Yu Huaijin had lived in Huangsi for ten years. On the day he returned to Beijing, he met a pair of wanton eyes.
A young man riding a horse, wearing black clothes and dark hair, caught a startling glance.
She lowered her eyes and swallowed the name back in her heart.
Song Yanzhi.
Later, he came to "apologise" every day, clumsily and sincerely, like a little beast that broke into her world, running rampant and cautious.
She thought she was probably obsessed with him.
But the smoke at the border came too quickly.
The night he left for the battle, he climbed over the wall and stood under her window, saying that he would wait for him to come back.
She clutched the plum blossom hairpin and waited year after year.
In the past three years, good news came frequently. For the next two years, there was no news.
Everyone said he was dead, and even his bones were transported back to the capital.
She didn't have time to cry, because the prince needed her, the court needed her, and the queen mother needed her.
She just put the hairpin into the deepest part of the dowry and never opened it again.
Until that day.
Outside the city gate, three thousand cavalry crushed the setting sun. The leading man got off his horse and walked towards her in front of thousands of people.
He became thinner and darker, his youthful spirit faded from his brows and eyes, and became more weathered and calm.
But the way he looked at her was exactly the same as five years ago.
"Shun Hua," he stood in front of her, his voice low and hoarse, "I'm back."
She looked at him and suddenly smiled, smiled, and shed tears.
The next day, the emperor granted her a wedding, and she was dressed in red makeup for ten miles.
With flowers flying all over the city, he held her hand and never let go.
# Loading Young General x Society is afraid of the daughter of the prime minister's house
# apologize for giving me a daughter-in-law
#Today is also a serious day to apologize.
Pure ancient language, an atypical strong female character, a growth-oriented heroine.
Reader comments
Not bad
But there are a few points: 1. Entering the school, Xue Meng, and the Book of Songs. Will these be too simple? There is still a lot that can be expanded in this aspect.
2. Can the ancient sayings use the previous descriptions as much as possible, such as Sichuan Fritillary Loquat Paste, etc. You can just say Loquat Paste directly. Adding Sichuan Fritillary Bundle to it will be very dramatic.
The author can write this way, but I think if the editing is more rigorous, the article will be of higher quality. The above are just suggestions.
This article is quite sweet. So far, it doesn't seem to have anything bad. I'll read it after I gain weight.
Not bad But there are a few points: 1. Entering the school, Xue Meng, and the Book of Songs. Will these be too simple? There is still a lot that can be expanded in this aspect. 2. Can the ancient sayings use the previous descriptions as much as possible, such as Sichuan Fritillary Loquat Paste, etc. You can just say Loquat Paste directly. Adding Sichuan Fritillary Bundle to it will be very dramatic. The author can write this way, but I think if the editing is more rigorous, the article will be of higher quality. The above are just suggestions. This article is quite sweet. So far, it doesn't seem to have anything bad. I'll read it after I gain weight.
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