Train Survival: I Have Countless Colorful Hexes!

So far, I feel like the writing is okay, with no obvious negative points. The current type of survival must be that the male protagonist meets the koi female, and then all kinds of mutual benefits are achieved. The author himself also directly stated this setting, which is quite cool haha. The trust between the male and female protagonists in this book is established too quickly, and the early relationship transition is indeed very fast, but overall it does not affect the development of the plot. Come on, author!

I think your subject matter and setting are good. I give you four points because of your hard work. However, you often have minions jumping around in front of the protagonist, and you still have to wait for the minions to finish their offense. It is harmless to be poisonous once or twice, but it is a big poison if it is often like this. I hope the author can improve it.

It's pretty good. The protagonist is a middle-aged boy. He doesn't show any mercy to his enemies. The plot is quite satisfactory and has no sense of urgency. There is a feeling that the fallen leaves will drift wherever they go. It's more like a game than the kind of survival where you have to fight in two days and escape death eight times in a week.

All I can say is that this book is pretty good. It's so good that I read more than 100 chapters in one go. I really hope the author will update it quickly, because I will see the serialized chapter soon. The plot and story are also relatively warm, and the heroine has a good personality.

It is indeed a good book, both in terms of concept and plot. It also provides a lot of inspiration for my novels~ So, is there any brother who is interested in coming to my place to have a look? [Adore][Adore][Adore]

Four stars at the highest. Mainly because I want people to see it. It's already very respectable. The problem is that the preface doesn't match the follower. There are potions in it. The first strengthening potion is taken by piercing and then becomes oral. There is also a panel that says oral, but when he uses it, it turns into piercing. Even if you are AI, you can't treat people as fools [laughs] without checking it. But if someone can ignore these, they should still be able to watch it. Chapter 96 [Elementary Mental Strengthening Potion] [Category: Extraordinary Creations] [Level: 2] [Explanation: The potion contains gentle extraordinary power. After drinking it, the drinker's mental strength will be slightly increased. The medicinal liquid in the test tube showed a dreamy blue-white color, as if it was fused with starlight and kept shining. The liquid is not too thick and is as soft as water. The way it is used is a bit rough, requiring a sharp thrust into the back of the neck.

I think it's pretty good. The plot framework and everything are all online. I can only say that the writing style is not delicate enough and the writing is still a bit messy. If you put it on Tomato, I feel that this rating can still rise. Come on, author. Too short too short

The current progress is Chapter 88, and the overall feeling is: very cool, very cool! ! Super super cool! ! ! It's fun to be cool all the way. Although there are many brainless supporting characters as foils, there are also normal supporting characters, such as the mutual aid group, the train conductor who volunteered to die because of the crystal, and the train conductors on the Little Red Riding Hood platform. The whole book is not so violent. Except for those who covet the protagonist's resources and want to murder the protagonist, most of the time, the protagonist will not specifically target, or directly kill people to steal goods. It can be said that he has retained the conscience of modern society. Then there are the two female characters, Sister Qing and Cai Cai, who are well portrayed, each with their own characteristics and strengths. Sister Qing is the type who is carefree and very humorous, while Cai Cai is the type who is introverted and has a low emotional intelligence. But because of this, she feels very innocent and cute. Finally, this book is very smooth to read and does not feel like it has been polished by AI. Overall it is very comfortable, with a lot of laughs and lots of jokes. First give me a five-star review. The current progress is at Chapter 295, and the later descriptions are more focused on group portraits. I personally feel that it will be more tiring, because I prefer the main perspective to be more on the protagonist, and there are too many descriptions of some props, which is completely inferior to the number of words. Furthermore, the special copy before the merged partition is really frustrating to read. Too many descriptions are all portrayed on the supporting characters, and the protagonist's role is too much. It's missing. Although it's fun to watch, it's really a bit too brainless. It's all ridicule and slap in the face. It's really stupid. You can write this kind of scenes, but you can't focus most of the portrayal on the supporting characters. It really makes me feel aggrieved. But this chapter also made my impression of the character Wang Tianhua much better. I feel that he will become the protagonist later, which is quite good.

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Starting with five stars. If you meet that king or some scumbag, if you don't give it a try, I'll give it 7 stars. I was wrong, I can't hold on anymore