I Rewrite the Plot and Monopolize the Beautiful, Strong and Miserable Villain Brother

He thought of Xia Yizhou, even though they have different personalities. Brother and sister are still so annoying. I really want to see my brother understand my feelings, and I really like this kind of love without knowing the pull now, which makes me feel [facepalm]. I watched it all night and couldn't stop at all. I didn't want to sleep until I caught up with the latest chapter. The brother and sister go in both directions, both have brains and love to watch. Don't be tired, don't take a break [shy]

It's very nice, but the emotional line is a bit slow, but the speed of the emotional line is okay. It's too fast, and I can't accept it🤦‍♀️ Anyway, it's very good to read. This book is highly recommended. I must give it a five-star rating! A must, five-star praise [send heart][send heart] Oops, it won't work anymore. I'm so angry that I'm going to have a heart attack! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry][angry] The male protagonist is not enlightened at all! The heroine is thoughtful and delicate, and she is afraid that her brother-sister relationship will not work out, and she is timid. When will they be able to achieve success? If it doesn't work, let the heroine find someone else to like. The male protagonist's assistant is pretty good. If they don't succeed, I'll be so angry! ! ! ! ! !

From a purely personal point of view, I can give it about 4 to 4.5 Stars based on rational judgment, both in terms of writing and plot. There is no supporting role that actually causes the heroine to be substantially harmed, but looking at the whole story, it is the male and female protagonists who cause each other more harm (psychologically) But I feel like I can't stand it anymore. I'm currently catching up on the latest chapter. The pulling feeling is very strong, but neither male or female protagonist has a long mouth. Even the confession in the latest chapter only said a few words, and didn't mention anything about the past. There was nothing that could really improve the relationship. It even worsened the relationship. Maybe I was too impatient... In short, I wish the author will write better and better, and this book will become popular as soon as possible [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

In fact, I have mixed feelings after seeing this, but I'll give it a five-star rating. Actually, I don't like people who don't have long mouths, because it makes me very irritated. But with this book, I was relieved, because the female protagonist couldn't express her feelings, but the male protagonist didn't take the initiative, and there was no opportunity to confess. It felt like the relationship between the two people could only be like this, slowly exhausting all their patience and emotions, and drifting apart. In fact, when I watched it, I really hoped that the heroine could leave. Now, whether good or bad, good or malicious, they are all shackles on her body. I hope she can no longer be trapped, I hope she can speak out bravely and leave bravely, speaking out so that she will not have any regrets, and leaving so that she will no longer have any regrets in the future. I hope she can have her own life.

Not bad. The female protagonist has been working hard to change the ending of the male protagonist's previous life. She also tried very hard in the early stage to make the male protagonist look at her, but she found that the male protagonist did not have that kind of thought towards her. She had a sensitive inferiority complex in her bones and the male protagonist's strong aura oppressed her. Transformed into protecting the male protagonist, I feel that the female protagonist is more realistic and the portrayal is very delicate. The male protagonist is okay, but he is too short-tongued, and his long mouth can sting people. He likes the female protagonist without knowing it. The part where he knows that the female protagonist likes him and changes to his age is really funny. The author's writing is fluent, the subject matter setting is very novel, and the plot is quite interesting. I really like the daily interactions and tension between the male and female protagonists. The supporting characters are also written in a more three-dimensional way. However, the introduction is so well written that I thought the female protagonist was very flirtatious and flirty. However, the female protagonist was a little bit shy. Neither of them had long words and the way they interacted with each other was also different. There is a bit of a problem. The male protagonist engages in cold violence and the female protagonist has to be coaxed. I can see the feeling of a sour secret love story. It is a bit torturous and the emotional line lacks transition. At first, I left him in the old house and sent someone to check the female protagonist. I thought they were not familiar with each other. Then I wrote that the male protagonist dotes on the female protagonist in this way. It is a bit sudden, but it is acceptable. Overall, it's quite interesting, and I'm looking forward to the subsequent plot development.

Hurry up and update it. Damn it! Why is it serialized? This book is so irritating. The pseudo-brother and sister recommended a sweet book called Jingye Wuyu. It has a short sour period, but it is nowhere near as high as this one.

Super pretty! It's really beautiful! ! If you like reading this book, it is a must-have delicacy [I learned it]. I loved it so much that while I was waiting for the update, there were some chapters that I particularly liked and revisited several times🤤… Comment 2: I saw a lot of dissatisfaction with the male protagonist, but I feel that the male protagonist created by the author is really good... As the older brother, the male protagonist really takes care of every aspect of Zhengzheng that he can think of. It's just that she is naive and inexperienced. She doesn't treat the heroine as a lover sister, she is just a sister. But in my opinion, this is the embodiment of being a good brother... Otherwise, the character design would be incomplete. How could he raise his sister as his love sister and say that this person is a good brother? Logic is contradictory Follow-up review 1: Oh, and it's been a blast this year. It's so cool. The author is so good at writing that it makes me dizzy. It's so delicious. The author's logic is also pretty solid. I like it. In short, I really like this book. ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧

I am a picky person when reading articles. I can't read long articles after halfway through them, and I feel like the process of short articles is a bit sloppy. I still insist on reading this book. It has a strong sense of pulling. I quite like reading it. I prefer to read Shaotian, which is sadistic in the middle. But the ending is terrible. I saw that the author's ratings dropped a lot, and I couldn't bear to let a good book fall, so I came here to rate it here. (Additional note: The little girl still didn't persevere, because the remaining 20 articles are relatively sweet, not abusive, but overall they look shocking and delicious)

I finished reading it in three days. To be honest, the writing was okay, because the setting is really nice, but it was a bit annoying that the brother and sister had no mouths in the early stage. After reading the author's remarks and updates, I also thank the author for finishing this article and giving them a good ending. There is actually a lot more The content is not explained clearly. I hope that a spin-off can be given with five-star reviews because of the setting and I like the male protagonist's forced love and distress. He was so pitiful in his previous life. I hope they can always be happy. Please update and improve the content. In fact, it is still possible. I hope that the five-star review will be used in exchange for the spin-off update.

It's really beautiful, but it made me so uncomfortable. It's so difficult for the heroine. When will the two of them face their emotions? ! ! Author, I beg you, give me a sweet plot, let the two of them talk about the misunderstanding, I really beg you [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Pay special attention to the fact that some people will not be able to stand it: in the early stage, my brother did not apologize for anything he did to Zheng Zheng. He almost refused if he didn't like Zheng Zheng, but in the later stage he took the initiative if he liked it. My brother is in charge of everything. I know this is because Zhengzheng's personality determines her passivity, but my brother doesn't do a good job. I personally care about the agreement signed by my brother and Zhengzheng, but later on there was no mention of how the agreement would be resolved, and Zhengzheng suffered a lot of grievances. It's more obvious. In the early stage, my brother always distrusted Zheng Zheng, but in the later period, he helped Zheng Zheng just because he wanted Zheng Zheng to become his girlfriend. So I don't think he is a qualified brother (of course there is an explanation in the book: because the brother cannot protect Zheng Zheng for a lifetime, he must make Zheng Zheng "good" and let Zheng Zheng "admit his mistakes") But my brother knew that Zheng Zheng had a sensitive personality and chose to treat her coldly, which was not appropriate. In the early stage, Zheng Zheng fought back because she was about to be harmed by Song, but was misunderstood by her brother as not learning well and framed others for no reason. The plot was not mentioned later in the article. In other words, it seemed that she had always misunderstood the incident at that time, which made me sad. The above are some not-so-good points in my opinion. My brother is a good person. He will also buy gifts for Zhengzheng (although he never tells Zhengzheng that he bought them), and he also treats Zhengzheng carefully (although he never tells Zhengzheng that he made them). Thinking about it this way, I never saw the puppy again. Maybe it's because it's too short. In short, the characters of brother and Zhengzheng determine that their relationship will definitely suffer setbacks. Generally speaking, it's not bad, but the female protagonist will feel wronged for Zhengzheng (that's what you call: my brother is happy, Zhengzheng is happy, and I'm not happy), but my personality is also very sensitive, which also makes me have excessive empathy, which determines that I will feel wronged for Zhengzheng.

So recommended! [Love] [Love] [Love] [Like] [Like] The male protagonist is more in line with the kind of wild, mature, uh, how should I put it? At that time, I was a bit like a daddy, very gentle, and had a very upright outlook. As for the heroine's plot, you might say, oh, why doesn't he recognize his own heart? Don't be in a hurry, don't be in a hurry, just look down slowly and it's actually not that far away. Even in the later stages, my brother will be a little bit cautious, and it's quite easy to beat this cp. If the score is out of 10, I can give him 100 points. I saw some people saying that this pull is very strong, and then they say this and that without opening their mouths. Then what I want to say here is that the heroine is a little injured, probably in his teenage years, and then he may be more sensitive than some sensitive people. I have a similar personality, but I also have some differences in my life. When I open my mouth, I feel that it is unnecessary to say it, or I just don't know how to say it, so I choose not to say it, and then I start to think about it on my own. Anyway, this is more realistic for me, and the author's writing style is also relatively deep for me. Finally, even the cover attracts me! ! [Blowing kiss]

Looking forward to the follow-up update, I hope it won't be unfinished. The low rating is probably because some people think that two people don't have long mouths, but in fact they can accept it. Although they don't have long mouths, they are all small contradictions. On the contrary, it looks more sour and heart-twitching [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] If you are tired of reading sweet stories and don't want to read too cruel, you can read this

I'm really looking forward to the following plot. Although some readers think the score is relatively low now, I think the key plot is still to come. I really want to know how the brother found out that he fell in love with his sister, and their subsequent love process [licking the screen]. I'm looking forward to the following plot. I hope the author will update it regularly [almost crying] [almost crying] Please keep writing! !

In fact, I think it's okay, but there is a push-and-pull part in the middle, and the male protagonist does not give the female protagonist an absolute sense of security. The female protagonist's feelings for the male protagonist are also quite sour. It can be said that neither of them opened their mouths. But overall, I think it is pretty good to watch it because I think this kind of push-and-pull is quite sour. This kind of feeling is quite beautiful. Some emotions can make people feel entangled, which can lead to conflicts.

I think it's normal to have no mouth. After all, I'm the same kind of person. I misunderstood and didn't speak or ask at the first time. I tried secretly and the other party didn't notice anything and said something casually. But I just wanted to abuse myself. The reality is that there are such mute people who can't speak. The heroine is much braver than me. I'm often afraid of shrinking. Now I have changed. There are many couples around me who have no mouth and then abuse both parties [face covering]

Do you have the ability to update seven or eight times a day😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭 This book is very beautiful, the emotions described are delicate and not abrupt, and the pull between the male and female protagonists is fascinating 😋😋😋The little sadist is happy. The male and female protagonists are well designed, and the setting of the male partner is novel. He and his sister Bao are both awakened. I look forward to the follow-up development, and the male and female partners are given full characters. The plot becomes interesting starting from the male partner's strategy, and people are looking forward to how he will interact with the female protagonist. I also hope that the male protagonist's character will be more fleshed out, making people want to know if there is anything else that makes my sister's heart beat apart from being her safe haven. In addition, the younger sister is also very attractive when she focuses on her studies and wants to be fair. I hope the article will show more of the shining charm of the younger sister, whether it is academic, or in character, or the male protagonist sees the shortcomings of the younger sister but still finds it attractive. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the boss continuing to write! Regardless of whether it's good or bad, I'm very happy that Boss can finish this book! !

The plot is not complete enough, and the ending feels a bit hasty, but it is really good. I feel that the author is very delicate in writing about emotions, and the heroine is very real when she is afraid of being left behind. However, I still don't recommend it if you want a refreshing or sweet story. This book is a bit sour in the early and middle stages, suitable for reading emo in the middle of the night, and is generally recommended.

Very nice. To be honest, don't you click on this kind of article just to see extreme stretching and feel the sourness like self-abuse? In this regard, one author is better than three. I enjoyed watching it, and the transformation of the female protagonist and the transformation of the male protagonist in the end were both so enjoyable. I enjoyed watching it. If you like reading sour stories, you can read it. I just like Hate Hai Qingtian.

It's very beautiful, but the emotional line is relatively slow, but I feel it's normal. In real life, relationships tend to heat up slowly. It's very beautiful, very cute, and the description of the heroine is very delicate. The same goes for the male protagonist. Well, I just hope that the male protagonist can fall in love with the heroine earlier. He should have always liked the heroine, but I don't know what that kind of feeling is called. Anyway, I support it, it's very beautiful, I support it, I must support it.

Overall, it's pretty good. Some people may feel that they are mentally depressed and can't get out of their mouths, but it doesn't matter. I like this feeling of a little throbbing heart, and the image of the male and female protagonists is quite good, with flesh and blood. I think it deserves 8 points. This score is still too low. Is it a bit suppressed by others? Although the ending is a bit rushed, overall both the writing and the plot are OK, and the image is full. The author is very good at persevering. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

The pulling feeling is so strong, it would be a pity not to have a mouth [cover face][cover face]

I haven't seen them together yet. The early stage is pure sour literature. There are many misunderstandings but I really can't hate it. From the perspective of both of them, it is actually correct. There are some words that cannot be said and cannot be said. Anyway, the heart is sour and uncomfortable, but the feelings are really written very delicately.

I don't really like reading stories where the male and female protagonists don't open their mouths, but the feature of this one is that the feeling of pulling without opening the mouths is very strong. It was very refreshing to see me, and the brother has not realized that his possessiveness towards his sister is the emotion between lovers. I can't stop [laughing]

Baby Yu Zheng is very cute. Her personality is not that of a sun-kissed person, but a sensitive and pitiful one. I really like watching this kind of sour and sour plot. The author, please give me a lot of encouragement for writing haha ​​[Love]

I didn't read the comments before reading this article. To be honest, if I had read the comments in advance, I might not have clicked to read it. Mainly, I really don't accept the setting of "the protagonist doesn't have a mouth". But after reading the text directly, I didn't feel that it was as serious as the comments said. The author's writing style is very good, the male and female protagonists' behavioral logic is complete and self-consistent, and the supporting characters are also very lively and interesting. In addition, the sisters in the comment area are all very interesting. I almost followed it with a fun-loving mentality, so I don't think it is a big flaw that the male and female protagonists do not have long mouths. This is a more realistic brother-sister article. The male protagonist does initially only care about the female protagonist as his sister, and the female protagonist's early wishful thinking of a secret love is bound to bring pain, so I don't think this is a sadistic or abusive novel. After all, when you persistently expect an emotional response that the other party cannot give, the sadness and pain caused by the emotional gap is a normal occurrence, and the emotional expression of the characters is very reasonable. In terms of personality, the heroine has a low self-esteem. She has been bullied and ignored by others for a long time from childhood to college. Only by staying with the hero can she avoid being hurt. The male protagonist initially underestimated the meanness and viciousness of the relatives around him, but after learning the truth, he immediately protected the female protagonist under his wing. On the material level, he is complete and considerate to the heroine, and he takes care of her in every possible way. But emotionally, he cannot give the heroine the love she wants in the early stage, so she was misunderstood and sad for a time. However, in the later stages of the novel, after recognizing their true feelings, the two slowly get along, and in the process of breaking away from the plot of the original novel, things are not always smooth sailing for people. And although the heroine is easily confused and loses her IQ in front of the hero due to her secret crush and inferiority complex, her IQ is still very high in front of other people. She calculates others' tricks. Personally, I think this is also a kind of dual strength, which is quite satisfying. Although the plot always strangely turns back to the original point, the results are still being changed and the fate is still being saved. All in all, I personally had a good experience reading it, and I don't think this book only deserves a score of 6.6. I am very grateful to the author for still writing the entire story completely despite the pressure of low ratings. I will reward you for this~ p. S. I feel that based on the author's writing style, you can actually try a certain green platform. The reading atmosphere there may be more tolerant. On the red platform, it is true that cool stories with big heroines or mindless sweet stories are more likely to be popular. After all, there is a joke that "you can read it as soon as you lose your brain." Obviously, they don't like logic and only talk about sweetness hhhh But what can I say, I feel like I am getting older, so I prefer this kind of sour and logical emotional drama. I have read too many mindless sweet stories in which the male protagonist seems to have been possessed by love, and is born to put the female protagonist first in everything. Now I like this kind of emotional line with motivation and behavioral logic~ Keep up the good work, author, I like your article [sending my heart] [blowing kiss]

Although I don't open my mouth, I love this tugging feeling so much [shy] Objectively speaking, seeing one misunderstanding after another is a bit heartbreaking, but subjectively it just pokes at me, my wife loves it so much, and I'm itching to wait for the update after the tie [almost cried] [crying] I really hope it can be finished in one go, hahaha, I like it so much (Die Jia, I understand that some people will be like this, but this book inexplicably hit me [admiration])

Very nice! ! Why is the rating so low? [Crying] I feel a little chilled when I see that Da Da may update regularly. [Petrochemical]

I may have some McDonald's attributes in me, so I usually like to look at things like this that make my heart twitch.

Please don't stop updating! ! I will come every day! !