Dream of the Red Chamber: Reborn as Jia Huan, I Get the Crimson Pearl Immortal Fruit from the Start

I have read more than 40 chapters so far, and the plot is gentle. But to be honest, most of them are about scientific examinations, studies, etc. There are emotional lines, and they are laid out in advance. I am willing to take the initiative to contact Lin Daiyu. I feel that this is pretty good. I don't know if it will be like this when I return to Jia's house later. Others are wronged as well, so I'll change my evaluation when the time comes. As for the weird time-travel form in his previous life, I feel like I can skip reading it, and it will be the same as not watching it. You just take a look at the introduction and that's it. I hope you can write more. I have more than 40 pictures and it's not easy to comment. So far, it seems okay. There are some things written wrong in the first comment, no, most of them are scientific examinations, but I have just met Lin Ruhai and have been studying for a while. Most of them are about home. Maybe it is different from other fan fiction notes. It is good so far. I don't have any big grievances for the time being.

So far so good The image of the protagonist is too awkward. You only pursue making money and fame, and opening a harem is all. You also have to look like you are concerned about the country and the people. From time to time, the protagonist will suddenly open his mouth and recite one or two ancient poems about this, and the emperor will happen to hear it. It looks so awkward.

It's better to write something subtle about the charming pictures. If there are too many people watching, it's easy to get reported. Be careful of being blocked. Come on.

Good,

Emotionally, it's okay, but conceptually, it's not appropriate.

It's okay, garden opera is fine