“First Emperor, I can extend your life by twelve years!”
His words stunned the entire court. Every official declared that he was mad and deserved execution. Only the emperor who had united the Six Kingdoms, the greatest ruler of the ages, lifted his eyes and gave his verdict: “Granted.”
He traded his own lifespan for Heaven's mandate, using the Seven-Star Lamp to prolong the emperor's life! A single “First Emperor” became a bond of absolute trust spanning a thousand years.
For the next twelve years, I served the First Emperor, reforged the iron laws of Great Qin, and swept away the remaining enemies across the realm! I subdued the eastern islands and annexed them, marched west into the Western Regions as far as the Caspian Sea, brought Tubo under control in the south, and secured the northern frontier against invasion!
As he lay dying, the First Emperor established an ancestral decree: “Not one inch of our Huaxia lands may ever be surrendered by the dynasties to come!” He looked at me and said softly, “I have safeguarded it for your descendants. Take your time getting here. Don't die again.”
A thousand years later, those words of oath, inscribed on a fragment in a museum, still ring across the ages.
The writing is very tender, always repetitive, and has the feeling of forcing tears. But the core is very stable, and it depicts the steadfast heart of the First Emperor. Very good, really.
My great and charming ancestor, although later generations have mixed reviews of you, every Chinese descendant knows that you are our ancestor, and it is because of your unified foundation that we are where we are now. People in future generations are willing to give everything they can for you.
I cried while watching it. I really can't hold it in anymore. It's really good to watch. I guess it's because I'm a newbie. There are some repetitions in some places. If you want to read it, you have to pay attention to this. It's really well written. My charming ancestor.
The plot is very interesting, but I feel like there are too many details... And it always feels repetitive... Keep up the good work!
The writing method does not seem very skillful, but the concept is still very good. Then I saw that the author also responded to readers' suggestions in the comment area, which I think is very good! Give it five stars!
Very beautiful and touching, I burst into tears
Originally it was a chapter review, but after thinking about it, it was more appropriate to put it in a book review. It's been a long time since I've commented, and I read it in one go. The author's writing is really good! I think many people will be regretted by the story of the First Emperor, who unified the six kingdoms but died in his second generation. If the First Emperor had not died, modern times might be more developed, and we wouldn't need to learn English, haha, but that's just if. But it should be a typesetting problem, there are duplications. But it's really well written!
Although the writing style is a bit immature, the general core meaning is expressed well and the ideas are very smooth. I personally like it (ღ˘⌣˘ღ). The writing is also very appealing. Overall, it is worth recommending.
It's okay, but sometimes it's too repetitive and emphasized. You can delete some parts a little bit.
It's so beautiful, it made me cry.