The mysterious figure of Celebolo appears in the Delta, and Shield Laosai joins forces to fight against the enemy! Geed appears, Beria is resurrected, everything is so abstract, feel free to spray it if you want!
Reader comments
The description in the article is very clear and the logic is very smooth, but as a novice reader, can it be described in a simpler way? The characters in the character line are too broad, and there is no story line. The author is great, so write more detailed expectations (9 names should also be short, to give readers memory, otherwise they will easily forget the names. At the same time, the storyline needs to add a little narrative expression. Use some exaggerated and more attractive stories to seduce novice readers like us.
I would like to give you a suggestion. Each character can be briefly described at the beginning of the article. The relationships and abilities of the characters are a bit confusing.
The description in the article is very clear and the logic is very smooth, but as a novice reader, can it be described in a simpler way? The characters in the character line are too broad, and there is no story line. The author is great, so write more detailed expectations (9 names should also be short, to give readers memory, otherwise they will easily forget the names. At the same time, the storyline needs to add a little narrative expression. Use some exaggerated and more attractive stories to seduce novice readers like us. I would like to give you a suggestion. Each character can be briefly described at the beginning of the article. The relationships and abilities of the characters are a bit confusing.