chatting and joking with the protagonist. In addition to the part where the system brings the protagonist together with Fei Xiao, the protagonist has a moderate and long illness (actually, it doesn't feel like it has grown anywhere. It's gone after three chapters. I thought I was going to be ill for ten chapters. It feels like I'm not cured later, like the author has forgotten or is too lazy to write.) The rest of the time is really good for the protagonist (//∇//). I feel a little boring after watching it. The emotional scenes are too fast. The daily scenes are either for the protagonist to exercise or to trigger various tasks like a player. The combat scenes are passed by in two or three strokes.

If you want to know whether this book is good or not, click on my homepage, look at my bookshelf, and see how many books you have read more than 50 or 100 chapters or have finished, so you will know why I gave it five stars. [Smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Are day and night equal? ​​Are the righteous and the sinner equal? ​​If man is born weak, from which god should the weak find peace? O triple-faced soul, please listen to my question. If the power and wealth of the strong can cover up their crimes, who can judge them? If the strong support the weak, it is indeed the foundation of paradise. Who will leave them to mourn in the suffering world? The stars are cruel💔because they never share their heat with everyone🤕only burn for themselves🥶 I will fly high into the sky😍 and become the sun in the sky😤Everyone will grow enthusiastically in my light🥰 And all sins will have no escape😜 Divine power protects the world🧐 Divine power and benevolence🤦Gods😗Here and now😡 You just need to listen quietly🌞 [Order] will always have flaws😟 Respect this decree😌 Cut it off🤓 Memorywill be extinguished in a moment🥺Respect this decree😎cut it off😇Huntingwill only increase the misery😫Respect this decree🤓cut it off😕NothingnessNothing left😭 Respect this purpose😒Cut it off😤ExploreKnowing that it is impossible😢Respect this purpose🤕Cut it off😈I command with my perfect music🗣️Create paradise again❗

It's a good light novel. It hasn't reached the main plot yet, but the ordinary daily life is very good. It's okay.

We must strongly support our dear author [laughing evilly]

It's very beautiful. There are very few female protagonists in Feixiao. It was a big difficulty to write the contrast between the heroic side of the victorious general and his gentleness at the same time, but the author handled it perfectly. I really want a Sanwu general as my wife! ! ! Even if my pelvis is broken, I am still willing... (×

Children, I am Shennong, and I am not poisonous at the moment [laughs]

It's a very good book. The author writes it very well. It's worth reading. I'm guaranteed to be deceived for the rest of my life. It's so awesome, author, come on!

It turns out that the author is an acquaintance. OK, this book is also very good. I must read it several times.

New book, good to read, don't stop updating

If I can watch it normally, I'll give it five stars. This book is really interesting, that is, every time I open the commentary, there is a Lycus. . . . . Is this a little too thunderous? [Covering face] My eyes were also hit n times [Covering face]

I've also read the book "Underworld". Can the author make this book easier? Please

Wow, new book I want to read! [Adoration]

God is behind the original

As if they were forced together by the plot, the plot of these two people now feels more like brother and sister, or even worse than brother and sister.

It's very interesting, but it's a pity that I only found out today that the author has a new book

I really like this book. I'm waiting for you to reproduce.

Among the few female protagonists in Feixiao, she is pretty good.

As a Feixiao chef, there are not many poisonous points in the whole book. The author's style is quite good, and the relationship with Feixiao will not progress too fast. The most important thing is that there is a single female protagonist and no harem [please update]

A very good book, it's a pity