Nightmare Game: Number 006 Online Kill Kill Kill

Fortunately, the world view and settings are pretty good. But I always feel that it has a bit of an AI flavor. The main thing is that some paragraphs, ideas, actions and words should not be repeated too much. Appropriate abbreviation and replacement will make people more interested in reading. Too much repetition will consume passion and desire.

(Slight spoilers, read with caution) Boss, you are so cool... I really like this kind of protagonist who looks a bit weak but is actually a boss. Moreover, I really like this free setting about bosses and NPCs. Unlike the dungeons from the player's perspective, players can choose between normal dungeons and "seasons" after entering the "Nightmare Game". The world participating in the season is the world where the protagonist becomes the boss after traveling through time: The plot starts with the main plot of exploring a certain truth. Basically, a report is a plot, and the "truth" reported is generally heavy (?) Yes The protagonist's life outside the season is either planning to write a report or on the way to write a report. Ing... The report has a literary style, and I was surprised to read the manuscript. Usually when reading manuscripts, I always like to quickly scan to find the key points. For this report, I will watch it frame by frame... When you meet players during the season, you will have a mission status. As soon as there is a mission status, I suddenly became excited because I felt a little happy watching it. Um. The protagonist's killing method is that of a weak scholar who stabs people neatly with a pen. It's so simple but so practical! Some of the interactions with other bosses are very funny, I'm talking about you W. K (funny. Jpg) Anyway, if you like it, you must watch it! Boss, please update it quickly. Every time I come back and see your novel, I feel empowered!

The advantages and disadvantages are obvious 1. The AI feels a bit heavy in the early stage 2. There are too many sentences that are not but but types 3. Some content is repeated and too lengthy (especially non-important content, important content really needs repeated techniques to highlight) 4. The narrative technique is lacking, and many plots are not well reflected from the reader's perspective. For example, why do players know that Chris is a cousin of Wittrich? Advantages: The characterization is more vivid and delicate, the setting of 140 serialized NPCs is novel, and the five cities are used to connect the story to make the plot more compact. Although the shortcomings are obvious, I still like this story very much😘 so I give it five stars

Yin Lu, Scott Winston, Felina, Wittrich, the author writes so well, I really like them, they really hit my cute point, the protagonist's crazy energy is so touching, so cool! Also, I'm going to write a fanfic about Yin Lu and Wittrich. Please come and take a look. It's great.

It's really well written, and the worldview and setting are interesting. Join the protagonist as the story is told and learn about the world. The protagonist is a "journalist" who records the truth. As readers, we follow him to witness the truth. The place where the protagonist is always gives me a feeling of a British foggy city. All the truth is under the fog. They are always there, waiting to be seen one day. I really like the creation of the protagonist! If I'm too simple, I can't survive here, if I'm too indifferent, I'll feel a little uncomfortable, so this is just right... There's no right or wrong here. The Windsor incident is impressive. I think she should have a beautiful he and become the original her, the one with a bright soul. I hope the author can continue writing, Modo Modo! ! I also want to know more about the world (laughs). I am very interested in Shanghai, which is obviously a Chinese-style city. By the way, I feel that the novelist and the protagonist are very interesting, so I'll give it a try (no)

The subject matter is well chosen, and I also like the perspective from which the story unfolds. I feel that the author is writing a very new kind of cool novel. The positioning of the protagonist in SCP is a very high-level causal law influence factor. The pace of events is relatively fast, so it is not too difficult to chew. The four stars are given because I am afraid of the author's pride, yes. Anyway, it's very interesting. I hope the author doesn't get tired, but don't take a break and write 8,000 words or something in a day (laughs)

It just so happened that I reached 100 chapters yesterday, so I would like to give the boss a five-star review as a congratulation. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I think this novel is really well written and belongs to the Western fantasy genre. The world view is different from ordinary Western fantasy, it is very unique. The plot needs to be well-written and full of ups and downs (it also tortured me into a complete mess). The ambush pen was buried well and the hole was filled quickly. The plot is not draggy at all, and the writing is very moving. Judging from the frequency of likes on my comments on this novel, you can tell that this novel must have a bright future. [Shy][Shy] I believe this novel can have a score of 9.0 Or even higher. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss] The author is also very good. I have too many comments to reply to, and the boss will also reply to me alone in the chapter comments (I'm going to cry).

OK, next I will use the most upright, most straightforward, simplest, most understandable, most practical, most down-to-earth, least roundabout, least pretentious, least fancy, most to the point, most clean and neat, most frank and frank, most simple and simple, most close to daily life, least pretentious, not piling up gorgeousness. The vocabulary does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout thoughts, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be profound, does not add unnecessary and cumbersome foreshadowing, every word is open and transparent, every sentence is sincere and true, the whole process is in plain language, there is no subtlety or concealment, every sentence goes straight to the core point, and the writing style is simple No pretentiousness, the expression is clear and concise, no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, no pretentious embellishments, straightforward enough to be understood at a glance, simple enough that everyone can understand, practical enough not to contain any empty words, neat enough not to contain any nonsense, frank enough not to hide any reservations, popular It can be understood regardless of age. It is hard-core and candid without being tactful, refreshing and direct without procrastination, simple and sincere without being exaggerated, easy to understand without being profound, straight to the point without foreshadowing, telling the truth without covering up, straightforward without being pretentious, plain and simple without being flashy, clear and clear without being vague, and frank without going around in circles. I tell you: it looks good.

The plot is quite interesting, the story setting is quite novel, and the male protagonist is also good. One star is deducted because the AI ​​flavor is too strong. The writing style feels very polished by AI, and some conceptual summary sentences appear repeatedly in very close chapters, but they are not sublimated enough, so the readers feel that the sentence patterns are wordy and repetitive, making it difficult to grasp the author's intention. Moreover, AI can easily lose context, so there may be minor contradictions in some small settings. If the sentences are written by humans, they will not be inconsistent subconsciously [facepalm]. This does not mean that AI cannot be used to write or polish. On the contrary, I think it would be quite good if AI can improve writing efficiency and allow the author to concentrate on plot conception [facepalm]. I just hope that the author can adjust the settings of the AI ​​agent, give the AI ​​team a better structure, and then regularly manage the context, and polish the text before publishing.

First, the next judgment: good book! (I don't often review books, and I don't know the classification of food and grass, but I think it is definitely a good book) First of all, the setting is quite interesting. Although it looks like "dressing up as an NPC in the game world", the "game world" and "NPC" are both very interestingly designed: The "Nightmare Game" is real, and the aboriginal people in it are real, which is very common - but NPCs all know that they are NPCs, and NPCs all know "players". NPCs will even use "NPC" as their camp name to distinguish themselves from "players". This is unusual, and, quite interesting. "NPCs" can be divided into two categories. Special professional NPCs have special rules and weapons, and are numbered - their size represents the weight of the rules and can be "resurrected" (guess which version of "Reporter" you are?). These are actually nothing at all - yet they are very integrated into the world itself and into the masses. I don't know if you understand what I mean, but I mean - it's very true. "System", "NPC" (/"Special Profession NPC"), "player", "mission"... They seem to be the rules of the world itself. This is more like a world with an exotic culture that grew up in the original ecology, a real world. The above first, I will continue to review when I have the opportunity in the future, it is very good.

Tasty! ! ! The setting is novel and interesting The character of the protagonist is also very distinct. He has the rationality and objectivity to record the truth, but also the warmth and delicacy of being a human being (light and sometimes lively and hhhh cute) Everyone has more or less a sense of sadness that has been carried by the times. I like this style of writing very much. People are complicated and contradictory. Such talents are vivid enough. I like the interaction with the NPCs. The subtle and unspoken kindness makes people's hearts warm. All in all, it's a delicious setting. Teacher, you must continue writing.

Directly tied haha The setting is novel and the unique plot setting is very eye-catching. The reading experience is good, but the number of words is a bit short and not enough to read [Please update] Don't give up, I will always support you Junjun [Sending Hearts]

✨A problem that many online novels have - things are not explained clearly. There are some things that the author knows but the readers don't know, and the author always assumes that the readers know. Some of them can also be seen in this book. 💮Just like the "Windsor Coup" incident, although there is a clear beginning, the ending is not clear - whether Windsor succeeds or fails, there is no systematic announcement, no direct response from residents, everything is just for the readers to reason - based on the protagonist's report, I think Windsor is more likely to "win". But all this is just my own speculation after all. Without confirmation from the author, the ending of the story has not been explained clearly. This may be the end, but as an intermediate plot, especially one that will have an impact on the follow-up of the story (Windsor's victory represents the death of all players this season), I think it should be reported systematically. 💮In addition, the connection between events is also a bit abrupt. For example, after the "Windsor Coup", there was a sudden and rapid transition to the "Copy of the Puppet Master's Past" without any warning. It actually seems a bit fragmented. (At least explain the aftermath of the coup) 🎉But this book is not without its merits. The description style of this book is very "tasteful", relatively smooth, very comfortable to read, the environment is described delicately, the atmosphere is well rendered, and the storyline is also very interesting. The author did not choose a lengthy "identity search" process, but quickly explained the meaning of "No. 006 [Reporter]"; at the same time, there was no mentally retarded plot to pretend to be a slap in the face, these are all bonus points ฅ ̳͒•ˑ̫• ̳͒ฅ ❤️I am quite satisfied with this book, it is a very interesting novel. I hope this book will get better and better, and I also look forward to the author's progress_(:з∠)_ ✨Finally, this comment is only my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it. I'm really sorry if I offended you🙏

I think it's quite good-looking, and there's nothing wrong with it. I just don't know why the rating is so low. Maybe it's because it just came out, and it should go up in the future. The author's writing is not bad, and the characters in it have good characteristics, and they don't overwhelm the protagonist's combat power. The protagonist is growing up while recording, and the protagonist doesn't have any saintly behavior. If the system tells him to kill, he will kill. Sometimes some humorous jokes are inserted in the article, which adds some vitality to the relatively dead article. Overall, it's good, come on, author!

I went to the boss to write a very awesome Klass, My Mommy, it is so delicious, the pace is also relatively fast, and the protagonist is very happy to kill people. The characters of [Novelist] are so delicious, my mother is so appetizing to me. I read it every day and my head doesn't hurt, my waist is not sore, I have strength to speak, the text group is extremely delicious, so delicious, so delicious

The writing style is very unique. When I first read it, I always felt it had a bit of an AI feel to it. But after I got used to it, it was okay. Maybe it was because there were too many descriptions and repeated emphasis. After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the world view of this book is very complicated. What is the difference between NPCs and players? Life is very difficult. Why do numbered NPCs have to kill players to complete the task? Why does the system issue tasks like this? How is the player's world going? Why did the protagonist become 006? I hope I can talk about it later. Overall, it's quite interesting. The writing style is very unique and unusual. It requires a certain amount of patience to read it.

Five stars is very nice. Some people in the comment area said it was polished by AI. In fact, I don't think I can necessarily draw a direct conclusion. After all, it is true that people with severe literary youth will have this problem. This is the case for me. No one feels that repeating those very advanced sentences will have a charm. Anyway, I like such sentences and writing style very much. Yes, I can't see the stagnant feeling mentioned in the comment section. Of course, I only express my personal opinion. Overall, the author's writing style is more gorgeous. Metaphorically speaking, it can be said to be the heavy feeling of mist after a British rain. I personally prefer this style of writing. Everyone has different tastes. (There are spoilers below) The world view is very novel, and the identity of the protagonist is also very exciting. He is 006 with high authority. There is no specific main line at the moment. I probably have to go through each area one by one. It is similar to the feeling of running a map. If there are some highlights, I think it may be that many people are criticizing the protagonist and the novelist. Of course, this article has no cp, and it is all the readers themselves (but it is really good, text group 99). I only express my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. I just looked at it and found that what I said was not very rigorous. It does not mean that only people with severe literary youth will have this problem. This is not a problem, it is just a style of writing and writing habits. For example, I personally also have the problem of changing the format of the same sentence and using it again and again. Read on There will be a feeling similar to echoing the previous article (not quite, but I can't tell what it feels like). Reading such articles will give me a romantic (probably) feeling, like the soft music played when it rains, the letter with a faint smell of ink, or a blooming iris . I can't comment on whether the author uses AI, but I hope it's the author's writing style. But judging from the content presented in the article and my personal reading taste, the author's writing style is super good, and the setting is also very novel. (In addition, I am actually a very impatient person. Many of the books I followed for updates on Tomato later became impatient and abandoned, but this book is the only one that did not give up and continued to update even after stopping for more than ten days.) I really like this book. I hope the rating can be higher than 9 points. The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

The world view is novel and the content is very attractive. I have only read more than 30 chapters so far. I like this kind of writing style and this kind of subject matter. [Sending Hearts] The Cthulhu theme is used very well, and the horror game (nightmare game) is simply very attractive. The protagonist is a special NPC and belongs to the game side. Shockingly delicious! It shows the world bit by bit and opens the curtain, which is amazing. I am a book reader, so I prefer this kind of writing. No cp is the most delicious, eating anything will only make me nutritionally balanced. [The masterpiece of bird food][Grass has been planted][Bookshelf plus one] (The above are all personal opinions + current understanding) [laughs] Follow-up comments will be made after reading.

The writing is quite good, but the protagonist has been bound to the [Novelist] (at least where I saw it, it is still bound), which has led to a lot of people in the comments criticizing CP, which affects the perception. This should have no CP instead of no female protagonist but two male protagonists, right? Deducted one star for this (because I don't know why every review I clicked on after [Novelist] appeared on the show had comments criticizing them). This also shows that the author's writing may indeed be a bit ambiguous, although I can't see it at all... There are no problems with anything else. The writing is generally good, the sense of mystery is very thick, and the protagonist and supporting characters are also very well portrayed. My favorite characters are Ms. Mary, the owner of the bakery next to the protagonist's newspaper office, and the little raven who appears in the second volume (because I like crows very much)

It's super delicious [heartfelt], the setting is novel and interesting [laughing], each character is very distinct, I really like the protagonist's skills and personality, but I feel that the protagonist's truth-telling ability can be developed a little more, after all, it is very attractive to the dank male ghost [smirk] [sneer laugh], does the mysterious existence that replaces Howard still have a role? It feels like there should be, and the protagonist also has secrets hidden in him. I'm really looking forward to the interaction between the protagonist and his original father [Chigua] Although it looks so good, the score is not high. Is it because too few people see it? Author, please do more updates [send heartfelt support]. The more updates, the more people will read.

Each character has their own characteristics, the plot is good, the writing is very good and exciting, and I am very happy to watch it (●'◡'●)ﾉ[Love] It feels like I have seen all kinds of life, which seems not to be accurate. Each character has his own memory point. You can see the boss lady who is mean on the outside but soft and kind on the inside (well... The soft white bread is delicious), the lawyer who has ideals and ambitions and gradually realizes them (personal ideas may not be correct), which sounds very interesting. The bluffing puppet master is very contrasting and a bit arrogant (can I say this), and a few children who can quarrel (crossed out), and many, many interesting characters were born in the author's writing, and the author describes them more and more vividly, so - the author is very, very good, and the novels he writes are also very, very good! Regarding the description of the environment, it feels very good and not obtrusive. When watching Yin Lu's daily life, you can also know what the surrounding environment is like and whether the weather is good or not. It is as if you have entered Xuandu and experienced the four seasons with the residents there. The article actually doesn't have much description of the battle, but it is still very exciting. It gives people a light and reassuring feeling, and the rhythm is also very comfortable, like water flowing quietly. As for the update, it is always close to 12 o'clock recently. I think there is no author who does not love the characters he writes, so the author is carefully polishing the content of the article every time. Every word is finalized by the author slowly thinking about it. There is still a lot of information that needs to be found, so the update time is a bit late, but I still want to say - the author should pay attention to his health! Finally, the author is really great——

It's okay, the pacing is well controlled, but it's a bit verbose, and the content is pretty good. This genre is really good, but... Well... There's a faint sense of AI. The author should have used AI to render it, but it's not a big problem, and the content is still pretty good.

The author's writing style is very good, and I have read some book reviews that say there are elements of AI, but the content of the novel and the mysterious feeling really struck a chord with me. Well, I can't really see AI anyway. Maybe I just like this kind of convoluted description, but the content and theme are still very attractive. Good luck, author^_^

Wc, this writing is really awesome, okay? ! I will give it a thumbs up, but I have a question. Although there is no female protagonist, will it be written with two male protagonists? In fact, I still really want to see two male protagonists [shy]

Good looking. The world view setting is very interesting, and the character design is also very interesting. But Scrabb is a bit tied to Wittrich... Mainly because he hopes that the protagonist can be uniquely beautiful. The character story is well written. (If the novelist is really resurrected, I hope it won't take up too much of the role...)

It's great. [Journalist] and [Novelist] are so close to each other. I am a fan of the protagonist, but I'm sorry for the protagonist [Sending Hearts]. After reading it, I just want to beg the author to update it quickly, in case the author suddenly bursts into a hundred updates. . . No, it's a thousand chapters [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

This is the first time I have read a novel of this type. The content is very detailed, the characters are set well, the characterization is rich, the inner monologue is interesting, and I like the personality of the characters very much, the writing is also very good, and the content is also very interesting. You can read it with confidence.

Very well written! Infinite streaming but feels like a Western fantasy novel I haven't seen much so far, but the character descriptions touched me a lot. H. L is a very impressive character (the half-skeleton Hector and Harry made me feel sad😿

It's nice to read, the writing style is light, but it's very comfortable to watch. The main character is not the Virgin, nor is it a classic time travel novel. The whole world does not revolve around the main character. Each character has his own life. This is great, but the main line is not very clear, but this is excusable.

It looks great. In my opinion, the rating can be higher than 9:00. The plot is very comfortable and enjoyable to read. The protagonist's abilities are quite novel. Many of the plots are also very meaningful. Come on, author!