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The writing is very smooth. There are no major flaws so far. The heroine is now a bit crazy and ruthless. Lone Wolf is particularly good. I love it! But I don't understand what the author wants to write. I feel that the connection between the dungeons is just average. There are no transitional chapters in the middle. The world view background is relatively thin so far. Although some camp confrontations can be seen when talking about hell, it doesn't feel like it has anything to do with the heroine! Although there are plots such as dragging Angel to hell and agreeing to throw a feather to the master craftsman, the conflict with the opponent is not reflected at all. The heroine's motivation for each action is not very clear. It is always revealed after the dungeon has been developed for a period of time. Well, I am very picky about game invasion requirements. This book can currently be given to NPCs. I look forward to the next article!

Very nice! ! ! The heroine is great, the plot and writing are very good, but why hasn't the author updated it in a few days? Why? Don't want your lovely readers anymore? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It's logical. The protagonist has a brain, but the identity of his family is not explained before a new foreshadowing begins. Overall, it's quite interesting. It's logical. I hope you won't give up. If the plot develops as it is now, as long as we don't abandon the story, I feel it will be popular. [Blowing kiss]

Very nice, cheers author

It's beautiful, cheers [blowing kiss]

Very good, the heroine does not act objectively. Except for the attention of her relatives and friends, she is indifferent to other people and is not soft-hearted.

Great book! I found a book that caught my eye and I read it in one go. It's very good! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]