The Starting System Jumped to the Other Team, Was My Time in Vain?

Very typical male video elements, but the addition of CP neutralizes the two. It tastes very good, it tastes very good🥰. Dual system setting, both people have systems, the system appears in a short space, one is to use the system to connect the two people, and the other is used as a strengthening point in the later stage. It's this main line that is getting stronger, the pulling feeling of the emotional line, oh my. The unruly boy's spirit knife × calm and restrained, but actually a sultry gun, this one is delicious, I won't say much 😋 The ten newly updated chapters made me so happy that I almost burst out laughing, okay? Boss, can you give me millions of updates a day to scare me😍? I'm anxious, urgent, urgent, I'm already crying😭

It's a rather interesting setting~ There are no big flaws at the moment. I can tell whether it's an old enemy or a lover. [Eating Melon] Daily upgrade to fight monsters. If you can control the expansion of combat power in the later stage, it should be super exciting [Blowing Kiss] I don't understand why the rating is so low. I came from the author's other book Silly Roe Deer, hhhhh. I looked at the ratings and comments and was a little worried that it was too vicious, but thinking about the fact that the author's writing style in Silly Roe Deer is already relatively mature, there is no reason why it would be so bad [laughing and crying] Is it because this book has too many emotional lines between two men, and the male readers attracted to it can't accept it? But it's a male video's subject matter and writing style, so the probability of female readers reading it is lower [face covering] It's not about instructing the author to write. I'm giving some sincere suggestions. If you see it, you can refer to it as appropriate. After all, I'm not a professional. [Blowing kiss] I think the author's writing about friendship between men is very interesting. If the emotional line is difficult to write, follow the previous friend's comment The emotional writing is also awesome, just don't add random CPs; and judging from the comments, there are a lot of female readers, but the ability to shape female characters is still a little weaker than male characters. It's understandable, just like the male characters in some female videos are not interesting. We can use our strengths and avoid weaknesses, and don't write too viciously. Fortunately, I still read it ヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ and found a little gold ~ and the author is really cute and hardworking. I wish you can break out of the cocoon soon.

Claes is also very awesome here. . Then I discovered why this little Aiao is so cute? Holy shit. . Then this old Ye also forgot about his roots. I won't tell you what it looks like in the early stage and what it looks like in the later stage. . I don't understand. In the early stage, when Ao Ao spoke, he always spoke sarcastically. . . Later, when Ao Ao spoke, he just kept giggling. This man should come from a stinky Lele. . Others: Li Ao, who do you think is smarter, you or Ye Zheng? Aoao: That must be me! Others: Ye Zheng, what do you think? Ye Zheng: He is right. This man is completely in the "I don't know, but he listens to my wife" state. . Anyway, this book is very awesome. . The plot line accounts for 70% and the emotional line accounts for 30%. Perhaps. . Anyway, it looks very comfortable to me. . Ao Ao has been enjoying the joy of dipping beans! ! Anyway, I am very happy to see it, so I will go. . And the little gestures and interactions are so cute, like squeezing each other's little hands and so on. . I can only say that this Ao Ao is still too cute and Lao Ye is still too boring ᗜⰙᗜ I finished reading it in a day and a half. . . Damn, it's a little short. . (╥_╥)

Exploding lights! ! ! ! It took me a whole night to tie it up, but after reading this book, I realized how good the taste of male videos is. What is duplicitous, arrogant, cold and innocent? Ye Thief

Nonsense: When I saw the words [complete book], my first reaction was that it was funny and unbelievable, so I put a question mark. After flipping through a few pages, I realized that the book was really finished (face covering) Okay, so good, but the emotional line is still not obvious in the early stage! I have fallen in love with this type of book with male characters and two male protagonists... In the later stage, it is more like a clingy little couple, and it is very sweet. In the later stage, it may be a bit too deliberate or weird for some people (well, I don't know what to say, but it was acceptable when I read it. This kind of sweetness in the later stage may offend some people, so I will say it!). Hehe, I thought it was a bit hasty at first, but after thinking about it, I realized that the universe is so big, they should write the future stories themselves! The ending should be an oe open ending (?) Rocket-like upgrade flow! (But I am a native dog and I love watching.) Hey, it's a pity that I didn't see the confession, but it was tacitly understood and it was very delicious. Look at me chewing it (chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew chew. I won't say much about the subject matter. I've seen very few of this type, but I still think it's pretty good! (Purely subjective evaluation, please refer with caution.) Rivals turned lovers are still so delicious... The author has a good way of writing pampering, so the corners of my mouth froze in laughter. ——26.7.12 00:47 (I'm so sleepy and I don't know what I'm talking about.)

It is very suitable for friends who like to watch male-heroine videos and also like to clap into cp. This book is very, very suitable, and the friendship aspect is also very suitable. This is the most enjoyable cp book I have read recently. I feel that it is a little gold. I don't like to review books because I am not very good at evaluating the quality of a book. I can only Whether I enjoyed reading it or not, I didn't like it, but the reviews for this book are too low. I'm afraid the author won't be able to persevere, so I'd like to give some support. I also hope that this book will become popular enough to have a real person listen to the book. I love listening to books, but the first half was all about listening to books. When things got ambiguous later on, I decided to read it instead. I love listening and watching.

It's good-looking, the subject matter is novel, the protagonist is very funny, and the two sworn enemies have different scenes. One scene is full of golden light and can be called a trench, while the other one is ordinary or even shabby. Even if the system is robbed, it is not dark at all. All I can say is that it's not a loss if you enter the trap. The author's introduction is honest and doesn't deceive me.

To me, this one is pretty good-looking. The main thing is that it feels good to upgrade. The emotional scenes don't take up a big part, but they have enough tacit understanding. I quite like it. The reason for the low rating is probably due to the two male protagonists. Some people will give it a low score because the two male protagonists are brainless. If the male protagonist is ambiguous but does not name the two male protagonists, it will actually get more readers because both male and female protagonists are accepted. But I really enjoyed watching this one. It's rare to see such a natural emotional drama.

The author is totally amazing. I felt numb all over while watching the secret kiss scene and felt like I was in heaven. The emotional scene between the two was also very good. It was even better than what some female video authors wrote. It was not enough to read. I hope the author will open a new book [crying] [sending heart] [sending heart]

It looks pretty good so far, and the characters are vividly drawn. However, there are indeed problems at the beginning. One is why the system is untied, and the other is that if there are two male protagonists, the protagonist's hook is a little small. Is there any money consumption in the Krypton gold system? It has artificial intelligence. It is very simple to check the account anomalies, and others will notice that there is a complete mismatch between making money and spending money. I hope the author can ensure the update and optimize the above points. By the way, the title and introduction of the book also need to be changed, and the development of Nemesis is not visible at the moment. For example, the system ran away and fell on a brother.

The protagonist is rising, hahaha, I also bought it, it is a novel with both male and female characteristics (dark and twisted crawling, weird and crazy Jie Jie laughs)

I can only say that I enjoyed watching it [heartfelt], especially after the main character Li Ao awakened his memory. It is really an upgrading of the male porn channel. It is still a two-men, both have golden fingers, and it is still the kind of two men who go from old enemies to friendship and then to ambiguity. I like this kind of setting. It is really rare to find such two men in male videos. Although the relationship between the protagonists progresses slowly, I think it is very reasonable. After all, the relationship was hostile at the beginning, and Ye Zheng also obtained the krypton gold system from Li Ao. The relationship between the two parties can be said to be in dire straits, but it is this setting that makes the relationship between the two parties more tense. You are strong. I am also strong, and both parties will not lag too far behind each other. A proper double-powerful flow will still have a great promotion effect on each other's feelings [admiration], but there are too few updates, not enough to watch [almost crying], I hope the author can update more, and never stop updating [almost crying]

To be honest, I was impressed the moment I clicked on the introduction. The feeling of powerlessness that comes when you just get hope and then turn around and realize that fate has made a big joke is written so vividly by the author. Li Ao's words "please stop making trouble" and the last question mark, you can feel his collapse through the screen. But it is precisely this kind of start that makes people look forward to his next journey - without the blessing of the system, he can only go up step by step on his own. This kind of story of a comeback against the wind is the most poignant. I also like the author's setting. He did not write the protagonist to look like Long Aotian from the beginning, but gave him the most outrageous start: the system ran away and he ran into the hands of his archenemy. This contrast is really wonderful, and it makes Li Ao's character stand out immediately. He is not a born strong man, he is just an ordinary person who has just traveled through time and wants to survive by relying on the system, but fate refuses to give him even this hope. I'm really looking forward to seeing how he finds his own way in such a desperate situation. Thank you for bringing such a good story. I feel reassured by the stable updates and will always support it. Like like like [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

It's good to watch, and the main character is very likable. So cute! I hope it can be continued, and the number of readers will increase with more chapters. Then there are the system issues mentioned in the main low-star ratings: The system being robbed is not part of the title of the book. If you can rob it back so easily, what is the meaning of the title? Moreover, the protagonist does not have other cheats, and there are books on the market that use krypton money to become stronger. It is not impossible to read. If the protagonist is a rich second generation + a pure system, then it is not a brainless and cool novel. . .

It's really good-looking. There shouldn't be too much difference in strength between Ye and Li. It would look good if the two of them are evenly matched.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I re-read the synopsis, fearing that I had read the wrong category. Amiya was so upright, as if I had traveled back in time to a boy's classic supernatural story ten years ago [laughs], which made me feel a little affectionate. Although I have just watched the beginning, I really like the character of the protagonist. It is fun to watch the upgrade flow battles and the cute straight male interactions. There is such a beautiful thing in the world [Sending Hearts]. It is not pretentious at all. I will definitely continue to follow it. Good luck to the author. I love you more. I love you.

It's a tie. The writing style is very classic. It's a male protagonist, but the added elements spice up the taste very well. It's a very enjoyable upgrade flow. While watching it, I can't help but think about when the relationship between the two protagonists has progressed.

It's very interesting, the plot is very interesting, and the daily bickering is also very fun. I just like the touching brotherhood. I hope the author writes more ambiguous plots. Please, don't let it turn into love in the end. I feel that some affection lasts longer than love. I also like another book: Silly Roe Deer.

Like it very much! The style is as familiar as the author's previous book. I recommend reading the previous book as well ❤️ Updates are fast and stable. This book was released without us having to wait long. I would like to praise the hard-working author. ៷>ᴗ<៷ Both Li Shao and Xiao Ye have good image portrayal. They like to pretend to be cool but they are really cool! He is quite able to endure hardships and is brave. He does not shrink from fear when facing high-level enemies, and just fights fiercely across levels! Of course, it's not a one-size-fits-all competition. The growth of the two of them is also very obvious, and they are not the type that relies purely on golden fingers. From enmity to common hatred, the relationship between the two develops smoothly. This kind of straight man tastes the most delicious ❤️ No one can resist the love of brotherhood when reading this book, no one! ! ! The author's style is still light and funny. Most of the characters who have appeared have a bit of humor in them. Hahaha, I like it very much and I am very happy to watch it. The plot development is quite smooth and reasonable so far, and there are no flaws. If it develops later, I will look forward to revenge! ! ! And there is... (๓´˘`๓) Author Author We love you! So can you add some liver?

It's so beautiful that I couldn't bear to read it. I just watched it while looking at which chapter I had reached and how many more chapters there were. I really couldn't bear to read it. It's really beautiful. It has the flavor of a male novel and the flavor of two male protagonists. It's a combination of the two. I don't know what to say. Everyone, go check out the comment section. These are the masters of storytelling. I can't speak from experience. It's really a bit incoherent. Anyway, the change of emotions is very natural. When I saw it, I smiled like an aunt, and then the food tasted delicious. It looked really good. It really did. But because this is a male video, some male colleagues are watching it. If they see the system change in the first three chapters and the system runs away, they will follow suit and leave a two-star, bad review. After all, the golden finger appears in Chapter 6, so some people will run away, but if they can continue to watch it, it is really good to watch, not bad. If you can tell me more, just go and watch it. I haven't finished it yet. After finishing, I look forward to beating up Xiao Nanzi and Xiao Jingang. Looking forward to their meeting

I personally think it's good, I like this kind of straight-leaning stuff. As for the system problem, I think it has nothing to do with Ye, it is the system that unbundled it by itself. But the conversation between the next two people was a bit extreme. Overall I like it very much, the writing is pretty good [laughs]

I finished chasing it and I didn't actually react when I read the full text. I was stunned for a moment and felt a sourness welling up in my heart. I really didn't expect it to end so soon. I felt empty in my heart. Ye Zheng and Li Ao finally had a perfect ending. I think this book is fast-paced and the upgrades are also very fast. I enjoyed reading it. Sometimes I am really happy to see the sweet couple. From bitter enemies to lovers, this setting is really something I never get tired of. I like this book very much. You must be 99 to be proud and proud. I wish the young couple a happy day every day.

I love watching brotherhood in uncensored movies. Author, you have to continue! ! ! ! !

The writing is also very awesome. It's the best book I've read during this period. It's almost as if men get menstruation and women go crazy after reading it! And it's very cool, there's nothing toxic about it, the interaction between the two of them is so cute, I even brought my relatives and friends over to watch it, it's so beautiful😋❤️

Li Ao is a complete kitten! ꜀(^. .^꜀ )꜆੭ The old enemy is my wife! Gemini is a couple! Proud and proud 99! What makes these two particularly sweet are the little details, their little movements and expressions are so cute! (๓´˘`๓)

In the early stages, it was a typical male porn story, but after Ye's trip to the cave, everything became wonderful. [Shy] Li Ao just wants a cat sculpture! What a cute (｡･ω･｡) very smart kitten The relationship between the two has changed very subtly since this Ye started doing craft work. This Ye has been trying to conquer himself, and he started to pamper, love, become ruthless, forget his feelings, and don't know the harmony between heaven and earth (*^▽^*) All in all, all in all, it's delicious!

Very interesting! It's quite novel that the system (type) transfer caused the two people to have secrets from each other. There is a kind of relationship change from old enemy (at the beginning) → teammate → later development, which is almost the same. In short, it is shocking and delicious. Finally, come on, teacher! [Blowing kiss] It's really delicious. Just let nature take its course, and the writing style and taste are really delicious😋😋 Even if I don't write about the two male protagonists, I think it's still a very interesting article, and it would be even more delicious if I added it [Sending my heart] Part Three: The ending is indeed a bit sudden, but it is understandable. The data in this book is indeed not very good. But I still like the teacher's writing! I wish the teacher good luck with his new book!

Congratulations on the completion! I have a lot to say, I have come across two books. The protagonists in both books have a very old male porn flavor, but with a little ambiguity, which is super cool! As for this book, I have to say that the ancient double-binding setting of precious treasures is indeed full of love, from hostility to acquaintance, companionship, mutual survival, and love. Wow! Sure enough, I still can't resist this ancient ruthless flavor! ! !

It's very well written!!! [Adoration] [Adoration] I originally watched the dual heroes with two male protagonists, but many of the two heroes basically feel a little OOC when they get together or are all about emotions, which makes it feel awkward, but this brotherhood is really fragrant, and the characterization of the characters is also great. (Later I saw Nangong in the comment area. Changge clicked on the author's other works and found that I had also read one of them [Flying Kiss] [Adoration] [Adoration])

At first I just tried it because I was out of books, but Suicheng thought this thing is so good, and its plot is very compact and high-energy throughout. Then I read more than 100 chapters in one breath, and then finished the book in two days. But maybe this relationship line needs to be a little slower. Well, I saw that the two people have made obvious progress, probably a little more than 100 chapters, but it's okay. After all, the relationship in the early stage needs to be foreshadowed, and the later development is faster. The relationship between the two people also heats up rapidly, and it is very delicious. One is a cold-faced cute and the other is a hot-faced cute. Xiao Ye, you can continue to be proud of it. This is a very special male video, both in terms of writing style and plot. It has the flavor of male videos, you know. It's also very cool to watch them fight monsters and upgrade. Although I don't often read male novels, so I'm a bit vague about the divisions of some realms in them, but it doesn't affect the viewing experience at all. The final ending can be regarded as an open ending, because it also clearly implies that the two people will continue to fight together to upgrade, become stronger, and then go to the universe to continue to improve themselves, but in fact it can be regarded as he. To sum up, I think this book is very interesting and worth giving a try. The last one, Zhengzheng Aogu99 [full]😋✅🉑