Versatile Mage: A Magical Life Beginning with Divine Might

Not bad! The function settings are good and the plot can be extended, but many places are uncomfortable because I listen to books! There are too many inner adjectives os. I'm not asking you to write a textbook. You don't need to use the honorific (you) often. Brother, it's 2026 now, okay! Write some common expressions and make them look like northerners! Just use vernacular and ordinary language! This is the whole of France, not the Chinese style of focusing on teaching, respecting the elderly and caring for the young, 🤔🤔🤔 and there is no need to write the protagonist like a cold and aloof, making him look like an idiot! You can listen to books when you have time, you will understand! It feels so rigorous when listening to the book! Also, the heroine! Niannujiao😑😑This woman was aloof when Uncle Luan wrote it in the original novel! You were a profit girl when you wrote it! When there is no system, why not get to know the male protagonist! The male protagonist is now stronger, comes to make friends again, and asks the protagonist to teach the plant department! Full of irony! I don't recommend him to be the heroine! The spiritual ones are Ding Yumian, Ai Tutu (the kind of woman who fascinates otakus with her innocent personality and devilish figure), Lingling! These three are really good to choose from! It's okay to have multiple female protagonists, but the focus of writing the article is still on combat! Emotions and too much communication are really not the most fascinating places in France! There are also three major battles in France, the ancient capital, Xiamen, and the magic capital! Hope to see the author write to this stage! At least you have to reach super level to be able to fight! Come on

Nowadays, the flavor of AI is so strong. Reading books has no impact, but listening to books makes me feel tired. A lot of adjectives are used for every action, demeanor, and background. The key is also a lot of ellipses. When listening to a book, not only do you have to listen to a bunch of words, but you also get interrupted by the ellipses [Petrified]

I can't even remember how many books Lao Jin has been blocked😅 Aren't you considering changing the platform?

Lao Jin, I miss you😢😢😢

It's been a long time since I've seen such a great full-time mage series of novels. Come on, author!!!

Why isn't there more updates over there @WRITING A NOVEL Is it you Lao Jin😢😢

I want to see it. Update soon.

It's one of the better-looking novels written by Full Time

"Born" dimensional system, this is not beyond the standard

Okay, worth a look