Brother, Is This Appropriate? !

It looks pretty good now, but I still think it would be better to have both sisters. It may be more consistent with the character of the previous sister. Moreover, the previous sister was kissing a stranger in the cinema. It is indeed a bit hard to understand [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

Single girl or multiple girls, why are you ambiguous with your sister?

It's a bit awesome. I just stopped at chapter 18 last time, and a big job happened in chapter 19. I see that you have changed it, but Chapter 21 has not been changed yet. I'll give you 6 points. I saw your previous changes in the comments. Having written 54 novels, I will not avoid such surprises. I'm not optimistic about the content behind you. If there is only one heroine, don't randomly add supporting characters, and if there are multiple heroines, don't make trouble. The role of sister is now useless. I really don't understand whether you want to write a story with two female protagonists or a single female protagonist. It's really tiring to read.

The theme of lovers eventually becoming brothers and sisters is quite interesting and interesting.

I also envy the male protagonist and the sweet single female protagonist [note]

Xiaodu is not considered poisonous, but... I want both sisters, thank you

It's nice to look at, but can you give more details about what you have to eat?

Come on, come on, come on, it's so easy to write

Lovers in the world will eventually become brothers and sisters

Is it a single heroine? No sister? [Think]