Xiuxian: My Entries Can Simulate Life

Speaking from my personal experience, I would say it is the best product. The first is about the common problem of simulation writing, the problem of suppressing combat effectiveness. Here is a more clever way to solve it. That means there is a conspiracy, and you can't keep silent. If you keep silent, it means that you don't understand the whole situation, and you can easily step into a big pit, causing you to fall into a dead situation, and you can't break through it no matter what. And the protagonist did not sit still and wait for death, nor was he too wild or crazy to seek death. Instead, he worked step by step, not to mention how smart he was. But it can be understood, and there is a sense of anticipation of deciphering it step by step. So far, the plot has been written very well. If the follow-up does not collapse, it should be able to reach around 9 o'clock.

First of all, I recommend this book. The story is more innovative than other simulation novels. It doesn't look like, oh, which book is this similar to? It feels like a brand new brain and a brand new text. It's very interesting. Since I personally listen to books at work, it only took me one day to finish them, and I speeded up the process. This book is still very interesting. It's not a shill hired by someone. There are relatively few poisonous points. If I have to say, there are basically none. As for the emotional line, I can't tell it at the moment. However, if I randomly pick anyone to be the heroine, I feel that it is very suitable. I won't say that the emotional line is too stretched. Although there is no specific love line at the moment, the foreshadowing is quite good. I like it very much. It's also possible that the child's understanding is wrong. Friends who come later, please don't criticize me. Although it is not explicitly written who the heroine is, I feel good about picking any one. Unlike other novels where you are ambiguous when you see a woman, this book does not say that, it is just a normal relationship. I personally highly recommend this novel. After all, I am bored at work and need to find some books to read, but I don't like mindless novels that attack my brain. This book is suitable for everyone.

Garlic leaves This book is really good, especially the description of how Aphelios fought against the bright moon to break the seal on his sister, and how they were inseparable, day and night. Lin Daiyu and others took advantage of the dark and windy night to break into the enemy's interior and seize the enemy general's head. Unexpectedly, Pang Tong appeared on the way and used a Fangtian Painted Halberd to perform so superbly that he couldn't see the beginning or the end. Suddenly, the Immortal Master said: I just need to become an immortal. After saying that, a power comparable to the origin of the universe burst out. It was the aura of the Lord of the Universe, and the battlefield formed the situation of the Three Kingdoms. Among them, Jiang Ziya has won my heart deeply. He beat Yuanshi Tianzun to death with a stick and kicked to death the disciples of Chan, which shows that he has won my true inheritance. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are very good!

The book is a good book. There are currently no poisonous points, so you can follow it. However, the number of words in the book is not very large at present, so it is inevitable that there will be relatively few promotions. Because of this number of words, to be honest, the plot can only be regarded as just unfolding, and there are not many climaxes and exciting points. I hope the author can pay more attention to this aspect. Then there is no need for new authors to pay too much attention to data, as this stuff seems to affect their mentality. The quality is there, but persistence is important. The novel pays more attention to the long-tail effect. Compared with the beginning, the author has already passed the cold start period. And it can be seen that the author wrote it with intention. As long as there are no big poisonous points in the back, the data will not be bad. But if the data wants to be better, I think we may need to put more effort into the cool design. Currently, the author is focusing more on the plot design, but there is no rush. Let's practice our skills slowly. Stay calm. It can be seen that the author likes feedback, so I came here to encourage him.

Well written, the plot is quite interesting But I have a suggestion, that is, among the various forces in this book, there are too many settings for the power structure. For example, four or five demonic forces are thrown out in a row in one chapter, and thousands of years of history are written. It is too tiring to understand just by reading the text. You can take two minutes to draw a simple diagram to assist understanding. For example, a rough chronicle of the world era, a world map, a power structure, etc., Can be illustrated, and the reader's reading experience will definitely be greatly improved. @Qingyusuifeng That's about it

Among the simulation novels I have read, this one can be considered a high-quality one. Among other simulation documents, the plot is very compact. The last simulation novel that gave me this feeling was half a year ago. Come on, author [laughs][love]

I'll give it 4 stars overall. Let's talk about the advantages first. The plot is really unique. The design of Goldfinger is also very imaginative, and it integrates simulators and entries. Let's talk about the shortcomings, which is that the popularity of simulation articles likes to push the boundaries. Although this book is said to be slow-paced, it mainly promotes the plot. But to be honest, the slow pace is not in line with the public's preferences in articles such as simulators. If you want the score to be higher, you can speed up the realm a little bit. It doesn't mean that it has to be a cool novel. Try not to drag the realm too much and keep up with the development of the plot, because the realms currently appearing in this book are the sixth realm. The protagonist spent nearly a hundred pictures in total from foundation building to pill formation. In addition, the realm of this book later seems to belong to the pioneering style. It is indeed very creative to integrate it into the simulation text. I also hope that the plot can develop more quickly and try not to delay it until one or two thousand chapters. I also found a very small problem. One of the immortal skills that appeared later is the Immortal Way Slash. He mentioned that when you practice to the first level, you can directly kill the sixth realm. The author also said before that there will be no such thing as cross-level legislation in this article. This may be a conflict. It may be because the realm that the protagonist cultivates may not belong to the power system, but I think it is still a bit abrupt. But it's just a minor flaw. To sum up, it's a good read. You can read it in your spare time. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion and for reference only.

For me, its rhythm makes me feel more comfortable. At present, there are no pitfalls. In the simulator article, the plot direction in the early stage is considered to be relatively average. It depends on whether he can stabilize the mid-term and grasp the direction in the later stage. I had high expectations for this book because he buried some of the conflicts in it quite well. I think some hidden settings can also be reflected in some small details. I think it's pretty good. The most important thing is that there is a lot of room for exploration in the world view. I hope the author can make a breakthrough and hope not to return to the simulator story and repeat the matryoshka dolls, which will lead to numbness.

Oh no, I only watched it for two days, why is it gone... Update quickly, update soon! The overall layout is very good, everything is clear in the early stage, laying the foundation for the later stage. Many plot lines can be explained and connected, and the pitfalls are filled. Isn't this amazing!

This is a rare masterpiece among simulation novels. Unlike other simulation novels, it has all kinds of death and overwhelming fighting power. It's very enjoyable to watch. I'd like to support it with five stars.

Very good work. The story advances layer by layer, and the author really put a lot of thought into writing this novel. Works can be stored in collections. The writing and narration are excellent. Head work in Tomato. Comments after finishing the first article.

After watching the simulation three times, the protagonist relies on his brain to survive and thrive. It is quite reasonable and the rhythm is quite good. It also adds some funny jokes and is very readable.

Summary: Not stressful, smart, there are many undercover agents of the Demon Sect, and there are private devices such as foundation-building spiritual objects and Yuanying Dan. The monks are partial to foundation-building spiritual objects, but the protagonist is well-balanced and strong, without drama, the author's writing skills are acceptable, and readers can easily immerse themselves in it. Suggestions to the author, the entry is a bit easy to collapse, it is recommended to add divine, peerless, original and other qualities later.

Please write a five-star review. After all, I rarely give five stars. This book is considered a staple among simulations. At one point, there were too many chapters describing simulations, but the author quickly adjusted it. Also, the author carefully calculated the simulation and real timelines, and the dual-line advancement is better. I have read many simulation novels, and I have simulated more than 300 chapters. The protagonist has never even left the room, which is very difficult. Personally, I think the book is good and you can read it!

After reading this for a long time, I realized that I didn't leave any comments. The author writes very well. If I save a dollar a month, I will give a reward when it is finished. I will not give a reward to any serial that has been cheated by hundreds of serials. I'm not good at writing. The beginning of the plot is a bit ordinary but it gets more and more exciting as I read. I haven't read much about the simulator. Too much writing is either dull or exciting and the growth line is not interesting at all. By the way, I like to play with colors and hate it. I really don't know how many beautiful women you sleep with have anything to do with the development of the plot. The pace of this book is tight, and there are information and clues in almost every chapter. You can tell that you have written an outline or carefully thought about the details. Anyway, the writing is very nice so far. I will comment back if there are any questions later.

The writing is very good. The three concepts and the division of combat power in this book are very similar to the ancient cultivation of immortality. Anyway, I can't stand those novels that claim to be selfish and can create protagonists who slaughter hundreds of thousands of mortals at every turn. They kill randomly without any hatred or reason, and they are too hateful to the community to understand what they are talking about. Simulations are difficult to write. I have read many simulation articles one after another, but I almost gave up at the beginning. This one has been followed all the way. At the end of the chapter, you can feel the author's anxiety about new writing. Once you have adjusted yourself, you must continue writing. It's really good! Come on!

It's very good, just like watching a movie, it gives people a very grand atmosphere, and it's not like AI, the logic is clear, and I finished it in a short time. The author, Qiuqiu, should not enter the palace. I have read so many novels. I hope the author can work hard. The potential of this book is more than that [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Like] [Like]

It's a good read, a battle of wits and courage. The author's outline is very grand, the plot is very detailed, and the plot of the protagonist looking for clues is very attractive. Moreover, the simulator article does not have AI, which is a great praise. The main problem is that it takes a lot of space to sort out the clues. I hope it can be updated for a long time.

Come on, come on, I've almost read the author's fantasy simulations, but this one is a bit too low-key. To be honest, the author, have you ever read Liu Zi's simulation novel? [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

It looks good and suits my taste. Come on, the author, I think the writing is excellent.

One of the top two favorite simulator books I have read so far (No. 1 Taishi Li), whether it is plot foreshadowing, character creation, or basic settings, this book is excellent. And it's rare that it can be funny and humorous at the same time, and it doesn't smell bad or smelly. The female characters are also well created, and there are no disgusting descriptions or tool-like attributes. To be precise, each supporting character has his own personality and positioning, and has his own ecological niche in this story. I like them all. They are not tool people, and they all have something that touches me.

As a cultivator, the best thing is that the highest level in the early stage is the Void Refining, the most innovative thing is the Tianfeng Rebellion, and the most classic thing is the Tianjiao Competition As a simulation, the best thing is not to die, not to die suddenly. The most innovative thing is to simulate for 100 years, leaving enough expectations.

Excellent work, worth seeing. One of the biggest drawbacks of simulation novels is that they can suppress combat power, which has been mentioned in previous comments. The other is that the characters are prone to collapse, and the protagonist and important supporting characters are especially prone to collapse. This article is well written. The protagonist works hard and wins every step of the way. The character has always been actively or passively tied to the law of justice (once he was simulated to be forced to enter the demon sect, but it was considered reasonable and reasonable). All the decent supporting characters are also for the so-called Jindan Dao, where all living beings in this world come to plot and plan, which can be regarded as great love. The protagonist also first seeks to make a living and avenge his parents (this line is considered to be a complete one, the protagonist endures for a whole volume to complete), and then actively or passively binds himself to Jinyu and the master for the sake of great love. However, the villain side still has too little writing, not much characterization, and not enough cruelty. The advantage of simulation writing is that it can let the protagonist experience despair in advance, making the villain more three-dimensional, and even darkening one or two supporting characters of the protagonist (as long as it is reasonable and reasonable), and allowing the protagonist to save him in advance. These are common characterization techniques. In addition, there are still many holes dug: 1. "Qi Luck Skill" ⚠️Protagonist's practice 1️⃣ Now that the source has been explained clearly, what about the destination? In other words, does the protagonist want to repair? Whether there is any hidden plot (whether a suitable story can be made up) and whether it can be fully narrated is a difficult point, and it is also a major driver of the subsequent plot. Personal inference: 1️⃣It can be a technique condensed from the will of survival of cultivators in this world (breeding the golden elixir path), in order to condense the luck of this world to create an immortal. 2️⃣It can be a method for immortals from other worlds to gather the luck of this world and then harvest it. 2. Why does Jin Yu always seem to be familiar with the protagonist? (Maybe it has something to do with the simulator) It is unclear whether the protagonist and Jin Yu will have a subsequent emotional line. 3. Reincarnation of immortals from other worlds, exercises ⚠️Protagonist's training 2️⃣ Gua Master, I think it can be called a "Gua" master. When a Gua Master of the Path of Cause and Effect fights, the field will expand. At present, this profession is still too high, but the writing is OK, especially the final chapter of the volume is written with great courage and is connected with the love of all living beings. 4. The relationship between the immortals of other worlds and the Golden Alchemy Way, how to break through the subsequent realm of the Golden Alchemy Way, and whether it can be linked with the immortals of other realms, should be written with more tension. Best wishes

It's pretty good. The setting is referenced, but the plot and routines are not old. The combat power is well controlled and there is no feeling of overwhelming the combat power. It is very comfortable to read. It is a little regrettable that the writing is relatively bland both inside and outside the simulation. It feels like reading an outline. It lacks emotional ups and downs and the character's temperament charm is not obvious.

There aren't many problems with the plot, but some of the things hidden in the simulator mentioned earlier are not used enough to be regarded as simulations. Simulations account for most of the failures. Part of the logic is a bit fallacious, but it was patched later to serve the plot, which is okay. There is no contradiction that is too weird. As for the book's rating, it's really too low. It should be between 8 and 9. Overall quality is still preferred (ps: I know how to suppress tomatoes. If I don't do, I'm a eunuch)

There are some minor flaws, but it is still a good simulation novel. If it is not an invincible novel, it is best not to introduce combat power that is too high when the protagonist is at a low level. For example, foundation building can only introduce Yuanying at most, and Yuanying cannot appear for a long time. Because this is not an invincible novel. If you introduce too high a realm, the protagonist will not even be able to be an ant. The gap is too big. … Final comment: It's better to start at the beginning and get more and more history!

Five years ago, this book could only be said to be average, but now it can really be said to be a hit. The protagonist is a very normal person with his own beliefs. The character description of the minor characters is also very interesting, and it is gradual and step-by-step. The conspiracy theory is very interesting. I hope the author can correct his mentality and not finish the book. Every ending is a transformation and growth. Maybe this book will suddenly become popular when you write the next book.

I must give it a 5-star rating. After reading it, it is really invincible and good-looking. The 8 points means that the platform does not allow streaming. I sincerely say it is so good. I didn't read the book at first but I would read the sequel every day. It is invincible and good-looking. Recommended [Adoration] I am a real person Smecta [Angry]

So far, the simulation novels are pretty good. It's not just mindless. The common problem with simulation novels at the beginning is that they don't have much to see, so it's hard to improve. Now that the first volume is over, everything that needs to be laid out has been laid out. If I have time, I can summarize the current characters and forces and strengthen my memory.

The writing is okay, although there are some settings that make people feel uncomfortable to read, but this is not a really enjoyable article. Overall, this article is still very good, the readability is there, and the logic is online. Overall, it is not a success, but it can be seen that it is making progress.