What Do You Mean, Little Junior Brother, Are You Really Cultivating Immortality?

A new reader and a long-time fan, objectively speaking, it's really good! Okay, the new book is also very good. The name of the protagonist is different from the previous books. This one also said that there will be no linkage. I guess the old thief wants to have a new start🤔, which is good! Although there are only a few chapters updated, it is still very interesting! The design of Global High Martial Arts and Dynasty is so novel! The protagonist's alternative skill of "cultivating immortality" is also great! It feels like two world views overlap ^_^ I hope the old thief will continue to do so and give me some suggestions: Try not to patch (no), the character settings will not collapse, the main line will be focused, and the plot will be the main focus... I sincerely hope that Lao Zei's new book will be a hit, and it's best to have an anime or something (this is what I think about every book) Come on, old thief👏, be happy, you deserve it [laughing evilly]

Ah? Yun Duo, da da da da da, I really want to play Genshin Impact, Yun Yuan Shen Le Le Le Le, watch all the wonderful things, Yun Yuan Shen, oooooooooo, I really want to play Genshin Impact, Yun Yuan Shen, my friends are already in place to play Genshin Impact, Yun Duo Genshin Impact! Ahhhhhhhh, I really want to play Genshin Impact Yun Yuanshen, hahahahahaha, let's play Genshin Impact together, Yun Yuanshen, I think about it so much, I want to play Genshin Impact web cloud, low power consumption, no distortion, WiFi network cable, you can come and go at 60 frames, enter Yun Shen God This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your Brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! When Zihan fought with Fan in order to win the spot for the West Meridian, Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. However, he was tempted by foreign persimmons on the way. Kazuma Fuji became angry and went to another world to conquer the three continents with Doraemon, and finally became the plot of Emperor Yan. How to transport grain and grass during the Northern Expedition on the difficult and dangerous Shu Road It consumes national power. It is better to imitate the Five Tigers of Soochow. Only one of them is left. Who dares to be the vanguard of the Northern Expedition? Why not inherit the legacy of the late emperor? Me!! Wei Yan can only advance but not retreat!!! If the Wei invaders take one hundred thousand Yan Yan as their master and annihilate them all, Cao Cao's thieves can attack the whole country. Yan can also resist retreat with all his strength and defeat the enemy for his master. King! Why break the Ultra Key? : It doesn't matter if the key is broken, look at it, is it still an Astra? : Your Majesty, why did you turn Astra into a Babar planet? The old duel arena is difficult and dangerous, how can Anbu advance to the next level? It's better to imitate youth and imitate youth. There is only one person left in the Great Yin. Who dares to be a mad dog and bite him? Why not! Having inherited the legacy of Izuna, how can I not move forward? I, Ma Ze, Only forward and never retreat!!! If 3000 people are defeated by three Yins in a round, Madara should be wiped out by the master. Even if the underworld brings the black Zetsu to attack, Madara can also resist with all his strength to defeat the enemy for the master. Like a fish drinking water, Madara is here! How dare you! After reading this book, I felt that ants were walking on the ground, and elephants could not be eaten after that, because Lu Bu was sweeping the army with ak, Sun Wukong just ate a banana, Diao Chan was caught by Cao Cao, Lu Bu and Dong Zhuo were together, the author was The reader got pregnant. In the end, Beliatu defeated Ultra's father with the ultimate combat instrument and took back Xiao Wu. After Tang San found out, Diga took it away and Gatlin chased him, causing an ant to be trampled to death, triggering an outbreak of the zombie virus. I also finished eating it. Apple, threw the core of the apple to Mount Everest, angered a giant beast, cooked me a barbecue, and said that lions cannot eat it, so Qin Shi Huang Tu was at the entrance of the mausoleum, using a sister control and a 61 bomb holder to fight with archaeologists for several years, especially It describes how the slime transformed Lu Bu fought for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong Q for hundreds of rounds in the Demon God War. However, Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have been inevitable. It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. But I am more concerned about what Horus said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, you are all made of bones. Don't show off in front of you, Brother Lu. Do you know how Archangel-chan is made? All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are also very good [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

A new book from an old thief! Looking forward to it! This time the main character seems to be writing a book of his own. Wang Jie's "One Straight One" [Shy], the subject matter is very novel, and it is still very old-fashioned style. It is very humorous and interesting and makes me laugh out loud. I am anxiously waiting for the update.

1. This book has elegant diction and profound meaning. It is helpful to open the book, and to think about it after reading it. It is an excellent work. 2. His words are close to the point and the purpose is far away. Every word is precious. Reading it is like drinking mellow wine, with endless aftertaste. 3. The chapters are rigorous, insightful, inspiring, and beneficial to the mind. It can be called a classic. 4. The writing is simple but full of meaning, the words are simple but the emotions are sincere, and you will never tire of reading it. It is truly a superior work.

I'm just a stranger, I have one thing to say, I'm neither a fan nor a fan, I think this book is very nice I have read it carefully and seriously. So far, I personally feel that the plot is very attractive. Come on, old thief, it is a good read and I love to read it. By the way, this comment is a precise 63 words including punctuation.

A novel with a novel theme, I'll keep it in my collection and read it again Too many modifiers like "stern and clear" are used, which makes reading tired. In addition, the plot connection is far-fetched and can only be viewed briefly.

True and pure passerby, reasonable guest, because this book has become a fan It's a very nice and interesting book. The personality of the protagonist and the supporting characters are well expressed. It can be seen that it has the personal characteristics of the old thief. I have finished reading it seriously!

A pure passerby, I just got off the lost train and the road turned pink. The pace of the new book is very good. I basically read it with a smile. The jokes are interspersed very well. The misunderstandings caused by the collision of different systems and world views are so interesting. Those who like this kind of book will like it very much. Looking forward to the follow-up plot, wish it a great success

It has been serious and can't help laughing an average of 63 times per chapter. The writing style is as always, light and entertaining. The protagonist is very serious [laughing] The strength and weakness are all based on the imagination of others. The plot is handled in a weird and reasonable way, with a strong sense of substitution. If you think about it with the logic in the text, you will find that it is very reasonable (appreciation). However, the author is a master of writing books. The first one stood up, the second one fell off the street, the third one both stood up, and the fourth one fell off the street... This fifth book should probably be able to stand up, right? I believe in Lao Zei's joyful writing style. When I think back to the introduction on Lao Zei's homepage: "Happiness, you are worth it," I know that the author has a lot of fun writing books [laughing]

The logic is smooth, the content is compact, the IQ is online, and the author is slow to update Fire and electricity are strong, and anthracite adds another layer Water and electricity are soft, and the Three Gorges has a unique flavor Wind, electricity and fog vary from place to place Nuclear power is stable, and everything is hidden in the silent place The sun is warm, but the earth and the sun are far away and a little thin Although three-phase electricity is ordinary, its potential has three pillars and is more stable.

It looks great, it's fun to play with and the characters are abstract but thoughtful. . This is rare, such as that Martial Saint. I thought he was a pure villain, but I didn't expect that he would have to respect his superiors and humiliate his subordinates. This setting seemed quite interesting. It is expected that the protagonist will be transformed into Emperor Ruitian to suppress everything.

All the way from Ye Bai (speaking of which, this book is also the first book I have read in full on Tomato, what a fate), I feel that the old thief is becoming more and more mature in writing books. He is an author who is very good at using settings, using clues and connections to advance the story, and then using semi-serious and semi-irregular ways to fill in the story. In this book, his skills have reached a new level. Many characters are stereotyped but not rigid, which makes them more impressive. Worth a look. Worth a laugh. As for 63 characters? Do I have to be strict too? I've caught up to the latest, and after reading the whole chapter, I found that the chapter I was more dissatisfied with was actually the part where I helped Fifth Senior Sister give birth to Nezha. The pace was a little slow, but this part didn't lead to anything very special. Except for the introduction of Huangjue Temple and Yao Guang (laughing), there are no very significant results. In fact, it's not completely bad, I just feel that the rhythm is inappropriate and it is inappropriate to appear at this time point. There are some opinions whether it is before or after the release. There are other reasons for leading to Huangjue Temple and Tianxia Xing. But it's just a personal feeling. If an old thief sees this, just take it as a census and don't take it too seriously.

It's so good, so good. I usually only read books without giving stars, but this time I really fell in love with this book. I was so excited that I had to give it five stars to vent my emotions! The worldview is also very novel and very logical. The background is obviously a bit dark, but the author's humor and the characters' daily life balance this out very well. There is a special sense of contrast, which is very attractive! I rarely see dark backgrounds... The characters of Second Senior Brother and Director Xiao are really funny and fun... Apart from the protagonist, I like Director Xiao the most now, the leader who is verbally and physically upright! The only drawback is that it is too short, I hope the author will update it soon! Ps: I don't know if there will be a female protagonist in the later stage, but currently there is no girl close to me (but even if there is a female protagonist in the later stage, I will definitely continue to pursue it, as long as it is not good in the later stage~)

I have read it carefully and seriously. So far, I personally feel that the plot is very attractive. Come on, old thief, it is a good read and I love to read it. By the way, this comment is a precise 63 words including punctuation. Okay, this is so funny, the old thief is still very good at writing, and it blends well with the memes, eh [laughing evilly]

Old thief, please calm down. Your writing skills are really impressive! ! ! Read it with your heart, this book is really well written! The protagonist is well portrayed and the story is interesting!

I have read a few of Lao Zei's books, and I have always felt that what Lao Zei writes is more to my liking. The new works also have a consistent style. You can recognize Lao Zei from the text without looking at the author's name [face covering]. The wonderful and ingenious ideas, characters and sudden handsomeness are also the advantages that I like. Not lost at all, but some shortcomings have also been inherited. For example, the story line problem that is particularly prominent in Jiang Bai's book gives people the feeling of writing wherever they think. There are too many branch lines outside the main line, and the arrangement of most branch lines is quite abrupt. In the end, the reading experience is too fragmented. , There is a feeling that this novel is a long story composed of many short stories. There is also a nonsensical plot to cover up logical problems. I personally don't care about this (I think it's just for the whimsical ideas [laughs]), but it is probably a bad point in online articles. Speaking of writing, I don't care. I think Thief's writing style is pretty good in Tomato, not very amazing, but his control over words is still worthy of the title of novel writer, and he can occasionally produce a few magical chapters (the chapters of Xiaoyaoyou in SSS are really impressive, and the diary of Immortal Cultivation in the sequence "Lingli Changshengxian" is also very good). After writing so much, I found that most of them were criticizing (), but I also hope that the old thief will write better and better, so he wrote so much. I wish the old thief's new book will be a big hit [laughs]! (Suddenly I thought it would be better if I wrote a short story🤔)

For a pure stranger, the beginning of this book is very clear and clear, without too many settings. I hope the first plot climax can be designed well.

The writing is quite good, but the gambling part is particularly poisonous. Also, Wang Jie shook hands one by one in front of everyone and increased their health by 6.3%, A total of 76 people. Not to mention the intentional people found out under the spotlight, unintentional people can also find something wrong, right? Even this plot was carried through lightly.

The score is 7.2 Points. Please come and comment after reading Chapter 81. This book has the qualifications to become a god. I don't know where to start at the moment. The plot and writing style are unconventional, both relaxed and passionate. The whole process is joyful and not suppressed. I can only say that it is amazing.

The writing in the early stage was very good, very good-looking, not stupid, and occasionally a funny part suddenly appeared, which was very funny. However, when I wrote more than 4,000 pages, it started to stop working. A lot of space deviated from the main line of others not cultivating immortals before, and the protagonist could cultivate immortality. As a result, the rhythm was a bit inconsistent, and the writing felt a bit out of control. But at least the early and middle stages are good articles, thumbs up!

It's a very good book, although it only has a rating of 7.0, But maybe Wang Jie is too strict. The author's narrative level is very good, every event can be explained, and the interest is also very good. There is a little bit of bad taste and black humor, the intensity contrast between the characters, the daily respect for the Qing Emperor of Daxia, and the rhythm is well controlled. It may be a bit popular if you just enroll in school at the beginning, but when you transition to apprenticeship later, it will be a good stone for cultivating immortality.

Identification:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️B (B+～A-) Frequently funny, occasionally humorous, and slightly turbulent about campus development as expected (for now). I've seen a lot of technological immortality, so it's not novel enough and I think it's okay. Mainly interested in the accumulation of entries to see when to exert force. But it's still the same plot flow after so long, I'm not happy. I tend to write light-hearted and humorous development books, and the quantity is small. I will wait and see when they will take off in the future. If they are interesting and exciting, they can be 5A. There are too few of them now. I don't know how they will develop in the future. They are interesting but not very new. There is nothing new in the plot or setting (there are many such books such as Technological Cultivation, Entries, Old and New Martial Arts, etc.). At present, what is worth looking forward to is when the protagonist will develop well and reveal his strength to be slapped in the face, as well as the future of cultivating immortals, comparison with martial arts, and whether he will preach to others, as well as the world view, external threats (the abyss, the fog, the outside world, small secret realms, etc.), And see if he can write something new. Some of them have a score of 8.5+, And currently it is between 7-8.6.

I came to support the old thief. Generally speaking, it is a new book in the style of the old thief Mingyue. It continues the funny and humorous style of the past. I wish Teacher Mingyue to write an adaptation that will make a lot of money, make the animated cartoon quack fierce, and make it popular in the circle (◦˙▽˙◦)

I saw a lot of book reviews criticizing the clichéd writing and stitching up bad plots... I said it plainly, I said it in vain, they didn't understand it at all! The more you read Lao Zei's books, the more interesting they become. I think Lao Zei's routines are not conventional. I personally like them very much. If routine articles and bad jokes deserve low ratings, Tomato will definitely have fewer highly rated articles. So please don't let new readers get scolded away by the bad reviews🥹 In fact, this book has good pacing control, and the jokes are actually moderate.

All kinds of whimsical ideas and fun jokes are all very good. The further back he looked, the more obvious he was in the Second Hidden Realm. It becomes more and more obvious that the Dongfang family's great priest enters the martial arts school to find the protagonist, which is very poisonous [face covering] In terms of combat strength benchmarking, it is to ask a Yuanying boss to see what's wrong with a disciple who has no Qi training period [face-covering]. And it's not to get it for the secrets of the protagonist, but to find the problem and kill him [face-covering]

I am a pure passerby, I don't fake, I am not greedy after confiscating money, and I am not crazy, I just look good if I look good. There is a saying that as long as the old thief has a good grasp of the rhythm, he will be safe.

I feel that it is very good to go home and catch up on updates every day in my senior year of high school, or to finish it in one go after a month of preparing for the college entrance examination. There is no formal villain in the book, not even the closest one. There are also many novel settings, whether it is Xia Shentong's binary borrowing power (you can borrow 110% of your power, but others can only borrow 6%), or the illiterate elders of Daxia who practice martial arts with their left foot and the right foot, and the protagonist's new energy cultivation in the early stage, they are all very whimsical. Moreover, the author types the text by hand and updates it very frequently, with three chapters a day. These are purely personal opinions. The comment area is also highly polarized. If you don't want to read it, just skip it. I hope everyone can find the book you like [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] (Qingdi is not a district!!!) How can there be any pretense and slap in the face! The only possibility is Shangguan reward, but if you look at the latest chapter of the old thief, you feel that he is pitiful and pitiful. He clearly pursues equality in martial arts but ends up being manipulated by Yuanji, who is humiliated by his superiors. I also saw Director Xiao's combination with the background of Houwen's cultural class, and I think his actions are very reasonable. People are just hard-mouthed and soft-hearted.

I've read Chapter 318, and I'd like to make up my previous comments. Although it talks about cultivating immortality in a straight-forward manner, it is actually not like the classic way of upgrading enlightenment or using spiritual energy to attack realm barriers. It does not have a plot of collecting heavenly materials and earthly treasures. Instead, it is compared with another old martial arts system created by the author to highlight the power of the protagonist in cultivating immortality. The advancement of realm is very fast according to the plot timeline, but the character creation is good, and it can be regarded as an invincible novel. Look at the bickering plot in it. (But it's not the way that the protagonist solves all problems personally, but it means that you don't have to worry about the protagonist's lack of strength)

As a mere stranger, I would like to give a brief review of this book. The setting is relatively novel and a bit invincible. Although the characters are not deliberately described, their personalities and images are firmly established. The plot advances on both sides, focusing on cultivating immortality, supplemented by the truth from 46 years ago. The setting of one dark and one bright is very eye-catching... Forget it, I can't go on anymore, the old thief remembers the linkage!

So far, it seems to be good and interesting. Compared to the author, the previous books have improved. I don't know how to put it, but it feels like the previous books, but this time the writing has improved and the plot arrangement is better. Come on, come on [get it] I went and was really fascinated by it. I couldn't stop at all. The author is really funny and the comment section is very lively and interesting. But I'm a little tired after watching for a long time. Let's take a rest and continue tomorrow [blowing kiss]