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This score is well deserved. It is the author's ability to write a book written by an iron man that has the same flavor as a palace battle story written by a woman. I feel that the author would be the kind of person who traveled to ancient times and became an emperor, and would treat harem battles as a drama about chasing palaces for fun.

"About me, a diaosi, who traveled to medieval Europe and became a creator, and then lived with my creations as equals and fell in love." It looks so good, everyone loves it😋

Raise Western fantasy wives in the Middle Ages and become Pokémon masters! Collection of different types of wives, so awesome

It looks good, keep it up, it should get a rating of 9 or above There are too many daily pages, the male protagonist has no ambition, and the synthesis formula is very slow. Even if I show a few failed ones, it feels like I have only synthesized less than ten in a few months, including the failed ones, and the character of the elf has collapsed. Everything else is fine. If the elf still can't tell the difference between the big and small kings, this one can be abandoned.

It's pretty good. It would be more intuitive if the plot were divided into volumes. Each volume has one main heroine, or there can be more than one, to avoid having some become transparent later on. There are also road trips, staying in one place all the time, some things such as obtaining materials, the girl's background, etc. May be difficult to write.

Not bad, the idea is quite good, the creator of myths and legends in the middle ages without magic. This is also an online article that makes people miss Angel E Club after reading it. The female characters I specifically selected will probably be on the must-try list of Western Fantasy. There are currently three of them, and there are also mass-produced miscellaneous soldiers. I am curious about the follow-up development. The elf is basically a wandering wild child, which is not very lovable, but this is also its personality. Other minor problems are not considered serious problems for the time being. Oh my god, the score is still for boxing, so change it back to 5 points ### Let's deduct 1 point. There are two obvious traces of AI that have not been proofread. One is the unicorn shadow clone in the latest chapter, and the other is the inconsistency when the angel enters the village to execute the order. I'm not against AI, but writers still have to be careful

The quality of the content is quite good. The setting is medieval Europe, a world without extraordinary powers. The second heroine is well portrayed. The problem with the first one lies in the character setting. Rather than being an orphan who grew up in the church, it is more like a spoiled and possessive young lady. But overall it is good. As long as she is not so violent and gives the first heroine a little more tolerance, it will be fine. If the quality can be maintained, it will be a book that can be continued.

So far it's very good to watch, and I hope it gets better and better. Also, can you please stop calling the male lead the boss? It's too dramatic!

I really like this sense of daily life. The protagonist is slowly creating things. It is not like other books about creating monsters that bring chaos to the world. There is a kind of plain beauty.

The writing style is average, the plot is not confusing, the characters are unique, the subject matter is not cliché, and there are occasionally a few humorous words in the normal and serious text. Overall, it is a very good book. I hope to continue to work hard and do better.

Is the character of Elf based on the real people around the author🤔

It is a behind-the-scenes farming story of a Western fantasy with a relatively novel theme. I have read 50 chapters so far. The overall plot is quite smooth and the writing is acceptable. Although the character creation has some flaws, it is generally reasonable. The author is good at accepting readers' suggestions, which is very good. At present, there are some shortcomings, which are mentioned for the author's reference. Everything is just my personal opinion. First of all, I think a more serious issue is whether the author has deeply considered the overall structure and structure of the work. Is the positioning of the book clear? Male channel or female channel? What does the overall style tend to be? What's the main cool thing about it? Is the main plot development clear? How to arrange the writing context? Plot-oriented or character-oriented? Is the logical structure reasonable? Is the characterization role clear? I think these issues are the key to writing a good work. Grasp the general direction of the work well so that the rhythm will not be disordered. In fact, small flaws in logic or plot will not affect the overall situation too much. This book tells the story of the protagonist's daily life in the magic-free Middle Ages, creating mythical creatures, developing a harem, and living in seclusion and farming. The subject matter is relatively novel, with various elements such as the Middle Ages/mythology/harem/farming mixed in. Overall, it is quite attractive. However, the author's writing skills are obviously difficult to control such a complex framework, which leads to some structural problems, which in turn has a relatively obvious negative impact. The first thing I want to say is that the author's overall positioning of the book is not clear enough. In terms of subject matter, he chose a fantasy medieval theme dominated by mystery and epic feeling. What is cool is the collision between the myth of the only method and the magic-free feudal medieval period. The way to create a mythical harem is also obviously based on male porn. In fact, there is no problem with these. The problem is that the author does not grasp the importance of it well enough. There are problems such as unclear direction, unclear plot, boring character creation, male-focused subject matter but female-focused writing style, etc. If you want to use the creation of gods/behind the scenes/revival of myths as the main structure and excitement, then the plot context and character creation should serve this big theme. It is also necessary to focus on rendering the "mythical sense" and "epic sense", emphasizing and unfolding the collision between the protagonist's only myth and the demon-free feudalism, so as to build plot conflicts and character creation, and strengthen the readers' enjoyment of "ascending to the gods". In fact, we can also see the author's characterization in this aspect, but it is too thin and conflicting. For example, although the protagonist explores extraordinary power, his perspective is more focused on daily life, the creation of mythical creatures does not have a "mythical sense", the cost of mythology is too low, the mythical characters are templated and superficially described and compete for favor, the extraordinary system is vague and the protagonist has no obvious construction thinking, and there is no sense of epicness. As a result, these elements are actually more of a foil. At present, it seems that the author is actually oriented to the daily life of farming, and the harem and mythology are the highlights or highlights. But in fact, this writing method itself has no advantages, and may even waste the subject matter of this book. Moreover, it is difficult to write well in daily writing. The core of daily writing is to "incorporate life into words", and the overall focus is on characters. How to create cute characters and how to give them arcs and breathing are all a test of writing skills. It can be seen that the author really wants to portray delicate and vivid characters, and the character's personality is very heavy, but this kind of shaping is a bit empty. This emptiness is not a emptiness in shaping, but a emptiness in structure. That is to say, these shapings have no obvious effect on the overall work. They can neither advance the plot nor truly deeply shape the character story. They exist more like "private goods". To be harsh, many of the deliberate shapings are directly deleted, which has no impact on the plot or the core of the article. This is why it is said that the author writes from a male perspective but from a female perspective. In fact, it's not that you can't write delicate characters, it's just that there is a problem with the author's description method. The large-scale marginal descriptions and struggles for favor in the book are formally constructed from a male perspective, but he wants to carry out in-depth character construction and give the characters real warmth. And the soul, which is very conflicting in itself, not to mention the author's inability to control the writing, and the characters' stories are superficial, which further aggravates the sense of confusion, resulting in little development of the plot and poor character development. This is also an important reason why I feel a little pity after reading Chapter 50. Regardless of the audience and the positioning of the work, if the author really wants to focus on daily life and characters, then he needs to put more effort into the characters. The characters need stories and arcs, they need to be portrayed with depth, ups and downs and emotions, and they need to be three-dimensional to stand up from the text. Regarding the character portrayal in the book, frankly speaking, I can't even describe what kind of person the protagonist is now. The psychological description of the protagonist and supporting characters is close to nothing. This undoubtedly makes it difficult to portray the characters, and they only appear flat and labelled. Elena's character is heavily emphasized, and her character is clearly expressed but difficult to control. The author tried very hard to express Elena's "jealousy", but failed to grasp that the core behind "jealousy" is "uneasiness", and even for Elena, it should be "a sense of fragmentation". Although there is a description in Chapter 49, it is obvious that too much emphasis is placed on jealousy, and there is not much reflection of the deep struggle and fear behind it, causing readers to not buy it and only think that she is savage. What's more, there are too many marginal descriptions and deliberate descriptions, which makes it difficult for readers to deeply understand the characters. Generally speaking, the suggestion is to be plot-oriented, that is, to focus on the confrontation and collision between the protagonist's mythology and the feudal Middle Ages as the main plot line, and to promote the plot and shape the characters around this main line. The harem can exist as another part of the fun, which is more reasonable and in line with the tomato aesthetic. I'll give you some personal opinions on how to do it specifically, how to focus on the main line? In terms of plot, the protagonist needs to always be clear about what he needs to do, what he is doing, and what he will do, and add plot and conflict between the goal and its realization. In terms of characters, characters can be deeply shaped, but they need to pay attention to the length and weight, and they must not affect the main line. They must be able to grasp the big things right and wrong, have a goal in mind (for example, for the protagonist) and subconsciously influence the behavior, rather than being a tool person on the sidelines. In terms of atmosphere, make good use of stand-ins to create a "mythical sense" and a strong character, and exaggerate the confrontation between the protagonist's power and the feudal world. To sum up, these are some personal views on this work. If the author can sort out the structural framework of the work in time, and if possible, make some optimizations to the previous chapters, I think it will be a good work. Come on.

It's really good. I'm looking forward to the following plots, especially the protagonist who creates the mythological system. It must be very exciting. I have read a few of them, especially "Low Latitude World" and "I Am God". I really like this series of novels. The protagonist in this book is at least more humane, and I can accept it if I have a harem. If I don't want to be God like the previous two books, it is also very cool to be Zeus.

It's very interesting, and the author listened to the advice and made changes. It's very good. I haven't seen such an interesting western fantasy for a long time. I'll give it a good gift when the time comes. I have read Chapter 51. The elf is a little disgusted at the end. I quickly asked him to change it and recommended it. By then, many people will read it and they will stop reading it.

There are many conflicts in writing, either due to the author's carelessness or the use of AI to amplify the writing. The whole writing is okay, there are no too stupid scenes, and the plot progresses normally, neither too fast nor too slow. The author can consider adding future talk at the end of each chapter, and appropriately insert some so-called future classics to describe the future achievements of the protagonist group. There is also another question, what is the follow-up development of the main plot? If you still stay in this remote country for the next two hundred chapters, then it is run by AI [Chigua] At present, it can be confirmed that this book was run using AI. Various quantifiers and attributives are missing, and the plot is incoherent in some places. In addition, the inexplicable palace fights and the protagonist's pseudo-human reaction are very similar to those who run away from the tavern, which is the worst kind. Author, if you want to make money, just say so. Don't use AI to run three chapters every day.

So far, the plot has no bad points, and the interaction between the female characters is also very interesting. The protagonist develops his own powers and pretends to be a ghost. The description is also very natural. The only shortcoming is that the author cannot update 100,000 words a day.

Good news, kids! ! ! Tomato actually has such a down-to-earth Western fantasy novel that is good at describing details and daily reality, which is really beyond my expectation. The shortcoming that cannot be ignored is that the content is currently too little - rich details mean that the writing speed is slow and the narrative rhythm is elongated; I personally like it very much and have been looking for such light-hearted fantasy novels that enhance the sense of immersion and reality, but maybe not everyone will like it? Anyway, for me, there is nothing wrong with it, it is a fairy product [admiration]

First of all, I want to evaluate it truly and objectively. I really can't give it five stars. In my opinion, it should be around 8.1. The subject matter of this novel is excellent and very fascinating. However, some of the things the author wrote are really bad, and they are bad things about a good subject. The main problem is not the writing style, the characters are somewhat divorced from the nature of "people". The characters are too flat, and there are some plots where the left and right brains are fighting each other. These are also shortcomings that need to be corrected. After careful consideration, the author should bring himself into it, observe more similar characters, and not make assumptions about the characters. Art comes from life. If these are corrected, this book will definitely be read by more than 100,000 people, at least double that. Finally, I hope that progress can be seen in this book, and I wish the author's writing power will become stronger and stronger [Like]

First of all, I personally like the setting of being alone. Secondly, the protagonist does not have childish, startled, or emotional psychological activities. Finally, the author is very good at using dialogue to highlight the atmosphere and shape the characters. Maybe it is a female author. The description of women is very delicate and full of personality, but it is too long. Dozens of chapters are written about the harem in the Legend of Zhen Huan. The main plot and power description become the supporting roles of palace fights. As a farm rat who likes farming, I really can't read it.

Most likely it's a harem novel, I personally quite like this genre

The subject matter is very good, the elf needs to be trained (not necessary, don't deprive her), don't have a harem just for the sake of a harem (it's okay now), let's change it slowly. . .

The later chapters have gradually deviated from the theme, especially some details are not yet clear, and the number of viewers has been declining. If this continues, the book may not be updated.

Alas, you all misread this. This is actually a Warhammer fanfic. The elf in it is the first Shouguizi. He has been with the Creator's love for several months. It's a pity that the return of the angel caused part of his love to be taken away. But don't panic, one day in the future, the world will burn again. The elf led more than half of the creation to launch the elf birthday celebration, and the elf came to the door of the Garden of Eden. That angel was guarding the gate of the Garden of Eden. (Unfortunately, the final ending still turned into an angel sauce) Shouguizi, centaur, golden ring. Those who like medieval warhammers are in luck, brothers.

It's okay, I still have to watch the direction of the movie, I really like the elf's behavior, but if it doesn't have a single heroine in the movie, forget it. There can be competition for favor, but there can only be one female protagonist, and the male protagonist cannot mess around.

This is the first time I have seen the three labels of "Only My Law", "Creation" and "Rich Humanity" in the same book. There are no similar books for comparison, and it suits my taste very well, so I gave this book 10 points. My grading criteria: A book starts with 5 points Like the tags "Only one's own method" and "Not a brainless harem", +2 points The character description is detailed and three-dimensional; the protagonist has no character flaws; there is no brainless villain; +3 points

This book is absolutely popular haha, the content is very different world elements, but the background of the big world in the early stage is not very clear, such as the world map of country distribution, etc., It may be unlocked slowly in the later stage. The elements of another world are very strong, and the current integration of elements is also good haha The author needs to work hard [I learned it]

Being able to write an elf heroine like this is a skill

The first 15 chapters written by the author are good, I feel it. I originally wanted to give it 5 stars, but when I came in, I saw that the previous people said that they were too competitive and jealous. Eight of the ten comments were like this. It seems that it was really good, but kids, the early stage is still very interesting.

It's a very novel theme, and the plot is good. The only drawback may be that there are a lot of scenes of the three women under his control being jealous, but I personally can accept it. After the elf reaches the second level, there will be fewer such scenes.

If you can't control the harem, don't open it. It's not like the male protagonist doesn't have the strength to control it.