I Became the Target of My Senior Sister's Romance System!

Generally speaking, it is a good product among tomatoes. The subject matter is good, and the villains all have brains and won't be ridiculed mindlessly. It's just that the author's writing skills are still lacking a little, and many places can be described, but the flaws do not hide the advantages. Overall, a good product

The writing is smooth and silky, and the writing style is not necessarily excellent, but at least it is very readable. The emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists is natural and delicate, which is very delicious. There are also some merits in some plot settings and grasp of character details. There are no common sense mistakes and there is no rough feeling like a simple novel. At least it can be considered a high-quality article on Tomato.

I must finish writing it [crazy]

1. It's great to have ideas and be able to express them through words. 2. It's not watery. According to the plot of the current article, it can be written at least 1 million words, but the author is honest and not watery. He directly promotes the plot, but there is no disconnect, and there is no running account. That's great, author, please keep it up, you are definitely a god.

Indeed, the logic is okay, and we can conclude that this is not an AI article. Can see.

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As long as there is no harem later, it will be a perfect score

The writing is very good, the setting is innovative, and the author's writing style always makes me feel that it has an ancient feel. The emotional changes of the protagonist are also well described, so that it does not feel too abrupt.

It's novel and the plot is not toxic either. I just saw the latest chapter, it's very interesting

The plot is logical, non-toxic, and worth watching