Traveling Through **********

I'll order one for you, but I don't know how to recommend it to you. Well, I'm a good person, but you have a flaw, that is, the early writing is not very good, and why does the protagonist always want to hide this? You can give him some flexibility and deal with it The author, you wrote this very frustratingly. You make the protagonist invincible at the beginning. I think you are an invincible cool novel, and the protagonist of a cool novel cannot always be kicked around like a ball. He can go on his own, but not only will it be uncomfortable if he is kicked away, it will be a blocking point.

OK brothers, after seeing more than 30 chapters, the protagonist is also very awesome, okay, well, I'm happy that those sidekicks are good, but the protagonist is a 0! ! ! Okay, at the beginning, I came to live with someone else, so I won't say anything. Later, I got smart and moved out. It was very good. Just after I moved in, a woman came out of nowhere. Pay attention to this woman, (emphasis added). The tone of the invitation to our protagonist at the beginning was not to fuck her, but I could bear it. Later, I said that I could come if I wanted to. Our protagonist is also very awesome. Okay, the dog-licking personality is online. Follow this woman and lick this woman. The most important thing is to accept the mission. After that, The mugshots were flying all over the sky. I could still hold myself back and ran to that shabby beach. Later, I asked the woman to change zones. If you don't want me, you can just change if you want. Just fly to the first zone and fly away all those people. It's okay to stand alone in one zone. I have to help the woman with the task before changing zones. Oh my god. Sister 5@hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.

Rational comment, this book is actually okay overall. Some of the weird behaviors in the front have been found in the back, but to be honest, Invincible is still a bit too exaggerated, because he has many abilities in it that he does not have. It can only be said to be a Pro max version with abilities that others have, and then it is about the relationship between men and women. He is indeed a new author. This kind of enthusiasm needs to be refined and refined. In summary, the subject matter of this book is quite new, and the idea is quite good. However, this idea may be difficult to realize in the later stage. The writer's ability still needs to be improved, but try slowly. Ability is gradually developed. Come on, after all, you wiped it out at the beginning and I saw that it disappeared after the report reached 10,000. Alas, it means that your setting will be contradictory and the logic is not very clear.

A book that suits my taste very well. The protagonist does not kill innocent people indiscriminately, and he kills his enemies whenever he deserves. However, with the addition of new characters, there are people who are immune to the protagonist's skills. Although they can still be killed instantly by the protagonist, some friends may not be able to accept this, but I think it's okay [shy]

It was quite boring at first, but then it became "Give It Love", "Minecraft Creation Mode", "Wild Cars", "Feeling for Wild Scraped Cars" and "I Want Revenge" Hahahahahaha, make trouble for me~ make trouble for me~ make trouble for me~ make trouble for me~

It is recommended to reveal a little more numerical value in front of others. For example, if my combat power is 530,000 [laughs] and it is higher than the protagonist, then change it to 120 million [laughs]

I still recommend [Explore][Like] Bad review! Although it was poor before, it was still updated well, but now it is dragging on.

It looks good, the details in some places are pretty good. It still feels like it's not fun, it's not fun enough

Very interesting plot, teleportation logistics and distribution hahaha

This kind of invincible writing is really beautiful. The setting is not very novel, but the writing is good. The key is that the protagonist is quite kind.

It's okay. The invincible novel is quite enjoyable, not too toxic.

Quite a good book

The subject matter is very new The protagonist thinks like a normal person. Have those people in the comment area read too much without thinking?

Super invincible and beautiful

There's not much to say. The main character is a normal person and not a super male with irritability. That's enough to give it five stars.

Try not to have any frustrating moments, it's still pretty good

I just wanted to see how long I watched it

I think it's okay. Invincible is just about doing whatever you want.

It's a pretty good piece of writing

It's quite nice, but I think the rating is low. After all, many abilities are not imaginative enough, so I can understand even if I can't do them.

Looks better than expected! The plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the characters' viewpoints are clear and three-dimensional. The more you read, the more you get hooked. Five-star praise, worth buying!

I've read Chapter 20. It's relaxing, casual, and invincible. It's very good. It's very relaxing to watch.