[No system + decisive killing + double cleansing]
Strings are the root of all things in the world, and are also the root of the existence of monks.
What the young man Fang Che picked up on the rooftop of his home was not only the body of a girl, but also an eternity that had been erased by the universe.
He is a mortal without strings, but he shares a heartbeat with the divinity of Juexian; she is an orphan in the world, but only an empty body is left waiting to be filled.
When the sky of the previous calamity collapsed into ashes, when the gods and gods turned into flying ashes, from the fireworks in the village in the city to the human world, to the ashes of calamity hanging upside down in the sky, from the world of ephemera to Beiluo Shimen, the ember of the calamity fire always followed them.
It wasn't until the "bad calamity" reappeared that the young man discovered that from the first dimension to the eleventh dimension of the string, from the beginning of time to the end of time, he was both the savior and the destroyer.
When all the strings fall silent and the enlightened one opens his eyes, this fate that spans two calamities will come to an end - or a new beginning - in the hanging heaven.
Reader comments
Although the String Witch is gone, [Bad Tribulation] was still brought out by Huo Huo. Fang Che and Fang Che are a story of mutual rescue. The world view and system are a combination of Xian Witch + Wugu.
This is also the theme of fantasy and immortality that Huohuo is best at. I will consider continuing to write the second part of Wugu in the middle of writing this book.
[I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] It's obvious that it's quite stressful to open two books at the same time. The first one seems a bit stiff, but it's hard to say where it is.
The following are some personal feelings. I hope it can help Huohuo write better and at the same time I can eat better [shy][shy][shy]
Then I felt that there were no ups and downs in the plot of the previous book or the String Witch, and it felt a bit peaceful.
I don't even know where to write a comment. I want to write a paragraph to support it, but I don't know what to write. There are no memes to play with and nothing to complain about.
My personal opinion,
1. When the protagonist looked at the school beauty with her spiritual vision, the school beauty discovered it, but she should not directly say how many seconds you looked at me. This is a bit AI-like, and the location where she looked is also unnecessary. How do you know where someone is looking at you when someone is staring at you? You can only know the approximate place.
2. The characterization of grandma is not quite right.
When grandma lets the protagonist adapt to controlling two bodies, the protagonist is always afraid of being scolded? From the early description of the protagonist, it can be seen that he loves his grandma very much. This is not right. It is embarrassing at most, and it is difficult in itself. After the protagonist did it, his grandma felt that he was very talented to do it in one day, so he should not have been so demanding from the beginning. Although a strict teacher makes a good disciple, you are not right, right?
Then there is the one where the protagonist hides Fang Che from his grandma. I feel something is not right, and I will not explain the reason. If I am worried that this grandma is real or fake, I feel okay, or I feel that this matter is too big and cannot be talked about easily.
I personally feel that if I speak for myself, I feel that there are still a lot of changes that need to be made, but after all, Huohuo has written two books, and it is normal for him not to have the energy to take care of it [almost crying]. In short, I hope that Huohuo can write better and smoother as he writes.
I've only read part of it so far, so I'll continue after reading it.
I think it's possible, but... Why is there no one? (ﾟﾛﾟ)｣
The setting is very novel. I have thought about this setting before, but I found it too difficult to write. I look forward to the development of the story.
Author, don't stop updating. I'm looking forward to your next book. I hope this book can also be written.
The plot is okay, but the closer to the end of each chapter, the greater the traces of auxiliary tools.
Although the String Witch is gone, [Bad Tribulation] was still brought out by Huo Huo. Fang Che and Fang Che are a story of mutual rescue. The world view and system are a combination of Xian Witch + Wugu. This is also the theme of fantasy and immortality that Huohuo is best at. I will consider continuing to write the second part of Wugu in the middle of writing this book.
[I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] It's obvious that it's quite stressful to open two books at the same time. The first one seems a bit stiff, but it's hard to say where it is. The following are some personal feelings. I hope it can help Huohuo write better and at the same time I can eat better [shy][shy][shy] Then I felt that there were no ups and downs in the plot of the previous book or the String Witch, and it felt a bit peaceful. I don't even know where to write a comment. I want to write a paragraph to support it, but I don't know what to write. There are no memes to play with and nothing to complain about. My personal opinion, 1. When the protagonist looked at the school beauty with her spiritual vision, the school beauty discovered it, but she should not directly say how many seconds you looked at me. This is a bit AI-like, and the location where she looked is also unnecessary. How do you know where someone is looking at you when someone is staring at you? You can only know the approximate place. 2. The characterization of grandma is not quite right. When grandma lets the protagonist adapt to controlling two bodies, the protagonist is always afraid of being scolded? From the early description of the protagonist, it can be seen that he loves his grandma very much. This is not right. It is embarrassing at most, and it is difficult in itself. After the protagonist did it, his grandma felt that he was very talented to do it in one day, so he should not have been so demanding from the beginning. Although a strict teacher makes a good disciple, you are not right, right? Then there is the one where the protagonist hides Fang Che from his grandma. I feel something is not right, and I will not explain the reason. If I am worried that this grandma is real or fake, I feel okay, or I feel that this matter is too big and cannot be talked about easily. I personally feel that if I speak for myself, I feel that there are still a lot of changes that need to be made, but after all, Huohuo has written two books, and it is normal for him not to have the energy to take care of it [almost crying]. In short, I hope that Huohuo can write better and smoother as he writes. I've only read part of it so far, so I'll continue after reading it.
I think it's possible, but... Why is there no one? (ﾟﾛﾟ)｣
The setting is very novel. I have thought about this setting before, but I found it too difficult to write. I look forward to the development of the story.
Author, don't stop updating. I'm looking forward to your next book. I hope this book can also be written.
The plot is okay, but the closer to the end of each chapter, the greater the traces of auxiliary tools.