HP Takain-Senpai Is a Bit Strong

Nia, who is in the first grade, is very talented. The author describes many details of the supporting characters, which makes people feel that the story comes alive and is very vivid; but after the second grade begins to involve the plot of the original protagonist, the author may be very entangled in how to allocate the plot and highlights of the protagonists, and the dialogue and plot between them seem to be very human-machine... It is a common problem among HP fans. I want to describe a powerful protagonist, but do not want to take away the highlights of the original character, which is a test of the author's writing style. In short, five stars for encouragement, I hope the author will work hard~

Well, it's OK for the moment, but I haven't actually watched much of it, but I'm wondering if Katie and I are good friends, because um, I like the heroine a lot, and they are good friends, because I think Qiu Zhang and the others don't have that good relationship with him. Personally, I feel that girls should have one or two girls who are better at playing.

It's very good. It gets better as you go to the back, but the emotional line is a bit thin. It feels like there is a little less interaction between the heroine and the male guests. However, the career line is quite interesting. I like the character of the heroine very much. She is a bit cold-faced and cute. She has conflicts with Mary but does not feel wronged at all. It's a pity that Said is not at the table. I feel that the tension with Said is stronger [shy], please do your best.

A very lively heroine, talented and willing to work hard, good-looking, with several love lines. I talked with Seid before and broke up. Now the updated progress is to fall in love with Harry when the heroine is in seventh grade.

I have to say it's really good-looking. The plot starts to come together in the second part. The writing in the first part feels a bit novice, but in the second part it becomes more and more immersive. It's so good.

Very interesting, I like the main character very much There is no poisonous point at the moment. The protagonist is a very good little girl, and the characters that appear are also very warm. The appearance of Rouyue Curse really made my eyes shine. I hope to see more of the protagonist's career and growth lines.

Anyway, I don't see how the heroine is strong.

It's really beautiful, the heroine is particularly charming

Very beautiful, come on, come on

Very delicious article

The growth of the heroine flows smoothly and the writing of this article is very natural. There are small conflicts between the heroine and her mother, and the heroine and her friends in the Eagle Garden. Nice! Why isn't it popular? ! Come on author!

It's tied~ My wife's writing is really good~ I hope it will be updated soon~

What a delicious article, like a bowl of soup, delicious but not greasy!

Not much to see but good

There are few masterpieces from hp tomatoes