Quick Transmigration: Just Trying to Make a Decent Living in Jujutsu Kaisen and Grave Robbers' Chronicles

It looks good, and the setting is very good, but the author often uses the same sentence and writes some redundant words. Sometimes it is not necessary to write so clearly so that readers can understand it. Writing too much is not good. There is no need to always describe the characters too much. This will take up a lot of words and the plot will progress very slowly. If you don't know how to write about fighting scenes, you can try to avoid it, but overall it is okay. Anyway, the author has to work hard 😘😘

It's a very warm daily life, relaxed and moderate. It's time to play and train. The rhythm of the small world is also well grasped. The character of the heroine is also well shaped. She is neither soft nor hard, but she also has shining points. She is kind within the scope of her abilities. It is a super healing text!

The plot is well written, but there are a lot of repetitive descriptions. Words that have only been written once in the previous chapters will appear exactly the same in the next chapter. They will be repeated many times, and there are too many similar descriptions of the male protagonists. It feels like there is nothing new. But I believe the author Baobao will write better

It feels very healing, and the writing is very smooth, but I feel that the heroine's baby has a kind of innocent cruelty... The male protagonist is suddenly in a strange world, and then he can't go back, and he can't see the people he is close to... I feel that the response is very dull, but overall it is still very good, and I feel very relieved.

It's pretty good, but I don't know when Wu Xie and the others will arrive. By the way, is the Wu Xie here from the Widow Xie Shahai period or the Wu Xie period from Qixing Lu Palace? I do hope that the sand sea period is better [laughing] I personally think that the sand sea period is better, and I will bring Li Cu and the others~heheheheheheixiazai, the little flower fat mother and others are all indispensable, I hope it is a big one It's a long story, let's take a look at some classic movies, such as Let's Go to the School Tomb, Mr. Zombie, etc., They can also go to Zombie World, etc. There are also Nightmare, Xingye's movies, etc. There are many classic horror movies [Love][Love]

It's particularly beautiful, the interactions are interesting, and the settings are also very novel. Maybe some of the same words are repeated to create a light feeling, right? But it's a little too much. The mint green hair tie and the thin fingers...

I personally think this book is quite interesting. It satisfies the two types of fan fiction that I often read. I have thought about whether to write a crossover of my own, but it just satisfies my needs, and the characters are not OOC. I personally think it is quite interesting, but I don't understand. I write very well, why are so few people reading it?

In fact, I think the details are well written, and the emotional flow of hidden poking is very natural. I just feel that the main line is a bit unclear. I originally thought it was a bit like an infinite dungeon, but there are also many descriptions of daily life, and the details of daily descriptions are very healing. However, the male protagonists are summoned at a time point when they have not experienced so many things. For them, the current cure is a happy ordinary daily life (doesn't it feel like a cure?) But maybe there is too much content that I want to write, but I feel that I can't grasp the key points and it is a bit scattered? Many things were not explained clearly. As mentioned earlier, the time for summoning the tomb robbers was early, and some of them did not know each other yet, but after they were summoned together, there was no description of this aspect. Moreover, they had just gone to Changbai Mountain to participate in a book signing event before summoning them. They are all very smart people. Wouldn't they be curious about why the heroine knows about them? Does she understand them so well? The people who were cursed back were normal when they first came. They wanted to attack the female protagonist (but the character design was more correct) and said that the reward for the mission was to be resurrected from the dead. However, the time point for summoning the male protagonists was very early, and they didn't know their endings. Why would this reward be attractive to them? And do you believe this so easily? Then you feel that the love line of 5t5 is the most obvious? Other people's emotional lines feel more mixed with friendship and family affection. And the author loves the cat-shaped heroine very much, she feels a bit like a grandmother. Then there's the question: Is the heroine too gentle? Originally, I knew that I was angry when I was bound to do tasks in dangerous places, and I clamored to be untied. I only accepted this because of the high salary (isn't that essentially a transaction?). Then faced with a system that was not very reliable and kept talking half the time, I gave 200,000 to upgrade the system when I was not rich. Just... I find it difficult to understand... The system is also very arrogant... I don't see where the system can actually help the heroine, nor where their relationship grows... Could it be that the heroine thinks the system is cute? I am so respectful but not Sister Li

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It's beautiful, the emotional line is very delicate, and the heroine is easy to relate to even as an ordinary reader! The plot of the training really resonated with TvT. As a otaku who doesn't work hard on her limbs, running is really tiring!!! There is a feeling that the body is running in front and the soul is floating behind... The heroine's character is also very good, as warm as a little sun!