My Top Is Sick, and I Say: I'll Spoil Him

First world 😢 It's so beautiful. I cried 😢 😢 😢 during the monologue. There was a touch of tenderness between the lines. Jiaojiao is pampered from behind, so cute. Attack seems to be weak in bed Keep watching, it'll be really nice later on

The first two units are fine. You can drink it directly as sugar water. . . This third unit is really hard to swallow. Because I clicked on the title of the article, I had different psychological expectations. . Because when I saw Xiao Lu, as a doomsday strongman, directly clinging to Brother Shou without any emotional foundation, identifying Brother Shou, and then protecting and taking care of Brother Shou all the way, it was really a subtle feeling. . . It's still the same flavor until the end. . . I really didn't feel much about Brother Shou's favor. . . The first two units obviously have a relatively obvious subplot of being taken care of by the opponent. . There will also be a group of relatives and friends around Gong. . . If the third unit wanted to write about being attacked and spoiled, it should also include how Gu An takes good care of Xiao Lu in daily life, but I haven't seen this kind of scene very often. . . In short, the overall emotional line is that they love each other, but I clicked in because of the title of the article, and it really doesn't taste very satisfying. . . All in all, it is still a five-star review. I hope the author can add a little demining before each unit in the future. . . The emotional line could use some polishing. The author worked hard on writing the article. . .

Who would have thought it? On the contrary, the first unit is more interesting.

I have read more than ten chapters so far. The plot is very bland and happy, and the character settings are also very good. I like the character design of Suwan in the first world very much. But there is a problem in my opinion: the AI smell is very strong. I have no malicious speculation, but I usually use AI to generate novels. So there are a few points I want to say. If it is not AI, then this is my suggestion. 1. There are too many sentence patterns such as "It's not..." And "It's..." That appear in the article. This often happens when I use AI to generate novels. As a result, I am now a little sensitive to such sentence patterns. 2. In Chapter 13, I remember that during the description, no other doctor or nurse knew that Dr. Shen was jealous. In the first half of the chapter, the other nurses also thought that "Dr. Shen was angry" instead of "Dr. Shen was jealous." This means that they did not know about Shen Ji's jealousy. And after Su Wang coaxed Shen Ji back, a nurse said directly that she knew that Shen Ji was jealous and was coaxed by Su Wang. This logic is not usual. And AI is prone to making such low-level mistakes 3. The comments made by other nurses against their CP were too formulaic. When I used AI to request such comments or barrages, they were almost exactly the same as what you described. Finally, the above is purely my personal opinion. If it were not for AI, I would even apologize and delete it if the above statement made the author uncomfortable.

The first world is most in line with the title of the book, the second world is 🛏edible, and in the third world it gradually deviates from the title of the book. The mutual favor in the title of the book suddenly changes to mutual favor (mutual favor is the tagline, but in fact I think the favor is greatly reduced compared to the first two worlds). But I still give four stars to the first world.

A very delicate article, ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah, very gentle and gentle feeling of flowing water. The story is not long, but it has a beginning and an end, and the characterization is superb. The first short story made me cry! I just love the squeamish bag and the gentle guy who protects his shortcomings!!! The teacher will update one story a day. I can't get enough.

Ahhhh, it's really good to read. Every unit story is very good to read. Although the writing style is a bit immature, it all gives me the feeling that it comes naturally. What I like most about the short story in the first unit is that it has the kind of "if you say the first time you meet, it's so amazing, it's enough to be remembered for hundreds of years." I really like this emotional line; and then I don't think there's anything interesting about the emotional line in the third unit, but I really like the fight between the four of them and what follows. It's warm and daily, and then they shine in different positions. This idea is really good, and the ending is also the kind of peace and prosperity (the fourth unit is also the same); the rest I like is the family line, the elder brother in the fifth, seventh and eighth units and the senior brother in the sixth unit, everyone makes me feel very good. What attracted me most about the supporting characters in this book is that they don't have stories about themselves just because they are supporting characters. Everyone is not there just for the protagonist. I really like the article written by the teacher. It is really beautiful. I hope the teacher will write a new article. I also wish the teacher a happy day and don't worry about writing.

It's really good to read, but the rating is a bit low [already planted], but the pace of this book is faster. The plot in the first world where you are jealous today and I will be jealous tomorrow is a bit funny 😳 Finally, I wish: the young couple 99 😘

The first world is viewable, and the writing is very warm and popular. The subsequent writings are very human-machine. I follow several worlds without believing in evil. The latest skin disease is also very human-machine.

The first unit is so delicious, and it feels so comfortable to be pampered. I love you, the author💍💍💍