Collapse of Iron: MC God of Creation Crashes into Teyvat at the Beginning

The author is simply not good enough. This novel is so good that it is not good enough to read at all. You must keep it as it is now and don't make any cliché plots. Also, I would like to ask, is there a female protagonist for the protagonist? I feel that it is best for MC protagonists to have no female protagonists, as this is the best way to watch. [Think]

Advantages: The beginning of the book is okay, suitable for people who don't know much about MC, Yuan, and Tie. Disadvantages: There are some mistakes in reading the book review of MC. Yuan and Tie were separated very early, at least last year, and they are different system universes. The protagonist is facing the character's state. Substituting the role will not be toxic, but readers usually become the protagonist when they are substituted. In addition, the abyss is the sum of Teyvat's unchosen fate. The author is not as good at Yuan and Tie as I am a cloud player. Watch a few more videos and you will know that you don't need to read the text. More points from the author I can't stand it anymore, so I withdrew first. Let's talk about the problem. The original and iron are cut. Beng San and iron are also constantly eating the back of the book. They can't connect at all. It is possible to step in, but with her character, it is impossible for Greed to leave. From the original to the iron, she crosses the universe and collapses the three quantum seas. She is a human being. Did you know that the author wrote Duoyun like this? If this is the Eden homogeneous body, breeding can rely on blessings, and Greed cannot step into it. Too cloudy

I won't give a bad review either, but what's the point of those pictures you wrote? Although it's very pitiful, I write wherever I dream. I really can't stand it any longer. I probably haven't even written an outline yet. I'll just write whatever I dream about. I'll leave it at that and make bad jokes. I can't, I'm naked alone.

The role of Teyvat was only given to a few Tianli Shadow and Kong Ying as NPCs. After reading the introduction, I thought they were farming style, but ended up going to do a live broadcast with Huanxi to explore the void, although it was with Bengtie. But the people who came probably saw that all the characters in Genshin Impact are gone and the main character has not been repaired, so there must be a lot of people leaving. However, the ninth chapter that everyone commented on, I personally think it is okay and not toxic. After all, it blew up the world and shook the egg yolks away. An apology is considered too light.

I read more than 20 chapters. At least the 20 or so photos I saw in this section are all of high quality. Some people say that in Chapter 9, the protagonist humbly apologized to the victim. I can't understand what those people are thinking about this. You played with a bomb and blew up someone's house. Not only did you not apologize, you even arrogantly said that you deserved to be bombed. This is what those who gave Chapter 9 a low score thought. Come on, author, I support you.

It's very interesting to me. Don't look at what a lot of people said about Chapter 9. You smashed their whole world. Even from a normal human perspective, you should apologize. Don't tell me that the protagonist is so powerful and doesn't need to apologize. If that's what you think, you can leave. This is not the place you should come. Take your time and don't send me away~ The author's idea is to write about the protagonist's invincible strength and human growth. He has already started the MC creation mode directly. The live broadcast in the early stage that seemed a little off-topic was also to show his strength to the whole universe. At least in the future, no matter where he goes, he will no longer need to show his strength frequently. I'm not sure if it will be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists at the moment, but I can see the criteria for choosing a female protagonist for the protagonist, which is the type that has the undertone of loneliness in the background.

See Chapter 43. This is an invincible article. The protagonist is the creator god in MC, or he has the same ability as the original MC creation mode. Based on the fact that the universe is too vast, he created a continent and wanted to drive around on that continent. After accidentally smashing Tiyvat, Sora and Ying, with the help of four shadows, carried Tiyvat's seeds and successfully escaped. However, the shadow representing death broke off in order to resist the abyss, and was successfully saved by the protagonist. There won't be much of a scene later on, it just feels like a small episode, but it's only about 40 pictures now, so it's not a big problem. Later, due to some reasons, the protagonist accidentally came to the place between trees and sea, and almost lost himself. He seemed to have re-enacted the classic scene of the god Ahaden, but what I woke him up was not the cry of a baby, but the laughter of Aha. Now, two groups of people form a team to explore the void. Well, they just do the whole thing out of pure curiosity. And broadcast live to the vast universe, focusing on an idle fart. Now the protagonist has been searching inside for several years, trying to find the original light, which represents the concept of existence. Although I don't know where he got the information from.

I like this style. I'm not looking for a harem very brainlessly, at least not yet. However, the first ten or twenty chapters I feel are a bit fragmented. One chapter is a world, and there is no continuity. I am still fighting monsters, and the next chapter immediately jumps to another place. Except for this, the others are fine. Recommended I can still rely on the names of Genshin Impact and Bentie MC in the front, but the writing in the back is getting more and more messy. . . The protagonist has a very low sense of existence. He appears once in four or five chapters and then starts to write other places. Moreover, the beginning and end of each plot are very hasty. Hasty beginning, hasty ending. The title of your novel is the so-called Blast of Teyvat. Then the plot after the collision and explosion basically has nothing to do with Teyvat. And the plot of Iron Break is quite inexplicable. I started to think that a multi-world novel with more characters might be more interesting. But as a result, the protagonist basically has no sense of existence. If I want to see the characters, I will come to this novel specifically to read it? There is very little interaction between the protagonist and other characters. Basically, it's all dialogue with other characters.

I have seen the latest 59 chapters. To be honest, it's okay. The only thing I personally think is problematic is the two short stories in the middle of Xiaoha's live broadcast! I was really confused when I saw it there! Let's talk about Chapter 9 as mentioned by some readers who gave bad reviews in the book review section. To be honest, I feel it's pretty good! After all, the protagonist is a human being, and it is absolutely impossible for the protagonist to treat these pre-travel game characters the same as the villagers in Minecraft. After all, the villagers are created by the protagonist using codes, just like some people's ant pets. Our attitude towards these ants will definitely have some shadow of divinity! But it's hard to have a condescending attitude towards these game characters, unless you are like Masaki Keigo in Tikkari. As soon as you gain strength, you immediately start to float. Do you feel like a god? ? Don't you people really think that you are gods if you have power? ?

Chapter 9 I'm here, I'm sorry, I laughed and I'm leaving now [laughing evilly] The writing is okay, but the content is not very attractive. I'll give it 4 stars.

It's a really good book. The protagonist has near-invincible strength but still remains humble and never gets lost. He won't do anything disgusting based on his strength. He has a golden spirit. [Praise]

The part about nothingness means that the power of nothingness is just a way out for the protagonist. But his mental damage is a special attack on the protagonist. After all, the protagonist has the mentality of an ordinary person after time travel, not the mentality of a god.

Nothingness is just a buffer for the protagonist!

Give yourself a five-star rating secretly, no one will notice [laughing]

There are sixty-one chapters. The protagonist is currently invincible. After destroying Teyvat at the beginning, he was resurrected in the next few dozen chapters. After the resurrection, several gods gathered together to thank each other and then disappeared. It felt boring. Mainly because I saw too many fan stories to make up for regrets, but it was still very interesting. The one star missing is the single female protagonist Silk. I still like more or none. If there are multiple girls, can you not use CP or send girls? I won't say single or none.

When the balance of the universe is broken, the fateful showdown has quietly come, ghost stars show their magical powers in the sky, and the thunder and the world are filled with ashes. The domineering and famous demeanor is here, and my name is Jing Lei Kui! ——Thunder Star Soul. The ultimate life-stealer who condenses the origin of life and feeds on the soul of life. He is the most powerful dark master who is above all life and controls the soul and reincarnation. ————The ultimate life soul binder. Looking at this body, he is not a body of flesh and blood, but the incarnation of the hardest material in the universe, the true body of the furnace of the universe. He is invincible in all ways and determines the universe. He ignites the heavens to determine the will of war. The immortal myth is the god of war - the ultimate Adamant alloy god of war. With stars as blades and harmony as armor, my will is immortal, the stars are immortal, I am invincible, and I am the only one in the world. ——The will of the galaxy. When the collapse of the galaxy is the starting point, when annihilation becomes the background of the universe, he was born from the art of resonance of billions of stars, and came across the border with the scythe to cut off the galaxy of the universe. When the miracle is destroyed, it is the moment of his arrival. The latitude barrier is in the endless world, and nothingness and existence will be rewritten because of his arrival. This is not accidental, but the inevitable reincarnation of the universe and all things in the universe, the end of the stars, the terminator of the universe, and the annihilator of existence. ————Star Death When the foundation of the universe begins to tremble, when the universe and even everything withers and ends. Then he will appear. Three poems cover the sky and darken the starlight, everything withers and panics, eventually the storm surges, everything is meaningless. ——Withering Silla.

Please comment responsibly, point out poisonous points and improvement plans. I think the subject matter is novel, but Teyvat is too hasty and Bengtie can still be watched. As for the villagers in front of the MC, they are a bit unflattering. If I don't write about them later, then this is completely unintelligible. I hope more MC and Teyvat will be updated, and they should not just be used as background boards.

It's pretty good. It's pretty good-looking and more everyday. I've read a lot of Wudi articles, so it's pretty good to read this one.

First of all, let's talk about the apology in Chapter 9. The protagonist's mentality has not changed since then and he is still a god with normal views. The part where he insists on choking his neck is actually like a normal interaction between friends. At present, the protagonist himself is a happy-go-lucky person with invincible power and normal views. It should be a coming-of-age story for everyone.

At first I came here because of the title, but the more I read, the more interesting it became. [Adoration] The male protagonist is very much like a normal person, and the character's emotional portrayal is also very interesting. [Laughing evilly] The content is also quite good [Like], so I really beg you, the author, please don't stop updating! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

Will you add mods in the future? I will keep this book first and add a bookshelf

The male protagonist is a person with great power, not a god For the creatures created by the male protagonist, he is indeed a god. He will not be angry because of the insignificant things the creatures he created do to him. He will only find it interesting because he does not care. I quite like that feeling of being aloof and not caring. Until Teyvat was smashed by him, as a god, it apologized, no problem, but that kind of humble apology and begging for forgiveness, I couldn't stand it, but this is the character of the protagonist, so I can't comment on it I also don't understand the rest of the plot. Why does it suddenly jump to the adventures of the protagonist of Genshin Impact in other worlds? I can't understand it. Maybe there will be an explanation later, but I can't stand it anymore. This is probably my own understanding of the first dozen chapters

There are some flaws, but they are not considered poisonous, but overall they are pretty good and very healing. As for those who gave low scores before, I can only say that everyone has their own preferences. If you don't like this type of movie, let it go. The author should be able to reach about eight points if he follows the previous rhythm.

The subject matter is quite novel and very interesting. Even the first four chapters are quite interesting, but a little lacking.

The plot is smooth, the writing is natural, and the characters are perfect. It's a super treasure [Blow Kiss]

Well, it didn't take long to read it, and the content is quite interesting. Anyway, it's more to my liking. Well, it happens to be my favorite MC. I've always wanted to create my own creations, but I don't have the imagination and ideas, so I saw this author's book, which is more to my liking. I really invite you all to enjoy it.

If you are full of faintness, you must be full of faintness. I can't be the only one naked🤓

This book is so beautiful. I also like the character of the main character. It's great. Come on, author. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's a bit beyond imagination, but it's beautiful, really beautiful [laughing and crying]

Author, how long can you write? I will save it for when it exceeds 100 chapters.