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The plot is good, the writing is okay, but there is a typo in the introduction, and there is a problem with the bell section. I don't remember the description of the bell before, but in chapter 30, it says "the bell was shaking on her chest", and in chapter 31, the scene of wearing the bell is also written. No problem except that the update is too slow

Pretty good, just a little lacking

Sweet article, I don't understand why Ruan abandoned Mu Everything else is okay

It suits my taste perfectly, this is my food! The writing is also good.