Transmigrating to the Great Tang: A Cyber Immortal Arrives at the Zhanxian Temple

The subject matter is good, it's an ancient pretending to be an immortal. Unfortunately, the author's writing style can't keep up. The sentences are a bit strange in some places, and the protagonist is very fond of explaining. All of his immortality suddenly disappeared [face covering]

I am the only one with a clear self-positioning. It doesn't accept disciples, nor does it lick its face and give out favors. It just scatters treasures randomly. Personally, it has a much better look and feel than novels of the same type. [Eat melon] The author's three views are also correct. There is no racial theory. He does not make up his mind at once and make up his mind to make all human beings ascend to immortality. He does not make a bunch of thankless things the main line. [Blowing kiss] But what the protagonist drew for Li Shimin should be a cake, right? It would be too yyy to unify the seven continents if it were not for the protagonist to open the heavenly gates with a sword and coerce them one by one... Not to mention whether the Tang Dynasty had the ability to go to sea and refer to other continents, even if the protagonist gave enlightenment help, as long as the technological gap was not so big that it would end the world, Li Shimin might not have conquered them all in his lifetime. [Laughing evilly] However, this protagonist is also someone who enjoys being informal and enjoys it. He is not the type who will really transform himself into a god after being cheated. He has a good relationship with others and may be too lazy to change friends in the end, but he will still help. [Learned] The concept that the protagonist has immortal descendants who will eventually explode the world shouldn't be taken too far. In fact, this point is easy to solve. The purpose of leaving behind is to continue the will. Immortal people don't need to continue. What the hell? To put it bluntly, many works and stories are mechanically adapted from the reality of ordinary people's concepts. Regardless of whether it is the king of gods or the king of the universe, they will continue to reproduce like the mother of an insect nest as long as they live as long as the world. Eternal rule, resistance, and then the dragon slayer becomes a dragon and so on. In short, I have never considered that the eternal person will not be born. [Eat melon] It's dead. The more I write, the more boring it becomes. It has also turned into a product article. The protagonist has opened a store to sell things, and there are all kinds of high-tech sales~

The author said that he would not lick the emperor, and indeed he has not licked him so far, but he is somewhat used to it. Fortunately, it was Li Shimin of the Tang Dynasty who had a fairly discerning eye, and was not Zhu Yuanzhang. The only bad thing is the little girl. She has written ten out of ten Tang Dynasty novels. I don't know how confident the author is. She thinks that what she writes can be more attractive than others. She blindly guesses that there will be Wu Fu in the back. After all, she is about the same age. I will lower it by one star when the time comes. [Thinking]

I read the latest 40 chapters in one go. For me, an old bookworm, except for a few awkward places, I can't find anything wrong with it. On the contrary, many settings can make my eyes shine. First of all, the identity of a true immortal is not used to prevent the plot from collapsing in the late ordinary ancient times. The fun points disappear and there is nothing to write about! Secondly, unlike some books, with the filter of the ancestors, you just confess that you are an ordinary person and give everything, which is too good. Even if the royal family is willing to peacefully coexist because of the benefits you can give, what about those aristocratic families who can turn people into candles at any time? What a big heart! What can be seen so far are Empress Changsun, Changle, and Xiaosizi who have not seen the pig's feet. It can be said that it feels a lot better and can be maintained. It is really regarded as the food of this fairy. It is worth reading.

I say it's good-looking, with more and faster updates. It's much better than those who write about national masters and immortals, and worry about this and that. It's just that they were discovered too early and there was too little content. Can you let Princess Jinyang speak normally and not feel cute, but it will affect reading, and listening to books is very bad for the senses? The author listened to the advice and has now changed it to normal speaking, and changed it back to five stars.

Come on, author I saw the comments given at the end of Chapter 18. I can read them. What's interesting to read is: the protagonist's skills are relatively versatile, and the author can operate them based on the items exchanged. The character design and restrictions set for the protagonist by the limited combat power explosion are very nice. What I can't stand is the poor description of the minor supporting characters. The writing feels like the two idiots and cunning supporting characters in Lin Zhengying's movies. It would be good to use any other movie or TV show as the background. Use Tang Dynasty as the background board, and create two or more characters from historical figures. I felt that many parts were unreasonable or I couldn't watch it if I didn't like it. If you want to see the protagonist liberate productivity and benefit the people, you don't need to watch it. The protagonist's lazy setting feels the same as the time traveler in the night. I feel that the author wants to change the novel into an AI short drama, and the AI ​​short drama is indeed interesting. For me, I really can't stand this novel.

You can read my historical reviews, most of them are two-star, because generally those who have read them in the past or are slightly toxic are too lazy to comment. I rarely come across a book that makes me feel that there are not many toxic points after reading it. It is a little bit toxic but not much. The most important thing is that the protagonist has a brain. In other novels, Li Shimin has a pseudonym and the protagonist cannot guess anything. This book deserves five stars just because the protagonist has a brain. I won't mention it later, but I'm just paying wages to a group of second-generation people. This group of people rushed to give it to Li Shimin, and the protagonist didn't say anything. He was frustrated to death by paying his subordinates wages to others.

It was good at first, but as soon as Li Mingda came out, he started to stretch his hips. I ran away, so I left a four star to encourage him [face covering]

Keep the current pace, don't lose your style, and take your time. This book will not be bad. Although it has minor flaws, it is considered a high-quality book of its kind. The protagonist's personality is okay, and the supporting characters are not too brainless. It's the author who needs to update it quickly.

I thought I would continue watching until the end, because her content and plot are indeed what I like to watch, but unfortunately I probably won't be able to stick to the end. The plot about her after Kabuto came out seemed too uncomfortable. Of course, it's not that the content is not good. On the contrary, the content is pretty good, and it is not a mess, but a little innovative. For this, I also gave a gift, but I don't know if it's because of the accent or the plot, but the latest content made me feel a little bored and irritable after watching it. I can only leave with regret, but I would like to congratulate the author on his getting better and better results. I once thought that I would know the end, but now I have to leave first. Maybe I will read a new book written by you in the future, and we will see you then.