Balala: I Give All My Tenderness to Yan Lili

I know Jiang likes Lily, but he must not put anyone down just because he likes Lily. Double standards are double standards, but double standards are not such double standards! I'm not going to talk about whether you are a licker or not because you like someone. Let's not talk about whether others' love for you is sincere or not. But everyone's love is not cheap. Do you think it's appropriate to trample on other people's love so casually? I think the protagonist group is a small group that bullies others, and everyone is written like a villain by the author... The plot is difficult to comment on, and Jiang's personal character is also difficult to comment on. I don't know how anyone can really like such a work with negative energy. Besides, I don't think Meiqi Meixue Xiaolong or anything like that is a good person. Objectively speaking, neutrally speaking, they are not absolute good people and bad people. How should I say it? It's better to revise it, at least to make it more positive. What if younger readers learn it? I hope that the author will think twice about writing all the subsequent plots. Finally, I wish the author's novels will be read by more and more people and rewarded by more and more people. I also sincerely hope that all readers and authors will be happy every day. Now that I see it, I find that Jiang Shi really has no correct views at all. He uses dirty tricks to make his sweetheart happy without caring about the feelings of others. I said it was difficult to criticize just now, and it is even more difficult to criticize now.

Update soon. I hope the protagonist will slap the Ling sisters in the face and step into the world of magic fairy. If possible, arrange the magic inheritance of the Dark Emperor for the protagonist.

Good reviews! I hope the protagonist gets magic soon! Then he killed the Ling sisters and stepped on the Demon Fairy Queen! Finally unite the magical world!

I can only say that she is worthy of being a female channel, so capable of playing house with others.

It looks good, I'll stick with it, I hope it will be finished. Don't pay attention to those bad comments, you are the best. Damn, please don't end up like the one on TV. I don't want Lily to end up reconciling with those two fools. I feel like Lily's IQ is gone. I hope Lily and Mu Yao can rule the Fairy Castle and live happily together every day. As for those two fools, take back their magic and save their lives. [Thoughts] How about writing Lily's mother to death? She doesn't care about Lily at all. She doesn't deserve it.

From the perspective of emotional expression This fanfic stands out for its delicate emotional presentation. The author skillfully captures the emotional context of the original characters and portrays the love, hatred and resentment between the characters in a profound way. As the plot advances, the emotional transitions are natural and layered, allowing readers to deeply empathize. However, the emotional foreshadowing of individual plots is a bit hasty, which affects the emotional coherence. It is recommended that the author pay attention to the control of emotional rhythm in the future, so that readers can be more immersed in the emotional world of the story. From the perspective of plot structure The plot structure of this fanfiction is unique and innovative, and it boldly innovates on the basis of the original work to build a world that is both familiar and novel. The new story line is highly integrated with the original settings, and the conflicts are cleverly set up, attracting readers to continue to deepen. However, the development of some plots is slightly delayed, which weakens the compactness of the story. The author can streamline and optimize the plot, highlight key nodes, and make the story rhythm faster. From the perspective of character creation The author has profound skills in character creation, accurately grasps the personality characteristics of the original characters, and expands on this basis. Each character has a distinct personality and growth trajectory, which is vividly displayed on the page. However, there are some flaws in the behavioral logic of individual characters, causing the characters to be less three-dimensional. It is recommended that the author further polish the character's inner world to make the character's behavior more reasonable and credible.

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It was well written, full of young masters, and their rich material life dazzled me. I was also very envious and looked forward to the story of Jiang Muyao after he learned magic. Author, can you give Jiang Muyao a very, very cool magic weapon? It's okay for Yan Lili to use the Black Magic Box as in the play, but can Jiang Muyao give him a new magic weapon? For example, a sword, a fan, a Rubik's Cube, or a bow and arrow🏹?

It's interesting. Let me give you a good review first.

Come on it's really great I really really want to see the finale Come on you are the best This is a very good book that I have read

Lily, I was not smart back then. I'm sorry @I drank AD calcium at Hogwarts. Will they be together later [crying]

It is really in line with the original work, and the setting of the male protagonist is really great, as is the setting of the female protagonist. You are online. It is very consistent with the original work. I am a great work. Although I have not finished reading it yet, Jiang Xiaoyao will definitely always love Lily in the future! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It looks great, come on! Those who complained read the introduction and then decided whether to watch it or not. The introduction made it very clear, but in the end they were still commenting on Duan Ping and other comments about Jiang and Lily. Please read the introduction and leave if you can't stand it. Everyone has their own preferences.

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I suddenly had an idea. Is Xiao Lan a gangster? Why don't the protagonist do something about it? [Thinking]

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The few articles that are not industrial saccharin are extremely sweet.

A highly recommended book, please read it.

As expected, the author lives up to his name

The writing is very good, it perfectly fits the original plot and characters, and adds a lot of detailed descriptions! Recommended for everyone to read and collect

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The plot is quite interesting

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What kind of wife is qualified? Answer: Someone with a bad temper