Domain Advent: I Loaded the Gojo Satoru Template

Of course you can play the role of a pig, but you have to have a reason and a motive. When you have your own interests and needs, you should hide your strength. Without a single explanation, you are just pretending to be a pig [face covering]. Let me explain the last two sentences. Don't keep the reasons in your head and write them out [laughing and crying]. Other than that, there are no problems. I hope it is just a problem in the first few chapters and it is not a big problem. The writing is smooth and coherent, much better than other indescribable things in tomatoes. I hope the author will get better and better [air kiss]

From the current point of view, the plot can be smooth, and even the protagonist does not need to hide his strength. In addition, there are details. For example, why are there so many zombies in the hotel and they are surrounding the lobby, and grenades explode in the hotel. Is this reasonable? And there seem to be a lot of zombies, but how many people can be in a hotel? I hope the author will continue to work hard and improve the details.

It's okay so far, but it would be better if the plot rhythm were a little faster or slower, otherwise it feels like I've been thinking about it all the time. A problem that seems obvious to me now is that the images of the protagonist and some other characters tend to be flat. If the characters are not three-dimensional enough, it is not enough to just rely on efforts to portray the environment. The second thing is that official institutions actually feel a bit taken for granted. The author can learn about real institutions like the Public Security Bureau and what better institutions in other novels are like.

🫥🫥Not bad, but I think asking "Is this an order?" Seems unnecessary. In my opinion, the protagonist has become arrogant in this paragraph, but if it is to pave the way for the protagonist's growth, you don't need to pay attention to what I said.

It's pretty good. Come on, author, come up with more [laughs evilly]

The plot is okay so far, no OOC

Great, it seems that the author has been brainwashed by Gu Ga and Doro. It is interesting to add it.

The plot logic is good so far and worth looking forward to

Good-looking, good-looking, good, good

Not bad, come on, author

It feels weird to suddenly have a doro inserted into it. Others are fine

Not rigorous, but well written. I didn't ask Liu Yan when I tested the abilities.

Give it five stars, it looks pretty good so far

Did the author really stop writing? ? If you don't want to write it, please post a single chapter. I'll have to check every day to see if there's any updates.

It's good, mA, oh, it's good, bro.

Not bad, not bad, there is something

It's pretty good so far. I'll wait for the update every day and I'll update it after reading it.

The female protagonist is also awakening naturally. Shouldn't she be observed at the base like the male protagonist?