Young Lord, I Want to Be the Chief Shadow Guard

There are really too many typos, very many, and there are some problems with the writing. For example, if you write "know" instead of "don't know", don't you think it's strange? Don't you think the meaning expressed is reversed? Not counting this, I think it's pretty good so far, but it's also a bit off-putting, and it's hard to comment. It's obvious that I feel like this person is very annoying. It's rare that he even hates the protagonist. Some of his actions and words shocked me to death. The protagonist's attack is really a bit weak. Maybe it's because he wants to create a character with both advantages and disadvantages, but I see a lot of shortcomings so far. It's just annoying, you know 🫤 After reading it, the later part is much better, and the spelling is correct. What was written in the front is Shen Fei? Is it a bit cruel? I don't like the bad ending. Why is no one commenting? Can be seen