Curse Back the Stolen Pen and Travel Back Through Time to Accompany Me into the Small World

It looks good, and the setting is very good, but the author often uses the same sentence and writes some redundant words. Sometimes it is not necessary to write so clearly so that readers can understand it. Writing too much is not good. There is no need to always describe the characters too much. This will take up a lot of words and the plot will progress very slowly. If you don't know how to write about fighting scenes, you can try to avoid it, but overall it is okay. Anyway, the author has to work hard [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's a very warm daily life, relaxed and moderate. It's time to play and train. The rhythm of the small world is also well grasped. The character of the heroine is also well shaped. She is neither soft nor hard, but she also has shining points. She is kind within the scope of her abilities. It is a super healing text!

It's pretty good, but I don't know when Wu Xie and the others will arrive. By the way, is the Wu Xie here from the Widow Xie Shahai period or the Wu Xie period from Qixing Lu Palace? I do hope that the sand sea period is better [laughing] I personally think that the sand sea period is better, and I will bring Li Cu and the others~heheheheheheixiazai, the little flower fat mother and others are all indispensable, I hope it is a big one It's a long story, let's take a look at some classic movies, such as Let's Go to the School Tomb, Mr. Zombie, etc., They can also go to Zombie World, etc. There are also Nightmare, Xingye's movies, etc. There are many classic horror movies [Love][Love]

It feels very healing, and the writing is very smooth, but I feel that the heroine's baby has a kind of innocent cruelty... The male protagonist is suddenly in a strange world, and then he can't go back, and he can't see the people he is close to... I feel that the response is very dull, but overall it is still very good, and I feel very relieved.

The plot is well written, but there are a lot of repetitive descriptions. Words that have only been written once in the previous chapters will appear exactly the same in the next chapter. They will be repeated many times, and there are too many similar descriptions of the male protagonists. It feels like there is nothing new. But I believe the author Baobao will write better

It's particularly beautiful, the interactions are interesting, and the settings are also very novel. Maybe some of the same words are repeated to create a light feeling, right? But it's a little too much. The mint green hair tie and the thin fingers...

I personally think this book is quite interesting. It satisfies the two types of fan fiction that I often read. I have thought about whether to write a crossover of my own, but it just satisfies my needs, and the characters are not OOC. I personally think it is quite interesting, but I don't understand. I write very well, why are so few people reading it?

It's very beautiful, come on, madam, don't stop updating, keep up to date with the latest, it's hard to find the food [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Cool][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

It's beautiful, the emotional line is very delicate, and the heroine is easy to relate to even as an ordinary reader! The plot of the training really resonated with TvT. As a otaku who doesn't work hard on her limbs, running is really tiring! ! ! There is a feeling that the body is running in front and the soul is floating behind... The heroine's character is also very good, as warm as a little sun!

Besides the male protagonist who curses and steals the pen, are there any other protagonists?

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It's not bad, it's good-looking. Is that the manga of Gojo Satoru? I haven't read it. Also, overall it's good. The heroine is mature and timid! I prefer to watch each episode together. There is no feeling of emotional drama... I don't know if the baby is born! ! !

It's nice, but it's just Tomb Raiders Notes. When will the people come?

Good looking! It's a very novel article. It's very heartwarming in daily life. It would be nice if there were more.

No, I remember I commented, and I was going to use the large size to prove how long I had spent reading. It's really beautiful. The heroine is not delicate or pretentious at all. She is a girl with her own ideas and a strong heart. Getting along is very warm and natural, no flirting I'm so hungry, I don't have enough to eat, I'm soooooo, I don't dare to post anything, I feel like after reading it, I prefer dungeons and training, I hope the ratio is more [shy]

It's the first time I watch an anime and a drama at the same time. It's very refreshing. I like the female protagonist very much. She's not invincible right away. She will grow up slowly. She's strong and won't cry all the time.

Very exciting, I haven't encountered such a good book in a long time!

It's a long-running plot with delicate emotions. I really like it. Keep up the good work. I really like this book and don't stop updating it.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Currently my favorite type

I love you so much~ I will love you forever~

It's very beautiful. I highly recommend it for daily warmth and comedy. The heroine's baby is also working very hard to grow up [shy][shy][shy]

It's really beautiful! ! ! Very warm! The heroine's baby is also super cute!

Very nice and novel linkage. I like it😍

It's a very novel subject matter, please don't be fooled and write well.

This book written by Goddess is also very beautiful. Goddess, I will always follow you [Sending Hearts]

It feels very immersive. Can you write less horror stories in the future? So scary 😱

I'm really looking forward to when the author will write about going to the small world to do tasks. It's best to be a little scary [Adoration]

It looks very nice, and there are many ideas that ordinary people would never think of.

I've seen it so far, and it's more beautiful than most of the ones I've seen.