Pirates: Use Pokémon Fruit to Build a Pirate Family

It's best not to give a Devil Fruit with Pokémon powers to others. You can give it to your own children. If you give this power to the other person because the other person is talented, it will be very poisonous. The protagonist gives away Pokémon fruits to others. The opponent is more talented than the protagonist. The fruit you eat is also on the same level as the protagonist. It's starting to become illogical. It is estimated that it will eventually collapse and force the setting of the protagonist. Otherwise, the protagonist will just be on the side of the road.

The thousand-meter dragon body and the lieutenant general are tied [awkward laughter] Come and eat together [like]

It's very interesting, the rhythm is quite satisfactory, the protagonist has a clear goal, and there is nothing particularly poisonous. Decisive in killing, chaotic evil stance, not the Holy Mother, coupled with the introduction of enslavement and the country's praise. There are some issues with the fighting scenes and combat power, which is not exciting enough, but it does not affect the viewing. Rayquaza's ability can continue to be developed, and the upper limit of Dragon Dance is cancelled. I want to see the 999th level of Dragon Dance [smile][smile][smile]

It is said that the protagonist actually has the power of the God of the Sky. Not to mention it is a devil fruit. It originally flew out of the protagonist's body and merged with the devil fruit, and then merged into the protagonist's body. Can the protagonist be immortal? After all, he is a god.

As a fan of Pokemon and One Piece, this book is actually pretty good. There are still some flaws though. First of all, the phantom fruit based on Pokémon is not expressive enough. Rayquaza Fruit is really well written. The author has written down the ultra-deep skill pool unique to the dragon series and the extremely recognizable mega evolution. However, the rest is not so good. The doll and the Blue Flame Blade Ghost basically just mentioned it, without any details. This actually raises the reading threshold in disguise. How do you let others who don't know Pokémon get immersed in your novel? I think it's best to mention it. For example, describe the appearance, put a picture, and add some scenes of fruit-ability users using their fruit abilities. Secondly, the character creation is slightly problematic. The author spends a lot of pen and ink on advancing the plot and ignores the shaping of some important characters. For example, the heroine and her brother who give birth to the protagonist's child actually have nothing to portray their image except daily scenes. This prevents the reader from empathizing with the protagonist's emotions towards them. Looks more like a tool man. In fact, I really appreciate this book. Compared with other Pokémon writers, it's actually quite high quality. At least it's not a formulaic phantom species that uses Pokémon fruits as ordinary fire-breathing and thunder-increasing physical beasts. I hope the author can continue to serialize!

The book is a good book, one of the best among Pirates fan fiction. But. I have to say but. There are too many original characters and it's very tiring to watch. It should be more relevant to the era and the strong men of this era. Some minor characters and even villains have too many scenes. I hope the author can balance it out. Come on come on

The author can understand people's words. Just because of this, I can give it 5 stars.

The plot is okay, but I hope that the fruits of my subordinates are not as powerful as they are. Just try not to use the magical beasts. After all, you are here to see the protagonist, not to see other people's subordinates. It's enough to reach the highest level of emperor level, but don't use the magical beast fruits.

The plot is attractive and the characters are well developed, but I feel that the author is a novice and the writing style is a little green, but it is still qualified as a refreshing article. Overall, give it a five-star support.

Personally, I feel that the writing is quite satisfactory and there is nothing poisonous about it. I can only say that it is readable.

Shamelessly give yourself a five star

Meng, if you like picking up rags, you can come, if you like to wear hats for yourself, you can come, and if you like double standards, you can come.

This type of invincibility is rare, please keep writing.

The author's writing is good [I learned] and there's nothing wrong with it. I hope it doesn't end badly [Sending my heart]

Come on, it's well written and very interesting. Come on, don't suck, come on [thinking]

There are a lot of little poisons, and there are two types of fish-men on Fish-Man Island, one is mermaids, and the other is fish-men. The author directly unified them into fish-men.

Not bad, really

How are the Qinglong fruits arranged?

It's so good that you'll be fascinated by it once you take a look at it.

A bit interesting, but too short. Please try more

The plot is good, you can watch it

Not bad, pretty good.

Still very good

It would be nice to have some big scenes later, Rayquaza is a great review

So far, everything is fine. I just reached the latest chapter after just 2 hours of listening to the book. You know what I mean?

It's okay to see this. What fruits have been given to others? The six elves, Black Rayquaza, and the Dual Swordsman Pokémon, Blue Flame Blade, are indeed very good-looking. Are there any Groudon and Kyogre from Fengyuan?

I finished it, the whole book is very satisfying to me, and the author also likes to add more

It's almost as good as what the reviews said.

It's pretty good, not bad, nothing bad about it