Naruto: Starting as a Commoner, I Just Want to Keep My Head Down Until the Finale

I think the writing is pretty good. Although there are some cheats, it doesn't seem to exceed the standard. The plot is compact and not superficial, which I like. Some Naruto stories can have fifty chapters for just one war. It is said to be a long novel but turns out to be a sea chapter. Danzo is still a toad lying on his back. It's OK to deal with him when the time comes according to the protagonist's idea. Don't lengthen the front line hahaha, he is really annoying 🤭. As long as the top four internal members are offline, whether it is Konoha or the protagonist, Duoduo will take off (ﾉωﾉ) Looking forward to it

I don't rate this book very well, mainly because the author doesn't look like a human being, but he doesn't look like an AI either. It can be seen from the overall arrangement of the plot that there should be a human being controlling it. The words and sentences are not AI-like, but some details really don't look like they were written by humans. It's very strange and hard to say. What are the main problems? One is that the motivation of the protagonist has never been clear. I still don't know what he wants to do. Sometimes he blocks the Akatsuki organization, and sometimes he helps the Akatsuki organization. Released Uchiha Hikaru but didn't attack. Not being the Hokage in Konoha but working hard at the same time. One of his clones even played a role in liberating the mind in a small country. Now it basically only appears in the dialogues of other characters. There is also the battle in the book. The strong one is always 1v1. Even if there is a group fight (not only the battle of the Akatsuki organization), the battlefield will be divided into separate battlefields. No one will bother you until someone dies (except when someone in the Akatsuki organization is about to die, he will be rescued by Obito or Black Zetsu). Even if his teammates are standing nearby watching the game. Even if it is a battle that should be 2v1 or nv1, that is, wait for your teammates to finish one set and make sure that the opponent has followed, and then switch to another person to play the next set. It is approximately equal to 1v1, because the person being beaten will never have insufficient chakra or have no time to extract it. There will never be a last hit in 1v1. After anyone launches a powerful attack, they will stand there with a solemn face, looking at the smoke and dust on the other side and asking: "Is it dead?" "Is it successful?" "Is it successful?", Again and again, every battle must have several "Is it successful?" "Is it dead" plots. I've lost count, and I can't find a single battle that I've missed so far. The personal rating is 6.8 Points, discounting three stars, and free reading on Tomato adds one star, for a total of 4 stars. Recently I heard that AI is very good at writing books now, and it can be written as if it were written by a real person. Then this book is very suspicious. The author never interacts with anyone. I asked the question "Did you succeed?" In the comment area countless times that day, but to no avail. The creative part is only at the beginning, and the rest is based on the usual development of the original idea, as if the author has lost his creativity. I guess it was written by AI. I'm also thinking about it correcting some strange problems. If it was written by AI, then I'm being pretentious.

The plot is quite novel. I have watched so many Naruto-themed movies. This is the only one where I saw Erzhuzhu getting pregnant and giving birth to twins. It was called revenge before leaving the last, and the one where Nagato was deceived made me doubt whether the philosophy of the Akatsuki organization was correct.

It's well written. If I had collected Tsunade, I would have given it a five-star rating.

Very well written, no heroine, very good. Crush when you need to crush, explore when you need to explore, try to kill everyone who can be killed, there is no such thing as a legendary villain.

In the early stage, the reading was good and smooth, but in the later stage, the sense of immersion dropped significantly, but the setting was good, and I expressed my appreciation for the protagonist's self-cultivation to become an "immortal human body". Digging deeper into other training systems in the ninja world enriches the three-dimensional and layered sense of the ninja world.

The pace is fast, and some transitions are not very obvious. If you watch it quickly, you will find that the protagonist is at home in the first part and on the battlefield in the next part. The protagonist will upgrade his skills, and other characters will change their original routes due to unexpected events. This aspect is very interesting. It won't change too much. You can always see new things. The fighting is very smooth and exciting. I can't stop watching [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

It's very beautiful, I hope I don't become invincible all of a sudden.

It's actually pretty good-looking! Tied in one go!

It's quite good to read, nothing major wrong with it, and it's a great book to read.