They Torture Me with Their Skills from Time to Time

A very good light novel that makes me spin. It has a strong Nigaru flavor, but it is more suitable for the constitution of Chinese babies. [Sneaky smile] Many Nigaru writing styles are in fact even Japanese people cannot read well, but this book does not have this problem at all. [Thinking] It seemed a little green at the beginning. After the end of the first volume, it can be seen that the author is getting better and better. Although it still looks a little green, there is obvious progress, "It's a good thing." At present, the quality is good, and there is still a lot of room for improvement. Well, it is a potential masterpiece. In addition, there are two regular updates every day. I have finished writing the first volume, the second volume, and the third volume is in progress. The story of the second volume itself involves some important settings, but the writing is not so clear. I just mentioned it a little bit. It is also the same in the first volume. It feels like a lot of foreshadowing. It can be seen that there is a certain outline (゜-゜)つロ Sister, it's time for an update. It's been a few days and I feel uncomfortable ("＞＜)" Two weeks... Where are the people? I sent a gift of 5 yuan but didn't even call it back (Ｔ▽Ｔ)

The setting of Liji is quite interesting. The writing style is more delicate, but sometimes it is too forceful. Some paragraphs also have an AI flavor, and the form is slightly more important than the narrative. In terms of plot, the first volume is actually well laid out, but some parts are not done well and some are a little awry. It feels like it almost went down the path of a ghost story. Secondly, the character creation is quite clear, but the distribution of relationships and roles is a bit confusing. In short, the advantages and disadvantages are relatively clear, and those who can't stand the long prose description must be a little dissuaded.

This book not only scores 7.7, It deserves a higher score. In my mind, this book is a masterpiece with a score of 9.9. Why? The author's writing style is natural and smooth. Some people may find it verbose, but when you really calm down and savor the lines of words, you will feel the inexplicable throbbing from the bottom of your heart, a feeling like memory and hope (human words, experience the taste of life) Then there is the author's story, which is pure magical realism and truly uses words to influence people's mood. The story of the work is eclectic (free and unrestrained), but restrained and implicit. He is telling us a story, teaching us an emotion, and it is the content of the story that realizes humanistic significance. I like it very much Finally, I hope that the author can create better stories and go further through positive or negative reviews!

It's amazing. I didn't expect Tomato to see a novel with such delicate writing. It's a bit similar to Japanese light novels, but completely different. It should be said that the boyhood of the male protagonist is very similar to the male protagonist of Japanese light novels. However, in terms of writing skills, whether it is the description of scenes or people, the description of external actions or the description of psychological demeanor, it is impeccable, which shows the author's intention. The characters of the male protagonist and the three girls are very profoundly portrayed. I like each one of them very much. The most rare thing is that this book has a sense of enjoyment without destroying the logic of the plot. It even maintains an epic feel similar to a famous book, such as borrowing from "Kafka on the Shore". I thank the author for letting me see such a good novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's very beautiful, and the writing is very good. Although some of the routines are a bit old, but as long as it's well portrayed, it's fine. But I want to ask the author, does it have multiple heroines? I was a little scared when I saw the sign that there weren't multiple heroines. No, I still don't like Zoji very much

The purest taste of Nikkei, although the character is a little familiar. But overall, it still expresses the author's own thoughts. Whether it's the technical setting or the author's writing style, it's very interesting. Not to be missed if you like Riqing.

Nikgaru is the most suitable to be adapted into animation, and I feel that it will do well if it appears in Nippon Bunko. The story logic and writing style are not inconsistent, and are quite similar to the Monogatari series or Green Pig, but there is no overlap between the characters. Each is wonderful. Although the characters are common, they are always innovative, making it easy for people to take in and arouse a lot of curiosity to read. The author obviously has extensive knowledge of many excellent works and nooks and crannies, and has good literary attainments. Therefore, it would be a pity if this book could not achieve better results and break the circle. If it could be adapted into an animation, it would probably go a step further.

Very pretty, when are you going to learn how to remove clothes stuck in your clothes [crying]

Excellent, the tomatoes are a little light on top, a little bit blubbery but not bad, some minor flaws are acceptable. Sasanagi gives people a feeling of spring, but not as uncomfortable as spring. It's getting more and more interesting, but why no one is watching it?

It's an orthodox two-dimensional fantasy novel, but at first I really thought that the inner skill was a special skill, but it turned out to be a bug of Earth OL. Here you can see the mold-passing-through-wall technique, and the vending machine with two copies of an MC box appears out of thin air and an extra bottle appears...

It's a very interesting novel. It refers to the settings of Teacher One's works, but has its own ideas. I'll give you a super review.

A very interesting Japanese light novel. The first volume has a pig-headed feel, but it also has a different story and style. However, the first few chapters were not handled well, and I basically skipped through it. If the beginning was written better, it would be a good book.

It's a good book, but not many people will read it. It's so helpless. It doesn't suit Tomato's writing style at all. It's very delicate and novel. After reading it in one sitting, I felt like drinking a cup of refreshing tea, which is the same pleasure. All I can say is, author, come on, believe, because there is no need for a reason to believe.

I've read it a lot, I've read it too much, I've read the first three volumes, and I rate it as an excellent light novel with delicate and beautiful writing. The description of the male protagonist is quite good, and the descriptions of the various female protagonists are also okay, but Sasaki is a bit too strong and overbearing, and not coquettish enough. I hope to see more of Sasaki's coquettish side towards the male protagonist in the future😋 Little Lin Cat is so cute😋Hurry up and evolve😡 Kazami is so worried because the male protagonist is injured😋Can you help Kazumi recover later😭 Also, I hope to write more about gravity prison girls😋

A good book with great potential. Among the three volumes currently available, the first one is the best in terms of performance. The second volume is more prose-heavy in my opinion, but the overall reading is fine. The third volume is not finished yet, but the development and handling of things are better than the second volume in my opinion. Overall, some parts are relatively rough, but most of them have good dialogue and well-written plots. It's worth watching. Let's talk about the characters. First of all, he is the purest person in the world, the protagonist who wants to master Rigi. The author's idea is really eye-catching. He uses the characteristic of Rigi to string together all the plots without taking over the main role. Tomu is very pure. He is so pure that he wants to fight against everyone in the tokusatsu. It is difficult not to worry about such a guy. If others are not involved, the result will only be that one person dies or is pulled out by others. Pure Junjun Tomu is really arrogant. Then there is the female protagonist. The author's idea should be to have multiple female protagonists, but each volume has one person as the core character, and the other female protagonists are mostly side characters. This is good or handled properly. But it is inevitable that every time a new volume has a new female character, the previous ones are weakened a bit, and the label of multiple female protagonists seems redundant. After all, no female protagonist has directly expressed her thoughts to the protagonist so far. Is Kobayashi a secret crush, but I am a little afraid to admit it in my heart. So far, Sasaki has not thought about that, and I will not talk about Kazama's story before it is over. Then there's my sister, well, she's the one I hate secretly. I'm really looking forward to the future development. In terms of writing style, the author's literary background is definitely not bad. Some words can make people's eyes light up, and they can feel that the author wants to express the pictures or feelings in his mind in words, but beware that if you use too many words, it will be counterproductive. If it was the first work, it would undoubtedly be considered a success. Tomatoes are like this sometimes. You really have to look for good books carefully. I believe this book will shine in the future. I rarely write book reviews, but this book really made me want to share it with others. Thank you to the author for creating such a good work, and thank you for reading this. Thank you. After thinking about it, I'll give it five stars. It's rare to find this book in Tomato. Is there any estimate of the reading time? Did it only take 4 hours to read the latest chapter? I'm obviously the one who started urging for updates starting around Chapter 70, meow

The writing style of this Japanese light book is very good, leaning towards the stream of consciousness type, with various metaphors and borrowed objects to describe people. It should be considered that they are very interested in radio waves. Some people seem to be very good, while others may not be so good. In terms of character design, the male protagonist is of the Jiahao type (with character arcs), and the female characters all have their own characteristics. For example, Xiao Zuo is like Jiaxin, but the setting does have this capital. And it will have its own growth and character arc later on. The twists and turns in the plot are not abrupt and very smooth, making it very comfortable to watch over and over again. The emotional line is written very vaguely, without any clear expression, it is all side effects and metaphors. There are possibilities for harem, party fights and so on. I personally think they are very good. I look forward to the development of the plot in the future. In terms of rating, I feel it could be a score above 9.3. Supplement: Some of the elements in this book include brother-control-sister-control, redemption, fantasy (a bit like CL), growth, passion (probably), etc.

Hands down, this is the best of all the new books I've seen so far this year. Although the name and introduction of this book are a bit abstract, the content is really unspeakable, and the emotions are also very delicate. How can I put it, many books are really good at first, but they become boring after reading them, and then they always skip, skip, skip, skip, skip. But this book is different. I feel that this book is a book that allows me to calm down and read slowly.

It's a very nice book, it's the kind of story I like. Why do I feel like not many people read it [Chigua]

The subject matter is very novel. At least in Tomato, it is indeed an eye-catching light novel. For those who like anime, it looks really good. It has a lot of influence of Mai and Suzumiya. The writing style is also okay. Maybe it is due to the audience group and the name. The rating is indeed a bit low. At least it is 8.5-9.

It is a very typical Japanese novel for young and middle-aged teenagers. The writing is also good, but the plot progresses very slowly and needs to be read slowly. This should be the reason why so few people read it. After all, everyone nowadays likes fast-paced and refreshing articles. Come on, author, I hope to see a good ending.

It's a very good book, but it's not suitable for following updates. Every major event takes time to prepare for. I'm addicted to watching. It would be very uncomfortable if I can't watch one thing in one sitting. Unless the author updates 200,000 words per day

The writing style is delicate, somewhat similar to that of Riqing. The male protagonist has a unique sense of youth. In terms of writing skills, whether it is describing scenes or people, describing external actions or psychological demeanor, it is impeccable. The characters of the male protagonist and the three girls are very profoundly portrayed, and everyone is very likeable. Many plots create unique artistic conceptions. Calm down and look at the environment, which is very immersive and relaxing.

I stayed up late to finish reading it. The setting is really novel and the writing is smooth. There is nothing too procrastinating that would make readers unable to read. Every chapter is fascinating. The only problem may be that I was delayed by the title as everyone said.

It's really good-looking, and the ups and downs of the plot are more quotidian. Compared with the traditional love plot, it is more inclined to the male protagonist's research and discussion of bugs, and establishes some kind of bond and relationship with the female character in the middle of solving the bugs. I feel that the description of the bug in the article is what attracts me the most. It records the operation steps of the bug in strict and detailed manner, the consequences of use, the effects of use and the use methods from different angles. It gives me a feeling that it is more like the weird and unique logical operation method of SCP and Lobotomy Corporation. Generally speaking, you can give it a try

It's not bad, but it feels like something is missing. I think it's a "real thing" kind of thing, with a somewhat floating virtual feeling. The bug setting is quite good, but the early writing style is too cumbersome to highlight the sense of writing.

I didn't expect to see such a comforting Nikkei-style novel here. The world view is also quite interesting. I look forward to the follow-up.

It has a very Nikgaru feel to it. There are many works that mix fantasy, suspense, daily life, campus and other elements in Nikgaru. I often read them. The first such work that I came into contact with was the epoch-making "The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya", which made me fall in love with this type of work. The author's book really made me feel a little bit like I used to watch Suzumiya.

The rare excellent writing style and unpretentious description make the reading experience very comfortable. The plot has multiple threads and develops naturally. However, there haven't been many updates yet, and it's hard to say how the plot is going, but at least I quite like the first volume.

It's pretty good, it feels like a light novel, and there are a lot of jokes. If you don't like this, you can avoid it, but it's not enough for me. For example, when the protagonist says a famous quote from ordinary people, the squad leader should continue to follow the brat after answering.

Quite strong! It's hard to say about other platforms, but on Tomato it's definitely the best, and I give it full marks. As an online serial novel, I don't know if it has some shortcomings, such as too much description, prose language (too sharp to say that it is too literary), and a slight sense of AI (acceptable in comparison) The result is that, in horizontal comparison, it seems that description is used instead of the story advancement that should have been there. Now the updates are quite diligent and it is not a big problem. The second is the character image. The perception of strong characters like Sasaki is definitely not that comfortable, at least in the short term😕But I don't hate it, comfortable language can already cover up this feeling, it's a matter of opinion. All in all, it was quite comfortable to read. You can't force too much on the Tomato platform. This book is already very strong.