The System Defected to the Competition from the Start. Did I Transmigrate for Nothing?

Very typical male video elements, but the addition of CP neutralizes the two. It tastes very good, it tastes very good🥰. Dual system setting, both people have systems, the system appears in a short space, one is to use the system to connect the two people, and the other is used as a strengthening point in the later stage. It's this main line that is getting stronger, the pulling feeling of the emotional line, oh my. The unruly boy's spirit knife × calm and restrained, but actually a sultry gun, this one is delicious, I won't say much 😋 The ten newly updated chapters made me so happy that I almost burst out laughing, okay? Boss, can you give me millions of updates a day to scare me😍? I'm anxious, urgent, urgent, I'm already crying😭

It's a rather interesting setting~ There are no big flaws at the moment. I can tell whether it's an old enemy or a lover. [Eating Melon] Daily upgrade to fight monsters. If you can control the expansion of combat power in the later stage, it should be super exciting [Blowing Kiss] I don't understand why the rating is so low. I came from the author's other book Silly Roe Deer, hhhhh. I looked at the ratings and comments and was a little worried that it was too vicious, but thinking about the fact that the author's writing style in Silly Roe Deer is already relatively mature, there is no reason why it would be so bad [laughing and crying] Is it because this book has too many emotional lines between two men, and the male readers attracted to it can't accept it? But it's a male video's subject matter and writing style, so the probability of female readers reading it is lower [face covering] It's not about instructing the author to write. I'm giving some sincere suggestions. If you see it, you can refer to it as appropriate. After all, I'm not a professional. [Blowing kiss] I think the author's writing about friendship between men is very interesting. If the emotional line is difficult to write, follow the previous friend's comment The emotional writing is also awesome, just don't add random CPs; and judging from the comments, there are a lot of female readers, but the ability to shape female characters is still a little weaker than male characters. It's understandable, just like the male characters in some female videos are not interesting. We can use our strengths and avoid weaknesses, and don't write too viciously. Fortunately, I still read it ヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ and found a little gold ~ and the author is really cute and hardworking. I wish you can break out of the cocoon soon.

Claes is also very awesome here. . Then I discovered why this little Aiao is so cute? Holy shit. . Then this old Ye also forgot about his roots. I won't tell you what it looks like in the early stage and what it looks like in the later stage. . I don't understand. In the early stage, when Ao Ao spoke, he always spoke sarcastically. . . Later, when Ao Ao spoke, he just kept giggling. This man should come from a stinky Lele. . Others: Li Ao, who do you think is smarter, you or Ye Zheng? Aoao: That must be me! Others: Ye Zheng, what do you think? Ye Zheng: He is right. This man is completely in the "I don't know, but he listens to my wife" state. . Anyway, this book is very awesome. . The plot line accounts for 70% and the emotional line accounts for 30%. Perhaps. . Anyway, it looks very comfortable to me. . Ao Ao has been enjoying the joy of dipping beans! ! Anyway, I am very happy to see it, so I will go. . And the little gestures and interactions are so cute, like squeezing each other's little hands and so on. . I can only say that this Ao Ao is still too cute and Lao Ye is still too boring ᗜⰙᗜ I finished reading it in a day and a half. . . Damn, it's a little short. . (╥_╥)

Exploding lights! ! ! ! It took me a whole night to tie it up, but after reading this book, I realized how good the taste of male videos is. What is duplicitous, arrogant, cold and innocent? Ye Thief

Nonsense: When I saw the words [complete book], my first reaction was that it was funny and unbelievable, so I put a question mark. After flipping through a few pages, I realized that the book was really finished (face covering) Okay, so good, but the emotional line is still not obvious in the early stage! I have fallen in love with this type of book with male characters and two male protagonists... In the later stage, it is more like a clingy little couple, and it is very sweet. In the later stage, it may be a bit too deliberate or weird for some people (well, I don't know what to say, but it was acceptable when I read it. This kind of sweetness in the later stage may offend some people, so I will say it!). Hehe, I thought it was a bit hasty at first, but after thinking about it, I realized that the universe is so big, they should write the future stories themselves! The ending should be an oe open ending (?) Rocket-like upgrade flow! (But I am a native dog and I love watching.) Hey, it's a pity that I didn't see the confession, but it was tacitly understood and it was very delicious. Look at me chewing it (chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew. I won't say much about the subject matter. I've seen very few of this type, but I still think it's pretty good! (Purely subjective evaluation, please refer with caution.) Rivals turned lovers are still so delicious... The author has a good way of writing pampering, so the corners of my mouth froze in laughter. ——26.7.12 00:47 (I'm so sleepy and I don't know what I'm talking about.)

It is very suitable for friends who like to watch male-heroine videos and also like to clap into cp. This book is very, very suitable, and the friendship aspect is also very suitable. This is the most enjoyable cp book I have read recently. I feel that it is a little gold. I don't like to review books because I am not very good at evaluating the quality of a book. I can only Whether I enjoyed reading it or not, I didn't like it, but the reviews for this book are too low. I'm afraid the author won't be able to persevere, so I'd like to give some support. I also hope that this book will become popular enough to have a real person listen to the book. I love listening to books, but the first half was all about listening to books. When things got ambiguous later on, I decided to read it instead. I love listening and watching.

It's good-looking, the subject matter is novel, the protagonist is very funny, and the two sworn enemies have different scenes. One scene is full of golden light and can be called a trench, while the other one is ordinary or even shabby. Even if the system is robbed, it is not dark at all. All I can say is that it's not a loss if you enter the trap. The author's introduction is honest and doesn't deceive me.

To me, this one is pretty good-looking. The main thing is that it feels good to upgrade. The emotional scenes don't take up a big part, but they have enough tacit understanding. I quite like it. The reason for the low rating is probably due to the two male protagonists. Some people will give it a low score because the two male protagonists are brainless. If the male protagonist is ambiguous but does not name the two male protagonists, it will actually get more readers because both male and female protagonists are accepted. But I really enjoyed watching this one. It's rare to see such a natural emotional drama.

The author is totally amazing. I felt numb all over while watching the secret kiss scene and felt like I was in heaven. The emotional scene between the two was also very good. It was even better than what some female video authors wrote. It was not enough to read. I hope the author will open a new book [crying] [sending heart] [sending heart]

It looks pretty good so far, and the characters are vividly drawn. However, there are indeed problems at the beginning. One is why the system is untied, and the other is that if there are two male protagonists, the protagonist's hook is a little small. Is there any money consumption in the Krypton gold system? It has artificial intelligence. It is very simple to check the account anomalies, and others will notice that there is a complete mismatch between making money and spending money. I hope the author can ensure the update and optimize the above points. By the way, the title and introduction of the book also need to be changed, and the development of Nemesis is not visible at the moment. For example, the system ran away and fell on a brother.