I watched with my own eyes as a classmate was replaced by a ghost.
An abandoned hospital, two in the morning. The campus belle peeked through a crack in the door. When she turned back, her face had twisted into the unfamiliar visage of a ghost. She smiled at me. “Found you.”
I fled into the morgue, my fingernails scraping across the metal door. In the depths of my terror, golden words appeared before my eyes:
All supernatural entities must follow the rules when they kill.
And I can see the rules.
Even stranger, beneath those rules was a line of red text that only I could see:
[This rule contains a logical flaw. Modify it?]
That night, I made the ghost nurse call out her own name.
It screamed and vanished into thin air.
But as I escaped the hospital, I looked back and saw ghosts crowding the rooftop, all staring at me in unison.
Only later did I learn that the world was being invaded by the supernatural.
And my ability to modify the rules had only just awakened.
[Era of Strange Tales: I Can See the Rules of Death]
Horror · Not for the faint-hearted
It's okay, it should be no CP, right? The article is a narrative like writing a diary. I don't know how to describe it. It is a bit dry. Some descriptions are too detailed. In fact, I know what I want to express. Occasionally, a simple description will be enough. Too many detailed descriptions will be a bit boring. When writing the dialogue, it was very dry, one sentence for you and one sentence for me, without too many modal particles and other descriptions. Generally speaking, the writing style needs to be strengthened. In fact, the descriptions of many dialogue scenes can be polished better. This book gave me the feeling that it is a flat surface and not three-dimensional enough. Moreover, when it comes to the newsstand section, the protagonist repeats back and forth that I can't do anything, I will do this, and I will definitely do this. There are too many inner thoughts like this and it feels very cumbersome, and Fatty Wang has almost turned into an NPC who brings meals. Isn't the protagonist in school? He doesn't have to go to class anyway. I thought the protagonist is not in class... The fragments in my hand feel like a refrigerant. Throughout the whole chapter, there are basically words like coolness, chill, chill, chill all over. It feels like the protagonist has fallen into the Antarctic. There are a lot of nonsense and repetitive things in the article, and there is always a vague feeling that the main line cannot be entered.