Canterlot High School Student Body President

The 111 President is so charming🥰The President who works hard🥺is a very hard-working model worker😇. . . What does this guy look like😢? Is there any fangirl who can draw a picture🤤? I am fully waiting for the Baiyu dance party🥳... Very delicious🤩, and the writing is good👍🏻. I am currently eating coffee

The emotional description is very delicate, and the president's writing is very good. Now all Kangao students immediately shouted: The president's kindness is not over yet~~ The plot is also very interesting. But I hope the president will have fewer love lines, and it must be non-CP! Wc, someone in the world can actually write such an awesome president. The character of the president is so vivid and complex, so good. Thousands of words can only be summed up into one sentence: The author is awesome, Baiyu is awesome.

If you keep it up, it should become one of Tomato's best little stories. As long as you don't fall into a strange harem cycle and the heroine just lets nature take its course. The problem is that Equestria Girls was cut in half and only a few events were written and then it was gone. Just like the detective book, I felt like it was dead by the end of the writing. The updates were slow and it was still being written down. Instead of struggling to come up with something original, why not just go into the Parallel World (Black Tong)/Equestria Exploration chapter. Sure enough, the destination of urban literature is to become a god (sigh) Finally back! Pony God (

Even though the world is in tatters, there are still some people who are mending things. Compared with the bright and cheerful background of other pony fanfiction, this book is actually a bit gray. The president basically works all year round and shelters Kangao students from the wind and rain. The reason is because he wants to repay the warmth given by Principal Celestia. Therefore, from my perspective, the president is a person who lights up the earth after receiving the warmth, which highlights the warmth in the cold gray tone. This contrast makes me more attracted to read.

Come on, come on, come on, it's a very good book about girls in Equestria. The protagonist feels like she really worked hard and died [laughing]

After watching it for so long, it's time to evaluate it. It's very good. The president is a typical person who repays kindness with drops of water. Whether it is for the students of the school or Principal Celestia, I think he has achieved the best. In fact, the school has become better and better since he took office, but he seems to be pushing himself too hard at the moment. The bigger reason is that he believes that working hard is the reason for his existence, so he must continue to work even if he has to drink coffee every day or even if he is sick. The article is more on the dark side, but it's not particularly dark, it's just compared to the original movie, and it has Derpy in his heyday. I think it's well worth watching. It's great. I finally saw that the president destroyed the portal. Everyone thought that I (Sunset Shimmer) originally wanted to find a home in Equestria, but ended up losing my place. I wanted to go back to find the president, but the portal has been destroyed. Can I still not collapse?

At first, I didn't have much interest in reading the cover, but there are only so many Equestria fandoms. Once I got into it, I really found a treasure. The dialogue between the characters was really delicate. The president's character also touched my heart deeply. The writing style made me want to read more. According to Pinkie Pie, it's like honey water. The sweetness flowed into my stomach, (I want to see Bai Yu fall into a vicious trap after the pressure reaches the limit, and then be fed a rainbow cannon, and he collapses on the ground pretending to be strong, but his eye sockets become red, his pupils dilate, and his face looks broken, and he is looking at his hands and mouth where he did something wrong!!!) Ahem, what am I talking about! ! No! I am a mediocre pawn of the President, and the kindness of the President is not over [crying][crying][crying]

Not bad, although there are many shortcomings as a new author. But the perspective of the story is novel. If it continues to improve and progress in the future, I believe it will be an interesting little novel. Recommended Seeing now, I feel that the main heroine can be blurred and have an open ending. If you like to watch a single heroine or multiple heroines, it is at least acceptable. The IF line is clearly refined [eating melon]

Writing a character three-dimensionally and vividly requires 1. A complete set of three-layered personality (appearance → behavior → inner obsession) 2. Self-contradictory personality, coexistence of advantages and disadvantages 3. Don't rely on narration, use actions, dialogue, details, and other people's perspectives to show 4. Have a complete growth arc and experience changes and struggles. 5. Unique and iconic memory symbols 6. Emotions are intertwined at multiple levels and conform to the psychological logic of normal people. And President Bai Yu is a rare campus leader who is not suspended or stereotyped: he has a perfect external persona, but he is full of exhaustion and self-stretching; selfless giving is not a born saint, but an obsession stemming from the lack of love in the past; under the strong and reliable shell, there is a fragility that dare not show weakness. The author did not write a simple, gentle and good person, with shortcomings, internal friction, and clear growth, as if we are experiencing his life, which reminds me of the blessings in life. After reading the author's previous works, I found that Bai Yu's creation was not groundless. He began to highlight his obsession as early as in the Chess Soul fanfiction, and then added inner opposition in the ruthless path. Finally, everything was perfected and sublimated in the My Little Pony fanfic. In addition, the novel is an extension of the author's thinking. If it is not to get rid of the protagonist style of the general Internet literature, then it may be to pin the character dilemma of one's own empathy on the protagonist. Of course, it may also be just for the sake of literature and art, because such a protagonist is born with multi-layered personality contradictions, is most prone to multiple types of conflicts, and is also the easiest for readers to empathize with.

There is no moisture in this rating. To put it bluntly, in some respects, I think this book's score should be higher than the one with 9.5 (The Unlucky Detective of Kangao). The writing is really great, very attentive, really attentive, especially Bai Yu's character. After reading it, you will shout that the president's kindness is not over, it's really great, and most importantly What's more, he probably doesn't have many female protagonists. Every emotional line, every touch, and every heartbeat he writes has a source. Especially the heart-stirring article about Zhenqi is really charming, so charming. Every time I read that chapter, I feel moved. The writing is so charming. The character of the protagonist is really carefully laid out and conceived. It's great.

Super Invincible is very good-looking and well-written. The characters are perfectly created, and the story line is also very good, and it is truly interlocking. Moreover, the author's writing style is also very good and delicate. Once you enter a certain plot, you will feel very happy and can't stop reading. And the girls are not inexplicably falling in love with the protagonist for no reason, and there are no strange descriptions of the girls, and their psychological thoughts are even well and delicately written. And it can be seen that the author should have carefully figured out each character's experience, personality, and deep thoughts, and then used the protagonist's analysis to show it to the readers. The author should also be a delicate person, so he was able to write this and this article is so delicate. It's a group portrait, everyone has a highlight, and there are other people involved in the highlight. The story design is also very reasonable and logical, not whimsical, and even many storylines echo back and forth. I will give the No. 1 Evaluation of the Pony article I have read [blowing kiss]!

But there must be no cp - (Also, I hope not to dismantle Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Rouge and Discord. The rest I think it is natural to like the protagonist, it is simply from the succubus) Main text CB Dafa, the main text must not write love lines (two-way), the friendship of all members is the best Okay, okay, the author wrote it very well. The characterization captures the soul of the character. It's rare for a protagonist to be the kind of person whose charm can be felt rather than being one-sided in a few words.

Very good, very happy for me! It has the taste of an adult and the innocence of a child! I like the president the most. Loyalty!

It's so beautiful, the writing is good, and the character of the protagonist is also very in line with my taste. This is simply the best book I've ever seen among My Little Pony books. I just hope that the author will not stop updating, and can the protagonist not add CP, because I think if CP is added, the character may be a little bit OOC. Of course, this is just my own opinion. The final plot depends on the author. I am here to hope that the author will not interrupt updates and not add CP to the protagonist. Because I think this protagonist is very complete in all aspects of his character and so on, so I think adding CP is just superfluous. Of course, this is just my own personal opinion. I hope you don't scold me [laughs]

I like this kind of subject so much, "Yes, Princess", high school detective Cary, it's a good thing to have new people, what if I said that if Bai Yu draws blood, will he draw coffee [laughs]

The author's protagonist is so adorable that you will love him to death Σ＞―(灬⁺д⁺灬)♡―――＞The story angle is very novel. Very good. Raise the flag for the author! ! ! Hope this book gets better and better. Come on, author. I think it has great potential. I admire you, I admire you~ But please don't interrupt the update or make it unfinished! (´இωஇ｀)

Very good writing. The first ten pictures complete the character of the protagonist. The content written in the following is also very real. He is realistic and tolerant, has the ability to solve problems, and has equal empathy for others. I like this protagonist very much.

I like this book👍🏻The original characters are restored, the plot advances smoothly, the background fits the reality of American universities, and it also deepens many social discussions. It will not give people the boring feeling of watching a single daily unit drama, but will make people feel the growth of the protagonist and other characters and the prosperity of Canterlot High School. At the same time, the writing style is also very humorous and fluent, and language jokes are naturally inserted in many places, making it a good feeling to read. What I don't like personally is that in some chapters, the protagonist's internal conflict is too serious, which somewhat affects the viewing experience. But looking at a large number of chapters, the psychological description of the protagonist is still reasonable.

It's really well written. I'll open the champagne first. If you have wine today, you'll get drunk today. The main reason is that I haven't seen Xiao Ma's novels finish normally, but I will still be happy because of this interesting story.

The protagonist serves as the student council president at Canterlot High School. He is not a common fan who traveled to Equestria and became a horse. Moreover, the protagonist manages the school seriously and responsibly, has three correct views, has empathy, responsibility and self-confidence. It's not about word count and plot, it's about doing real things. He is a talent who would not feel out of place even if he is a special assistant or a butler to a domineering president.

A very good Equestria Girls story. The quality should be one of the best in the genre. The narrative rhythm and character description are well grasped. However, I don't know how to connect the plot of Equestria with the current plot. I hope it won't be a poisonous plot such as Sunset's forced blackening. At present, it seems that there are no other shortcomings except that the author is too slow to update and it is not enough to read. Five-star praise. I hope the author will continue to update.

It's over! How could I see something so delicious before it was finished! ! ! ! The president is simply perfect! In terms of reform, he didn't care what the students thought, whether it was pleading or insulting. He was a tyrant who focused on efficiency, was extremely emotionally restrained, very strict in logic, and was inhumane. But in daily life, he is so considerate, gentle and humble, and sincerely considers every student. He is a president who is loved by all his classmates and liked by everyone. As for his ruthlessness, please, it's just a disguise the president has to make, isn't it? ! The president should be a little arrogant! He is divided! What's wrong with him! ! It's just that I hate magic! ! Such a lovely president! ! !

It's quite interesting. Unlike other humanities, this one mainly looks at reality from a realistic perspective and a human perspective. I can only sigh, if only the student council president in the school could be as responsible as Bai Yu. (Former students: Reading for the rise of China) (Today's students: The student union is a tool for the school and teachers to express their will)

According to me, this has to be a good Equestria Girls fanfic. 🌟Although the plot has been greatly changed, it can be felt that the author did not make the original plot characters OOC (this must have taken a lot of effort). He is Bai Yu, the president of Kangao Student Union. It tells us many stories about how he, who was the president before the original plot, helped the students of Kangao and let them pursue their dreams (Emm, it's an original story anyway^_^); ——————Off-topic: At present, around chapter 127, we have entered the main line of the original work. I am looking forward to how the author will rewrite this story in the future (if it is too difficult to write well, I will maintain a respectful attitude. It is very difficult to write a story well. As an author before, I gave up my novel because I could not rewrite the story, so no matter what, I will always support my boss!) 🫡 🌟President Bai is really a good character (I really like the portrayal of President Bai). He devotes himself wholeheartedly to Kangao. He treats everyone in Kangao gently and is also very reliable. He is simply the president of the people. However, the novel will also write about President Bai's shortcomings, increased pressure on himself, a little arrogance hidden under the gentle appearance, and pessimistic thoughts, which make President Baiyu's image more three-dimensional; 🌟At the same time, the author's writing style is very excellent, which makes people shine in the complex novel circle (people say, if you like it, you will be addicted after reading it, I have been addicted to this novel ovo), and you can clearly feel the author's progress while reading (boss, we love you!), It can be regarded as a growth work, I believe that the subsequent plot will become more and more exciting (off-topic: reminder... I want to read the president) 😔 (Even if the update speed may slow down due to other reasons, the waiting process is very painful, but if I am interested in a book about My Little Pony Equestria Girls, I will still recommend it) However, there are many emotional lines between President Bai and other people in the original plot, but as of now, there is no cp (except for the extras) (Emm, I don't know what to say, anyway, it's fun to watch. If you have other ideas, I will tell you: 3)

Madam, madam, you are charming! Do you have Kangao Succubus? I hope it won't lose its combat power in the later stage. If it is positioned as a management think tank, there is no point in stacking magic spells randomly. Although I really want to watch "Pluck the Stars with One Hand", the setting of "Sick Beauty" pricks me a little more. The heavy girl reverse push is the best!

It's very interesting to watch. I like the male protagonist's character who is both capable and sad. The transformation of the senior sister is also very natural. I look forward to watching the future plots.

Personally, I think the plot is very smooth and the daily writing is quite good. The branch plots of each Gu Liang are also very good. However, each Gu Liang will inevitably be downplayed after the minor branch plot ends, so as not to occupy the space of the subsequent characters, but it is still acceptable.

Kind people should be respected and loved, responsible people should be loved, and such a lovely president should accept all good endings. And the author, I beg you to update it faster, it's best to update it hard before I finish the second time😠🫡🫡🫡🫡

The writing is very good, I like it very much. If Hui Qi's emotional line can be added to the main line (if it is a single heroine, it will be Hui Qi, and if there are multiple heroines, he should also have his share), I will like it even more [Sending Hearts] I think Hui Qi understands the protagonist the best among the existing characters, and I feel that the protagonist also has certain feelings for Hui Qi (between a man and a woman). The personalities of this pair are also more suitable. In my eyes, this is simply a match made in heaven! [Blowing kiss] Note: Personal opinion, don't criticize me if you don't like it (if you think you have other opinions, you can bring them up, but forget it if you scold me [sending my heart])

The author's writing style is really good, and it feels like you are on the scene. The dialogue between the characters is really real. The feeling of sadness and despair of Sunset Shimmer has overflowed from the text, and it even made me want to cry. Maybe I am too emotional. The shortcoming is that there are too few words. I can't read enough, Mr. President! ! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]