[No System + ruthless decisiveness + devoted couples]
Strings are the foundation of all things in the myriad heavens, and the foundation of a cultivator’s existence.
When the young Fang Che finds a girl’s body on his rooftop, he discovers not only her remains, but also an eternity erased by the universe.
He is an ordinary man without a string, yet shares a heartbeat with a godlike being beyond all strings. She is an orphan of the myriad heavens, left with nothing but an empty body waiting to be filled.
When the skies of the previous tribulation collapse into ashes, and the gods of the myriad heavens turn to dust, the embers of the calamity follow like a shadow, from the bustling life of a city village to the inverted heavens, from the Mayfly Realm to Beiluo Shimen.
Only when the “Bad Kalpa” appears once more does the young man discover that, from the one-dimensional string to the eleventh dimension, from the beginning of time to its end, he is both savior and destroyer.
When all strings fall silent and the Heaven-Awakened opens their eyes, this fate spanning two tribulations will reach its conclusion in the inverted celestial realm, or perhaps begin anew.
Although the String Witch is gone, [Bad Tribulation] was still brought out by Huo Huo. Fang Che and Fang Che are a story of mutual rescue. The world view and system are a combination of Xian Witch + Wugu. This is also the theme of fantasy and immortality that Huohuo is best at. I will consider continuing to write the second part of Wugu in the middle of writing this book.
🥺 🥺 🥺 It's obvious that it's quite stressful to open two books at the same time. The first one seems a bit stiff, but it's hard to say where it is. The following are some personal feelings. I hope it can help Huohuo write better and at the same time I can eat better 😳😳😳 Then I felt that there were no ups and downs in the plot of the previous book or the String Witch, and it felt a bit peaceful. I don't even know where to write a comment. I want to write a paragraph to support it, but I don't know what to write. There are no memes to play with and nothing to complain about. My personal opinion, 1. When the protagonist looked at the school beauty with her spiritual vision, the school beauty discovered it, but she should not directly say how many seconds you looked at me. This is a bit AI-like, and the location where she looked is also unnecessary. How do you know where someone is looking at you when someone is staring at you? You can only know the approximate place. 2. The characterization of grandma is not quite right. When grandma lets the protagonist adapt to controlling two bodies, the protagonist is always afraid of being scolded? From the early description of the protagonist, it can be seen that he loves his grandma very much. This is not right. It is embarrassing at most, and it is difficult in itself. After the protagonist did it, his grandma felt that he was very talented to do it in one day, so he should not have been so demanding from the beginning. Although a strict teacher makes a good disciple, you are not right, right? Then there is the one where the protagonist hides Fang Che from his grandma. I feel something is not right, and I will not explain the reason. If I am worried that this grandma is real or fake, I feel okay, or I feel that this matter is too big and cannot be talked about easily. I personally feel that if I speak for myself, I feel that there are still a lot of changes that need to be made, but after all, Huohuo has written two books, and it is normal for him not to have the energy to take care of it 🥺. In short, I hope that Huohuo can write better and smoother as he writes. I've only read part of it so far, so I'll continue after reading it.
I think it's possible, but... Why is there no one? (゚ロ゚)」
The setting is very novel. I have thought about this setting before, but I found it too difficult to write. I look forward to the development of the story.
Author, don't stop updating. I'm looking forward to your next book. I hope this book can also be written.
The plot is okay, but the closer to the end of each chapter, the greater the traces of auxiliary tools.