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Although, I still want to ask the author, the protagonist should not be a woman, right? What is the meaning of "The Unmarried Man and Lily's CP painted pear clothes" [what], if it is a gender change, the plot will be very slow [face covering], after all, I came here for the "Unmarried Man" and the Lily CP painted pear clothes [crying], so the author asked, is the main character male or female?

Dragon Clan fan, very good article, and the main character will gradually change into a woman, Bai

Let me talk about my personal opinion: First of all, except for the setting of the original work, the plot has basically been changed, so it is more of a re-writing based on the original world view. The author's writing style is biased towards daily life, with a faint sense of warmth. This is why someone in the comment area said that it feels the same as Lu Mingfei. The small drawback is that the tension of the action is insufficient, so many battle scenes cannot be visualized in the mind. At the same time, the pace of entering the main story is too slow. The plot of the book title is basically presented after a hundred chapters, so it is difficult to retain some readers or cause skipping. Of course, the author also said that it is an if line to make up for regrets, so just take it as it comes.

After watching it for a while, many key characters are missing. Characters such as Nono, Professor, and Aki who played a big role in the plot in the early stage did not appear. As I said before, I don't know if they will appear later. Those who have not watched Dragons will find it good, but I have rewatched them all several times. I always feel that without these characters, the plot will be less interesting. To sum up, the evaluation is: OK [I learned it]

So, author, are you accepting both Natsumi and Eri? I mentioned CP Eri before, but now it's become CP Natsumi and Qingbai Eri [what]? If Natsumi and Eri were accepted together, then I would like it more [smile] [smile] [smile] @Manmiao

The relationship between Lu Mingfei and the protagonist was written based on a part of my life. Pure brotherhood! And I have written very restrainedly! There is something called brotherhood rather than ambiguity! If you really feel it's ambiguous, you can watch the Dragon Clan anime Lu Mingfei and Chu Zihang... And how Lu Mingfei and Chu Zihang were described in the original Jiangnan novel when they slept in the same bed. Isn't that ambiguous? Sometimes I also think... If I hadn't met my brother, I might not have had so many dark histories and wouldn't have been ridiculed or made a fool of myself. But in my opinion, none of this matters anymore. What matters is the process of making fools of each other, the birth of black history. Each of them is born in irreversible youth. "There is happiness", "there is pain", "I am disappointed" and "there is anger". But without exception, I don't regret knowing my brother. At this time our emotions have gone beyond so-called love. This may be the "friendship of life and death". In my opinion, this so-called brotherhood is far more important than love.

It was okay before, but the current Xia Mi gives me a very borderless look (personal feeling). Even if the two of them are together, I can't accept the fact that you bite Sister Na regardless of the occasion (at least it saves the protagonist some face, but if you can't do it in private, I can accept it). Other than this, there are no problems for now, and I think the writing is really good [smile]

I think it's okay. There are a few points that should be changed according to the original work, although it is said that it was created by a fan, Lu Mingze. The child is a cousin and not Lu Mingfei's. The younger brother Lu Mingze has a twin relationship with him. The Dragon Clan has two personalities, the Black King and the White King. I think it's incredible that Eriki can become the White King. The death of Holzog must be tragic.

Yes, compared to the author's first book that I read for the first time, it is a good improvement. It has improved a lot. The plot of the story is also okay.

It feels like it was expanded by AI.

It's so pitiful, the male protagonist is gone in Chapter 151 [crying] [crying]

Very, very beautiful👍(¯▽¯)👍, not bad, not bad, not bad

The plot designed by the author is very nice. Compared with the original plot, the author writes it more warmly, and the daily and combat plots are very eye-catching. I hope the author can add a perfect ending to the Dragon Clan.

I really like this sense of daily life and I don't have a knife [Like][Like][Like]

It's just that the progress jumped too fast.

If it's a remarriage, I feel like the protagonist is going to marry Lu Mingfei. I feel like Lu Mingfei has successfully conquered the protagonist.

It's great, but the pace is a bit slow

It's delicious, and it's packed very quickly [laughing]

It feels very good, cheers for the author

Still pretty good.

Does the author have a group? I would like to see a version without any modifications to the details.

I haven't seen the second half at first. Jiang Nan has written all about his cowardice. I really hope you won't go back to the same old path this time and don't write a life full of regrets.

It looks good, keep going, don't restrain yourself too much [Learned]

The structure is clear, and although it's a bit outrageous, it still looks good.

Sex changes too slowly!

I want to see the Tokyo chapter soon

Which floor do you send to Kangkang?

It is recommended to change as soon as possible. Don't delay too slowly Will it be a single dormitory then, or will it? [Eat melon]

Laolu liberal arts is not that bad @Manmiao And Laolu is from the liberal arts class.

Has it changed part of it? I could still find Xia Mi's Kiss Nader by searching the whole internet before, but now I can't find it.