HP: Lily Evans Ran Away Midway

It's very interesting. I understand what I had doubts about when reading the original work but couldn't figure it out. There is no such thing as bullying in the magic world and the law of the jungle must be followed. It is suspected that the reason why the schools are divided into four colleges is because the magic world has insufficient resources. After dividing people, the best will survive and the fittest will be eliminated, so as to better select the "strong ones".

So far, the author's ideas are very good. I really admire it. Looking forward to all the stories to come. [Send heart][Send heart] (Speaking of which, I prefer Penny's story.) But the first Lily's story was well written and not overwhelming. As for the old Potter dying, the middle Potter dying, the younger Potter not existing, and Black turning into a werewolf, I just want to say that it was well done. I'm a fan of Gary Oldman, but I don't dislike the character of Sirius Black. )

In fact, Penny could have left home instead of going home. When she came home, she still had expectations for the family ties in this life and wanted to completely cut off her expectations. Secondly, like the heroine of a sadistic novel, she had the idea of ​​hurting herself and making her family feel guilty later. In fact, there was no need to go back and hurt herself, ugh [rolls eyes]

Nice! I feel like Lily should be like this! [Love]

A very nice book. The several small worlds are well written. (Including the parts of One Piece that I don't understand at all, I didn't skip the chapter because it didn't feel good) Well, I haven't read HP's original novels or movies. I've only read a lot of fanfics~(¯▽¯~). Although I can't comment on whether the author's characters are OOC or not, I can say that the characters in the author's writings are very reasonable. They don't have exaggerated and unreasonable personalities and ways of doing things just for the sake of sweetness. What's more, it's quite rare that Tom (it's Tom, not Voldemort) can actually harm the world, and it doesn't feel like it's unreasonable to force him to do so. (To be honest, I haven't seen anything about CP Tom, and even in many articles, Tom = Voldemort, readers don't want him [face covering]) The last thing is to urge the author. It's simply not enough to read. Remember to open a new article soon. Damn it, just do it as a matter of fact, hahahahahahaha [making faces]

I had a pretty good idea and chose some female supporting characters in HP that had bad endings in the original plot. For rebirth or time travel, you must have a certain skill and know the original plot. The heroine usually strives to break away from the original plot to develop and improve herself, including contributing to the development of China. It's quite good to watch. At least the subjectivity of these female supporting characters has been improved and they have not become victims of the plot. The writing and logic could be improved, but it's not a big deal.

It's such a pity that the Evans Sisters story wasn't written into a full-length novel [Love]

Good-looking [love] It's in line with my taste, and there's nothing unacceptable about it. The entry points of different characters are novel and the plot is smooth and complete.

Well written! Like

Very nice! It's just too short

Not bad, at least in a sense it's another kind of perfection

Oh my gosh, I finally found a book where Lily is not a victim.

It's good to watch, but it's a pity that it ended so quickly. I'll pick and choose what I like.

The plot is very good. As for Sirius turning into a werewolf at the end, I think his pure retribution is quite good.

I feel that my understanding of the core of the characters is quite different from the original work, and some parts are a bit confusing, but the story is very complete.

Yes, the story line is quite complete, it's a relatively new theme, and it's nice to watch!

The angle is new, and the logic is even more consistent than Rowling's. The first half, Sli is wonderful.

It looks good, and it feels like it's interesting to tell the story from a different perspective.