The Black Spirit Descends, and I Subdue the Sects of the Heavens

Brief review: Getting better and better (I don't usually read this kind of book, but since I have read it, I will comment on it) First of all, there are no messy descriptions of women, which perfectly enhances the perception. The author constructs a relatively grand background and uses the growth of young Lin Sha as the main line to describe the entire story. However, there is a problem. The author's background introduction in the first chapter, I personally feel that there is no need for so many modal particles. Although it is the tone of a storyteller, I feel that it is not very good to write like this in an electronic novel (I personally think that the storyteller adds modal particles when telling the story, and the story itself does not have them) You can change them into whole sentences, and you can give people a very strong feeling at the beginning 🤔 What I wrote after that was very good! It's still worth recommending! (Sigh... The knowledge in high school is so deeply rooted that writing a book review feels like a template for answering questions) What about the background? ╮(￣▽￣"")╭ If I hadn't seen the previous version, I would have become "little confused" now The connection between the first chapter and the following chapter is incoherent. Was Lin Sha sent to the Yuezhi Sect by people from the Yuezhi Sect? The following articles I have seen so far do not reflect this. Still, this is much better than the previous version! But I feel like I need to briefly explain the background? At least, what is the role of black oil stock solution? However, the author is really awesome~ You are the first person I have ever met who is so humble and values readers' comments so much~ From my point of view, you don't actually need to pay so much attention to it. Just write a work that satisfies you!

It's beautiful and getting more and more exciting. I recommend! The protagonist Lin Sha progresses step by step from having no spiritual roots to being a cultivator of immortality to being a top cultivator of immortality. The black oil spiritual liquid is the source of his spiritual power, the Chaos Spirit Gathering Body is his physical guarantee, the Great Emperor's Mark is his courage to suppress the sects of the heavens, and the Shadow Sky Sword Art is his main means of combat power. Really clever