The Student Council President of Canterlot High

The 111 President is so charming🥰The President who works hard🥺is a very hard-working model worker😇. . . What does this guy look like😢? Is there any fangirl who can draw a picture🤤? I am fully waiting for the Baiyu dance party🥳... Very delicious🤩, and the writing is good👍🏻. I am currently eating coffee

The emotional description is very delicate, and the president's writing is very good. Now all Kangao students immediately shouted: The president's kindness is not over yet~~ The plot is also very interesting. But I hope the president will have fewer love lines, and it must be non-CP! Wc, someone in the world can actually write such an awesome president. The character of the president is so vivid and complex, so good. Thousands of words can only be summed up into one sentence: The author is awesome, Baiyu is awesome.

If you keep it up, it should become one of Tomato's best little stories. As long as you don't fall into a strange harem cycle and the heroine just lets nature take its course. The problem is that Equestria Girls was cut in half and only a few events were written and then it was gone. Just like the detective book, I felt like it was dead by the end of the writing. The updates were slow and it was still being written down. Instead of struggling to come up with something original, why not just go into the Parallel World (Black Tong)/Equestria Exploration chapter. Sure enough, the destination of urban literature is to become a god (sigh) Finally back! Pony God (

Even though the world is in tatters, there are still some people who are mending things. Compared with the bright and cheerful background of other pony fanfiction, this book is actually a bit gray. The president basically works all year round and shelters Kangao students from the wind and rain. The reason is because he wants to repay the warmth given by Principal Celestia. Therefore, from my perspective, the president is a person who lights up the earth after receiving the warmth, which highlights the warmth in the cold gray tone. This contrast makes me more attracted to read.

Come on, come on, come on, it's a very good book about girls in Equestria. The protagonist feels like she really worked hard and died [laughing]

There is no moisture in this rating. To put it bluntly, in some respects, I think this book's score should be higher than the one with 9.5 (The Unlucky Detective of Kangao). The writing is really great, very attentive, really attentive, especially Bai Yu's character. After reading it, you will shout that the president's kindness is not over, it's really great, and most importantly What's more, he probably doesn't have many female protagonists. Every emotional line, every touch, and every heartbeat he writes has a source. Especially the heart-stirring article about Zhenqi is really charming, so charming. Every time I read that chapter, I feel moved. The writing is so charming. The character of the protagonist is really carefully laid out and conceived. It's great.

After watching it for so long, it's time to evaluate it. It's very good. The president is a typical person who repays kindness with drops of water. Whether it is for the students of the school or Principal Celestia, I think he has achieved the best. In fact, the school has become better and better since he took office, but he seems to be pushing himself too hard at the moment. The bigger reason is that he believes that working hard is the reason for his existence, so he must continue to work even if he has to drink coffee every day or even if he is sick. The article is more on the dark side, but it's not particularly dark, it's just compared to the original movie, and it has Derpy in his heyday. I think it's well worth watching. It's great. I finally saw that the president destroyed the portal. Everyone thought that I (Sunset Shimmer) originally wanted to find a home in Equestria, but ended up losing my place. I wanted to go back to find the president, but the portal has been destroyed. Can I still not collapse?

At first, I didn't have much interest in reading the cover, but there are only so many Equestria fandoms. Once I got into it, I really found a treasure. The dialogue between the characters was really delicate. The president's character also touched my heart deeply. The writing style made me want to read more. According to Pinkie Pie, it's like honey water. The sweetness flowed into my stomach, (I want to see Bai Yu fall into a vicious trap after the pressure reaches the limit, and then be fed a rainbow cannon, and he collapses on the ground pretending to be strong, but his eye sockets become red, his pupils dilate, and his face looks broken, and he is looking at his hands and mouth where he did something wrong!!!) Ahem, what am I talking about! ! No! I am a mediocre pawn of the President, and the kindness of the President is not over [crying][crying][crying]

Writing a character three-dimensionally and vividly requires 1. A complete set of three-layered personality (appearance → behavior → inner obsession) 2. Self-contradictory personality, coexistence of advantages and disadvantages 3. Don't rely on narration, use actions, dialogue, details, and other people's perspectives to show 4. Have a complete growth arc and experience changes and struggles. 5. Unique and iconic memory symbols 6. Emotions are intertwined at multiple levels and conform to the psychological logic of normal people. And President Bai Yu is a rare campus leader who is not suspended or stereotyped: he has a perfect external persona, but he is full of exhaustion and self-stretching; selfless giving is not a born saint, but an obsession stemming from the lack of love in the past; under the strong and reliable shell, there is a fragility that dare not show weakness. The author did not write a simple, gentle and good person, with shortcomings, internal friction, and clear growth, as if we are experiencing his life, which reminds me of the blessings in life. After reading the author's previous works, I found that Bai Yu's creation was not groundless. He began to highlight his obsession as early as in the Chess Soul fanfiction, and then added inner opposition in the ruthless path. Finally, everything was perfected and sublimated in the My Little Pony fanfic. In addition, the novel is an extension of the author's thinking. If it is not to get rid of the protagonist style of the general Internet literature, then it may be to pin the character dilemma of one's own empathy on the protagonist. Of course, it may also be just for the sake of literature and art, because such a protagonist is born with multi-layered personality contradictions, is most prone to multiple types of conflicts, and is also the easiest for readers to empathize with.

Not bad, although there are many shortcomings as a new author. But the perspective of the story is novel. If it continues to improve and progress in the future, I believe it will be an interesting little novel. Recommended Seeing now, I feel that the main heroine can be blurred and have an open ending. If you like to watch a single heroine or multiple heroines, it is at least acceptable. The IF line is clearly refined [eating melon]