Mod Master in Hogwarts

It's okay, but the author uses less AI in character descriptions, especially when describing the eyes [face covering]. It either feels a bit like AI or a bit literary, but otherwise it's okay.

I just read 90,000 words, and it is very well written. Basically, there are no problems at all [laughs evilly] [likes] It's solid, that's right. [Thinking] Did our heroine Hermione's description of her academic performance at the beginning be a little exaggerated? Also, why Draco's personality has changed so much [Chigua] He's not the kind of kid who looks at people with his nostrils in the sky and is spoiled [Chigua] Please hurry up and update [smile][smile][smile] How can you sleep without updating 10,000 words in a day? Give me a quick 5 minute update!

The writing is very stable, without any bluster or too many quirks. However, there are relatively few conflicts, and I can feel that the protagonist and the entire plot are making steady progress step by step. What is reflected is not the growth of strength but the stability of the plot. It is one of the only four books that I have kept up to date with.

Welcome everyone to read this book

Very good, worth watching, the emotional line is okay, I hope to have more contact with Hermione, rather than a pendant [star]

Regarding the addition of cool MOD.

A relatively relaxed and cool article with no problems with the content. But it can't be said to be exciting, it can only be said to be ordinary. It would definitely be very good on a tomato.

You can watch it, Slytherin + Hermione [laughs] The plot is interesting, I look forward to the emergence of more interesting MODs and interesting parallel worlds [please ask for updates]

It can be seen that the AI ​​has been used a lot, but it has been partially repaired, so I will accept it reluctantly.

Well written, very graphic, five-star praise

The plot is not bad, I hope Hermione will be included later to make her less of a vase! Five-star praise!

Which time period is the timeline of that game compared to the original work? [Think]

It's very beautiful and thoughtful. It actually connects that game with Harry Potter. The content is also interesting. I just don't know why not many people watch it.

This book is really well written. I don't know why the rating is so low. It feels like it has combat power and emotional lines, etc. It's all very well written.

I can write very well [smile]

It looks great! It looks great!

Come on, it's very well written.

Look, it's so shameless

Looks good, the MOD is very interesting

Personally, I think it's okay, but it still needs more polishing, and there are some literary talents in this article.

You need to know that when I was young, I was a man of great ambition, and I once promised to be the best in the world.

Very good, but too short. ╮( •́ω•̀ )╭

I don't have much to say, but I personally still think it looks good.

It's okay for now The reason I changed it to four stars is because the author criticized me. If you don't mind traveling to parallel worlds, you can continue reading.

There are too many descriptions of the eyes, like light bulbs, lighting up again and again

It's okay. Why did it suddenly crack?

Chapter 96: How did Harry get extra points when the trio couldn't even pass the level?