Teaching Pokemon Facts? Me?!

Sneaking out of the back door of Times Bank, tearing open the night and the mute plain. It seems that I haven't seen such an innocent popular science article for a long time. I thought I should write something seriously, but I couldn't say anything at the moment. Let me talk about the conclusion first. This is a novel worth reading and with great potential. The writing style is a little childish, but it can be regarded as mid-range. The plot inevitably follows the trend, and there are no highlights in the early stages. However, in the recent chapters - Mountain Fire - it can make people's eyes shine. As a work that uses love to generate electricity, it is fully qualified. The shortcoming is probably that the Pokémon's cry is followed by a clear "statement". Of course, I personally don't like this writing method very much. Just like in Pokémon animation, most of the time Pokémon just make a cry, and the specific meaning is left to other people to convey or the audience to guess by themselves, which would be more interesting. And a regret that is not a shortcoming. The author has not been exposed to the original Pokémon games, which may not be conducive to imagination? The author has some problems as a new writer, such as the writing and plot mentioned above, but they are harmless. In my humble opinion, the biggest advantage of this article lies in the vitality that is ready to come out, the author's humility, and the growth of the new book. The author focuses on the description of the bond between people and Pokémon. This extension sets the sunny and joyful tone of the whole book. I can feel it, and maybe I am also enjoying it. This kind of atmosphere and tone has an extraordinary effect on me. To use a metaphor... It is as comfortable as Millarton shooting a sunbeam on the ancient tripod deer on a sunny day. We should give new authors more tolerance, more time and incentives, instead of cracking down and ostracizing them. In short, one point each for atmosphere, tone, and direction, and two points for expectations for the follow-up of this article. If the author can polish the writing, adjust the formatting, and fill in the details, this article will be considered excellent in my opinion. Grateful.

Understand the author's passion for writing the article. But you still need to check the relevant information. Generally speaking, ghosts are really beyond recognition, and the orange fruit is not suitable for direct consumption because it has 5 flavors, a complex taste, and is not suitable for human beings to eat directly. There is a page called Pokémon Encyclopedia, and the author can check it out.

Comments on the excerpt: The overall picture is very vivid and lively, the Pokémon atmosphere is very strong, and it is easy and cute to read. 1. Advantages - The movements are coherent and natural: Ghost is curious and probing → Magikarp is frightened and jumps out → falls into the water and splashes, the process is smooth and not delayed - The details are very vivid: clumsy arcs, snapping sounds, splashes on the face, the picture suddenly stands up - The characters and atmosphere are suitable: Ghost is cute and curious, Magikarp is timid and fragile, and the Pokémon's personality is restored to the original position - The short sentences have a comfortable rhythm, not verbose, and have a strong sense of daily healing 2. Small optimization suggestions - Ghost itself is a ghost gas, you can add a little texture: for example, the hazy lavender gas gently blows across the water, which is more in line with the racial characteristics - you can add a protagonist's reaction: raising his hands to wipe his face, laughing helplessly, the character's presence will be stronger

It's okay as a novice, and the ghost plot at the beginning is also different from the common direct live broadcast. However, the country appeared too early, and it took three days to interrogate the intelligence before asking about the subject. There was no reason why he was besieged by the Spearows, but it might be a foreshadowing, so he kept it secret. When he met Arceus, he only had a picture book. Please keep working hard

I haven't watched much yet, but it's pretty good. The emotional bond between the heroine and Ghost is also well described. The most important thing is that I like Gengar! I hope that Lucario, Larulus, Kuailong, Eevee (and many, many more) will become the heroine's partners in the future.

The rhythm is very comfortable and the story is very interesting. I really like the feeling of combining Pokémon and human professions in the real world and teaming up with each other. I don't know if there will be any Pokémon stories in the future that are more relevant to life, and I'm looking forward to it!

It looks great. I hope there will be Gardevoir in the next elves 🥺Gardevoir is not only beautiful, but also a representative of loyalty and strength. He will not hesitate to lose his life to protect the trainer, and he has unconditional love and loyalty to the trainer. I really love Gardevoir very much.

What a beautiful article. I couldn't help but finish reading it. I still have some unfinished thoughts. It's so good and I love reading it.

Good article, highly recommended. I hope I won't have a knife in the future. The slow pace is good. I want to see more interactions between the heroine and Pokémon

It's great to write it like this. Keep up the good work!