Love Triangle: The Three Yanderes Who Invaded My Life

After reading part of it, I have some suggestions: First of all, except for Ningbao, I saw Xiao Wen and Teacher Yao having problems with their emotional lines. Especially Yao, who was moved by the sight of protecting his sister. In fact, this role can be replaced casually, and it is the same with Xiao Xi. The characteristics of the character itself cannot be fully reflected; Knowing, where did this feeling come from, let me give you an example: When I was young, Xiao Wen came home from school one day and found that her parents were in an emergency, but the door was locked and Xiao Wen forgot to bring the key. She could only sit outside the door. At this time, Su Yu saw it, invited her to the house, and took out the fruit candies he had collected during the New Year. There were only three but he gave her two and told her that she could stay as long as she wanted. I will accompany you. From then on, the two formed a friendship. This is just a very simple example, but it also explains the beginning of the relationship between the two, why Xiao Wen has been looking for him for 10 years, what is so special about this relationship, this part cannot be hidden, it can be interspersed in the communication between the two, instead of leaving you without saying goodbye for 10 years, I finally found you, I I have always loved you and then started umming, um, um, um, um, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, this is actually not the case with Ningbao, because Ningbao's feelings for the male protagonist are clearly explained from the beginning to the experience to the rise. I personally think that the main character's emotional experience must be well reflected and the character image can be used to reflect the preciousness of this relationship. Secondly, there are actually some repetitive expressions, but I understand, you have to meet the word count standard 😄 The author is actually quite good at writing and has great potential. Keep up the good work and I believe you can write good works.

It's so awesome. The portrayal of Qin Shihuang is completely different from what I've seen before. But if you think about it carefully, it makes sense. The part about Han Xin's rise to the top is so cool. Sit back and cheer [smile]

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Who wrote my daily routine and put it in my mobile phone?

It's very good for a newbie to have this level. Good luck, author 🤭

It's very beautiful. I hope the author won't give it away to my daughter. It's time to keep it 😏 [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

Am I the only one who thinks Wen Ruyu's love is humble??

It's well written. I support the new author 😏 Just look at some places and cherish them [Admiration]

Author, don't run away...

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