HP: the Irresistible Malfoy

It's quite comfortable to watch. The protagonist is a heartthrob. He is kind and gentle. But for me personally, it becomes more and more uncomfortable as you get to the end. Maybe Xiaolong actually pushed it. Although the protagonist is very good to Xiaolong, he is also very good to other people. And if something happens, although he won't explicitly say it is Xiaolong's fault, what he expressed at the scene is that Xiaolong was wrong and then went to comfort others. However, the protagonist and Xiaolong are fine when they get along alone. When compared with other people, I don't feel very satisfied. I don't know if anyone can understand me. Although Xiaolong is unique as the protagonist, I can't really feel it, especially the plot with Porter.

This is my first time reading a novel with only a few chapters, mainly because the two brothers are so cute! The interaction was so warm, it made my body warm when I saw it

It's okay, it's pretty good for this kind of subject matter, but many of the dialogues in the article are repetitive, such as "I won't do it next time" and "You say that every time." This dialogue appears many times. What kind of little hobby is this among brothers? It's okay, pretty good

It's well written by reducing repetitive dialogues and the like. This kind of writing really tests your skills.

The author's writing style is as gentle and peaceful as the protagonist Scola. I actually hate heartthrobs, but after reading it all, Scola deserves to be liked by more people.

Still pretty good-looking

The book is very good to read. It has a faint feeling of gentle sunshine after waking up in the afternoon, which is very healing.

It makes my heart warm when I see it

Good luck, qwq fried chicken looks good

Look at me, my heart is so soft

This in itself makes me feel soft and soft, and I feel that the body spots have faded. It's really warm

Okay, HP fan fiction is difficult to write. This is a good entry point

It's very beautiful and worth seeing\(//∇//)\

Super super super super super super super super super super super beautiful

The writing style is very good, the overall feeling of the article is very soft, and it is really beautiful! [Adoration][Bird food masterpiece]

Well written, a breath of fresh air for tomatoes