I Became the Target of Senior Sister's Love System!

Generally speaking, it is a good product among tomatoes. The subject matter is good, and the villains all have brains and won't be ridiculed mindlessly. It's just that the author's writing skills are still lacking a little, and many places can be described, but the flaws do not hide the advantages. Overall, a good product

The writing is smooth and silky, and the writing style is not necessarily excellent, but at least it is very readable. The emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists is natural and delicate, which is very delicious. There are also some merits in some plot settings and grasp of character details. There are no common sense mistakes and there is no rough feeling like a simple novel. At least it can be considered a high-quality article on Tomato.

I must finish writing it [crazy]

1. It's great to have ideas and be able to express them through words. 2. It's not watery. According to the plot of the current article, it can be written at least 1 million words, but the author is honest and not watery. He directly promotes the plot, but there is no disconnect, and there is no running account. That's great, author, please keep it up, you are definitely a god.

All Taoist friends who see this comment of mine have the appearance of a great emperor [Learned]

Indeed, the logic is okay, and we can conclude that this is not an AI article. Can see.

It's novel and the plot is not toxic either. I just saw the latest chapter, it's very interesting

As long as there is no harem later, it will be a perfect score

It's quite interesting. The system was taken over by the female protagonist, and the subject matter is relatively new.

The writing is very good, the setting is innovative, and the author's writing style always makes me feel that it has an ancient feel. The emotional changes of the protagonist are also well described, so that it does not feel too abrupt.

It's pretty good so far. It's a new genre. At least it's my first time watching it. There's nothing bad about it. You can give it a try. After all, everyone has different opinions.

The plot is logical, non-toxic, and worth watching

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Looks good, good luck

The heroine is too cute, right? [Blowing kiss]

To be sweet, she has to be a one-liner and a single heroine

I haven't seen any poison spots so far. It's pretty good.

It's very interesting, I hope this book can survive [almost crying]

Yes, it suddenly occurred to me that in other novels where the male protagonist helps the female protagonist, they all say that the male protagonist licks the dog. In this book, if the system in turn helps the female protagonist, what will the male protagonist say? [Thinking] Cut it, keep an eye on it

Can you survive? [What] [What] [What] Better than most

Not bad, nothing toxic at first glance

I read the latest chapter in one go. The interaction between the senior sister and the protagonist is so interesting. I hope the author can continue writing. Okay, the story unfolds slowly, and the relationship between the protagonist and the senior sister will sublimate when they encounter a crisis, right?

I feel good now. Let's not talk about the heroine's IQ and EQ. It's very comfortable to cooperate with the heroine online.

I really like this male protagonist. He is flexible and principled. He is neither a saint nor a slut. I haven't seen such a decent protagonist in a long time.

It's not bad. I haven't seen this kind of theme before. It's quite novel. I hope it can be more complete.

Recommended on the homepage, I just love to read it, the male and female protagonists are well portrayed, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the author pays great attention to the details. It is an absolute masterpiece.

The plot and theme are novel and great to watch! It's just that the updates are too slow [almost crying]

Yes, the plot is compact and suitable for following updates So far, it looks pretty good. If it becomes popular and the water injection becomes serious later, we will discuss it again.

It's nice to see, very comfortable

Good-looking, senior sister is very cute [shy]