Traveling Through Another World: Starting from Adopting the Cursed Child

It's good. The cute parts are well written. Unfortunately, I always like to write about the struggle of the bottom class. I originally thought it was just a side description to express the feeling of pleasure, but it turned into a two-line narrative after a long time of writing. Who wants to see the subplot of poor people being pleased by their grandfather [face covering]

I saw this book on the bookstore recommendation list yesterday and added it to my bookshelf. I read it in two days. There's nothing bad about this book, but there aren't many great things about it either. What felt a bit lacking was that the pacing was too slow. There is no lolita, the plot is written too slowly, it is not very interesting, and there is no desire to read on. I recommend the author to read this novel "Lord: I Raise a Girl in a World of Pain (Lord of the Mist)". The plot of this book is particularly good, and the pace is very comfortable. It is fast where it should be fast and slow where it should be slow. The only thing that doesn't compare to You is that there are no lolita characters, and the male protagonist feels a bit like a stallion story and a harem story. And what you can't compare with this novel is that it's not as good as him in terms of plot and rhythm. In terms of lord farming novels, this novel "Lord: I Raise a Girl in a World of Pain" (King of the Mist) is particularly well written. The author can learn more from it

After reading Chapter 5, where is the loli that I mentioned earlier that I took in in the royal city? I saw the comments, those lolita didn't have names until more than 80 chapters [Thinking]

I really like this kind of subject matter, but it's a pity that so few people write about it. The author's writing style is also great, and I like the male protagonist's character.

It's a good book, but some of the protagonist's actions don't need to be so pretentious. Don't always treat this medieval world with modern people's thoughts and behaviors.

It looks pretty good so far, but the number of words is too small, so I can look forward to the future. Secondly, I'm not a lolita fan, I just stumbled across it by accident.

Wow, I finally found a book that understands me. This is a masterpiece and a Bible... Wait, let me finish... (Forked away)

It's a daily Western fantasy article. To be honest, the author should consider making the cover better. A better cover can also attract readers. The content is leisurely and brisk. We like this kind of article. Come on, work harder, and some people will definitely read it. I think this book is at least 8.0 Or above [blowing kiss] By the way, I forgot to mention it. Boss, can you call me directly?

It's just a joke online. In reality, who doesn't want to raise a group of super cute, gentle, obedient, worry-free, and tolerant two-dimensional loli mothers?

Come on, big brother who writes lolita

It's so beautiful. The little loli is soft and fragrant. The plot arrangement is also very reasonable. It doesn't make people feel bored. It is a highly recommended movie.

It's a pretty standard western fantasy witch novel. There aren't many similar novels. I give it a high score.

Cheers for the new book

The content is okay, there is no garbled content. Read smoothly

I don't know, does anyone know that the plot of Let the Witch Go is very similar, but if I tell you, the change is really good [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Why did you call me? You called the wrong person. I'm just a passerby who can't bear to see a little girl being bullied.

Whoever recommended it to me, I will call directly. How could I like watching lolita. The plot is (let go that witch) shell. It's a pity that the protagonist is not a lolita

I'm so high

It looks good. Let the author continue writing.

[Adoration] I'm here for Lolita, so good, so good

The fox barks, a new king is established, King Wanluo [I understand]

At present, it seems that the plot is too slow. It is recommended to use foreshadowing and interleaving to simplify it in some places.

So far it looks ok, come on

Not bad, not bad. Don't stop updating. But I really want to know why no new people come to see it? ? ? ? ? ? Is there something wrong with this recommendation mechanism?

It's quite nice. I found it on the homepage. I hope the author will keep updating it [Love]

Cheers to the author, the writing is very good~! !

The subject matter is novel and the characters are vividly created. I love it [laughs]

I have to say that it is very well written, it feels like a light novel. The reason why it is not popular is the name. Why is it only chapter 11 after so long? Has the author stopped updating? No, it's hard to find books that suit your appetite

Daily life is very warm, I like it

Awesome, awesome, awesome