Sent to Dongguan and Was Crushed by Two Energetic Girls

Very well written. Compared with other novels with similar tracks, the male protagonist did not suddenly become very arrogant when he got rich. He still maintained his life and slowly improved. He would be just as excited as ordinary people when he saw a beautiful girl. He would not become angry if his face was exposed, he would be angry and troubled, but he also had a reliable side. They treat the heroines very seriously and do not treat them as tools. The heroines are also well written and their portrayal is very contagious.

Very good. Go to Tomato to read Quwen. First choice!

It's a cool story, but it's not just silly and cool. It still has the male protagonist's normal life line, with ups and downs. I've seen a lot of this kind of thing, but this is the only one I've read. There are some small flaws, but... No one is perfect, just don't be picky. I think it's great.

It feels good, the writing is real and interesting, a very good book

In recent days, I have discovered that these novels with a score of 67 or 7 are really in line with my taste. Now after reading for a long time, I can no longer stand those long novels worth hundreds of thousands, and I like urban novels with average scores of hundreds of thousands, all of which are Huangshu novels.

Yes, a lot of the writing is very stiff. This book can't be read, but it can be read, especially the protagonists are deeply rooted in people's hearts.

It's so beautiful. Is the author in the third class of kindergarten? I'll give you two lollipops for cheers tomorrow.

The author, like some authors, believes that once the protagonist has the system, his mentality needs time to change. Unfortunately, the reality is that if someone gets the system, he will start to criticize like crazy in less than ten minutes, because this is different from winning the lottery. Having a system means that life is free and you can do whatever you want. If you can't do something with one million, you can always do it with ten million, one hundred million, one billion, ten billion, one hundred billion. The least valuable thing about the system is: money. So I persuaded a lot of people to quit in the early stage, and I revised it for the next book. The latter part is really good, and the writing is good [laughs]

I have read the latest chapter. So far I like this book and the character Zhou Wanqiu very much. However, the author buried a foreshadowing in more than 200 chapters: It is said that Yang Jiulang had a flash of inspiration and asked Zhou Wanqiu to invite Chen Jian to cut the ribbon. This suggestion made Yang Jiulang "regret it for life." And the description of Chen Jian's abnormal behavior when facing Zhou Wanqiu makes people feel uneasy when watching it. Thinking on the bright side, I guess this foreshadowing will be an important plot that will break through Zhou Wanqiu's favorability, or even increase it? But thinking about the bad side, I am really afraid of green, cattle, and knives, and I hesitate to give up the book... I really like this book. I hope the author will carry out the "coolness" to the end and never have depressing plots such as the house being stolen, the minotaur, and the daughter being given away. It's really unacceptable.

There are many small problems, but overall it is good. The poisonous point of Turtle Man that many people say is actually not bad. In reality, many people are actually almost the same as the protagonist before the system. It is not a purely brainless and cool novel. There is nothing wrong with it.

The spirited little girl lives a transparent life. Reality.

The plot and details are excellent, a good remedy for bibliophobia [Like][Like][Like]

The author's writing style is very good, and some plot descriptions and settings can be seen to be extremely real and delicate, with a strong sense of substitution.

This is currently the most enjoyable novel I've read about a spirited girl.

Well, the content is quite funny and worth a look.

In reality, you should be as submissive as in novels, that's why you think it looks good and feels real.

Most readers of Tomato just want mindless entertainment, so they couldn't accept this film with a sense of life and realism. The advantage of this book is that it is down-to-earth. The protagonist is a real person (or the author's reflection). Unlike most heroic novels, he immediately transforms into a boss as soon as he gets the system. Overall, it's a top-notch tomato product, come on!

Interesting story, Xiaomin's life is like this kind of fireworks The more I read, the more I like it. The author's writing skills are solid and his words are precise. One word can give you unlimited space, and you can express it vividly and change your identity at any time. Readers can see as far as they want, and how much space there is. All platforms must include this article. It is a classic, and the vulgarity of ordinary people is a true portrayal of this society.

Except for licking Huawei all the time, there is nothing wrong with it. It is just a normal life for a cow to be a little frustrated in the past. At present, with the various abilities provided by the golden finger, it is only used passively and there is no active development. Also, the author's words are bold. I haven't seen such straightforward words on the Internet in many years. But, these cute words can be said by a cute girl, but it would be a bit vulgar if it were said by any other person. I hope it can be corrected, and I will continue to follow up.

Writing is okay. It just doesn't feel right for Tomato. This is suitable for the kind of cool, mindless writing. Your kind of writing is a bit like reality. If you get a little closer, many people may not be happy.

Excellent, great feeling, both physically and mentally refreshed

Gaga is beautiful, the author has such a good imagination [laughs evilly]

The content is in line with the topic of urban new humanity, and the writing style is slightly exaggerated.

Why are book reviews so low? The writing is smooth, the characters are vivid and reasonable, and they are in harmony with the life background without being obtrusive, stereotyped or repetitive. Compared with most novels here, it is not even a star or even a star. A rating of 8.5 Or above is correct, right?

It's still very good. Although some parts feel illogical, the plot is quite enjoyable. You can criticize and do what you need to do. There is no messy and unsatisfactory plot.

Well written and very close to real life

It's so good to watch that I can't stop watching it

The author has great cultural background! The writing is down-to-earth and has the flavor of fireworks on earth! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The author is educated and the plot is okay. I look forward to seeing if there are any highlights in the follow-up.

It's really well written, a modern literary work