Wu Jianwen was killed by a grenade while competing with the Japanese for the national treasures Linglong Pagoda and Emerald Lotus, and accidentally traveled to another time and space.
Some people say that in general, time travel involves one treasure. Why did you write two treasures? Well? Time travel? Don't you just write whatever you want? For example, Guo Degang's time travel: time travel by touching the switch! Breaking through the wall and traveling back again!
Well! Stop nagging! Let's get down to business!
Let's first talk about the protagonist Wu Jianwen:
You want to say he is invincible! He lives worse than anyone else!
You can say that he is stubborn! Sometimes he also enjoys grudges!
You can say that he is greedy for money! He can give money to his brothers and sisters!
You said he is not greedy for money! He wants to take money when he sees it!
You want to say that he is lustful! He has rejected many women!
You want to say that he is not lustful! His motto is: I have never been Liu Xiahui!
You want to say that he is decisive in killing! He can be stubborn. How stubborn!
You have to say how stubborn he is! Sometimes he doesn't mind grudges!
After all, he is just an ordinary person who sees the big picture and never sticks to trivial matters!
He should never think about changing anything just to know the direction of history!
His motto is: I am a nobody! No one can be smaller than a small person!
Ouch! I almost forgot about the real thing: you have to say this and write it!
I think it's just average: average writing, average conception, average framework, anyway, it's just average!
What would you say is good about what you wrote? That's just looking at it: I can't help but have fun!
Listen and have fun!
Sometimes I just want to be happy because of a sentence!
Sometimes I want to have fun because of a scene!
Anyway, it's fun!
Reader comments
After reading more than a dozen chapters, it was quite fascinating.
After reading more than a dozen chapters, it was quite fascinating.