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Very delicate writing style, fast pace in the early stage; Xinyi's novel has a theme that has never appeared in Professor of Dark Arts. The words inside are plain, but very touching. The sentence "if you run away, you lose" touched me deeply. This is my first time to evaluate a novel. I hope this book can be seen by more people and get better and better.

The writing is very delicate, the plot is coherent, and the protagonist is well portrayed. In order to find his way home, he can travel all over the place and try his best to avoid fetters, but the children at Hogwarts are changing him. The article has a faint sense of sadness. At the end of the story, will you choose to return to the home you have cared about for many years, or stay in this world with many fetters? It's very interesting, thank you to the author [Send heartfelt thanks]

I came across the latest chapter and finished it in one night. So far, this book is the best and most touching of all the Harry Potter fanfics I have read. It has a light, yet calm and relaxing feel to it, making it very comfortable to read. I think this book is very suitable for late at night. After taking a shower and drying your body, sit on the bed and lean on the pillow, and put a glass of warm milk next to it. When you are tired, drink the milk and lie down directly to sleep.

Excluding details such as the wrong timeline, the complete settlement of the Sorcerer's Stone unit is a good novel. The story frame is innovative, about a man who wants to go home. I never wanted to touch too much on the cause and effect to the subsequent story. But I'm a little worried that the ending will fall apart. Later, when he returned home, he restored his identity as a newborn baby. So what does the timeline of 30 years living in Harry's time count?

Encouraging, the setting is good, but some small plots have been changed, which does not affect the context structure. For those who have not read the original work, it will feel smoother and smoother. It would be better if the writing is more detailed. My plot is a bit messy, and many people's language is as dead as the protagonist's, with no emotions. It was okay at first, but it gets more and more annoying as I watch it later. Can't I add some facial expressions or other details to describe the characters? [Pout]

The male protagonist's character is so exciting

Quite an interesting setting

Not bad, keep up the good work, author, I like this book very much

You can't give full stars, you can't be invincible, you can't be invincible, you have to give in everywhere.

Oh ho ho! It feels very interesting.

Okay, the chapters about returning to China are very interesting. It doesn't make sense, it's so beautiful but the rating is so low

The structure is clear and the content is exciting. Worth reading.

This book is really good to read. I was a little drawn into the love story of the Three Countrysides. The emotions are very delicate.

It is simply a high-quality novel. This is a normal time-traveler with a family. It must be very good. It is tear-jerking. It is really good.

My favorite hp fanfic I've ever seen, please update soon

Great book, light writing and eloquent words I'm really looking forward to the ending. I'm curious about what I remember over and over again. It feels like the protagonist is looking for a home.