“Congratulations, Big Brother, you can rule the shinobi world now!”
Killer B presented the hard-won Byakugan, stolen from the Hidden Mist Village, with both hands.
“I’ve spent my whole life protecting the Leaf. Can’t I enjoy myself for once? Keep the music playing, keep dancing.”
Danzo didn’t even glance at Sarutobi Hiruzen beside him. He waved a hand and scattered a handful of cash.
“First, I mourn for you, my lord. Second, I bring you good news.”
Kabuto ignored Orochimaru’s grim expression and spoke slowly.
“I thought the Hokage’s face was already the thickest in the world, but it turns out someone’s even thicker-skinned. Whose general is this?”
Kakashi pointed at the ninja trading blows evenly with Maruboshi Kosuke in the Chunin Exams arena, amazed.
This is purely a personal opinion, I hope the author can learn from his opinions and write better. Judging from the title of your book, I think that in order to make your book good-looking, you need to either write a pure meme, or write a behind-the-scenes story. As for the gags, if I read them myself, most of them would be unreadable after about 100 chapters, because most people can't write that many gags. Generally speaking, I will start to reread the previous gags around 100 chapters. If there are no new gags, I can't stand it at all. The title of your book is mainly about the gags of the New Three Kingdoms, and there are not that many gags of the New Three Kingdoms. I almost sent it after I finished it. As for behind-the-scenes writing, you already have ready-made conditions. Your system can extract things from the human world as well as things from other worlds. Plus the protagonist has a doppelganger. This can be said to be standard for behind-the-scenes writing. The only problem is that you are the protagonist. The personality of this protagonist is completely inconsistent with your current article. What you are writing now can be said to be the direction of using some things from behind-the-scenes articles to write gags, but you have written too few gags. You shouldn't write about this protagonist in your book. Now, you should change it to a pure behind-the-scenes protagonist and hide behind the scenes. Later, you will make some things from your New Three Kingdoms Magic modification, and use some things from other worlds in your lottery to make a ninja world romance or something from other worlds. You want to have a Holy Grail War or something. Isn't it better than if you write this protagonist and do the same operations in some mentally retarded novels?
Reading this book by the author is like drinking fine wine, intoxicating This short story is worthy of being Shu Ke's first masterpiece.
A newbie is on the road. Because it is written by hand, there will be some typos, which I have not responded to. If you see them, you can use the error correction function of Tomato to help the author. Thank you very much
I feel like you can refer to the two books: Dad, I Have Been a Song Dynasty for a Long Time and Time Travel to the New Three Kingdoms. Author, if Naruto is to be transformed into the Three Kingdoms, then whose will is Naruto?
The setting is pretty good, but it's a pity that not many people watch it.
Five stars from God's Will
Extremely delicious, must try it
It's pure AI from Chapter 3 onwards
The writing is okay, but the protagonist is too weak. I recommend a Naruto novel to the author for reference, "The Ninja World's Days Are Decided"