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I have read Chapter 33 so far. Whether it is the comic version of the master or the protagonist's perception of life and destruction, they all impressed me. The writing is also passable. The plot is a little slow in the early stage, but the pace will start to pick up after about 12 chapters. Now it seems that the protagonist's cp has not been released yet, and it is basically the original cp. It is non-toxic and brothers can eat it. It is quite delicious [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

Why doesn't anyone say anything? Could it be that my writing is terrible? Don't bully me coldly, even if it's just scolding. In fact, I have two ideas for this chapter of reconciliation with myself. One is the same as now, where Qian Renxue reconciles with herself and comes out. The other is to let Qian Renxue be eroded by her own dark side. When Qian Renxue is about to fall into darkness, a beam of light hits her, and then a hand reaches out to her. When the two hands were clenched, the surroundings lit up, and then the divine test was passed. This idea also has 4 directions. The first one is that the hand belongs to Ye Musheng, the second one is that the arm is the combination of Qian Xunji and Qian Daoliu, the third one is Qian Renxue herself, and the last one is everyone she has helped. What I like most here is Qian Renxue coming out on her own, but I also feel that the other feelings are quite acceptable, so I plan to wait until I have time. I plan to write down all the possibilities here, which one do you want to see first. By the way, I also want to ask, if Ye Musheng dies in the end, will the plot collapse?

The character description is very good and the book is also very interesting. I hope you can update it to the end.